SS:Wo Humsafar Hai.up.pg.13 ...15 aug - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
Really nice. Write more.πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 11 years ago
Aww, it was awesome..poor them they are feeling akward with eachother but its okay as they'll be fine later ;)
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
aww very beautifully written part 1 liking alottt
hope everything will be fine on them soon...

waiting for next one :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
Kamoshi continue pleasec:) Its amazing! Lobed the prolougue and part 1 πŸ˜³
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Posted: 11 years ago
super duper πŸ˜›
update next part soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved it yaar.
Yeah u very well amnaged to keep their magic. It was as if I was watching Hamsafra agian. The next part.
Same innocent khirad and caring asher. Hope their trust will be again back. πŸ‘
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome dear update soon and add me to ur pm list...
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Posted: 11 years ago
^^Me too!

I don't remember if I commented, anyway Please Continue Soon! πŸ˜³
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Posted: 11 years ago

AWW Thank You SO much guys for so much warm response <3 <3 Loved Your Comments <3 <3 I hope you liked this too <3 <3 leave coments thank you!!

PART TWO
Her sleep got distrubed..She got up with slight jerk..looked arroung in darkness..in few seconds..she was able to see in darkness..n she realized Ashar was not next to Hareem..She got scared to death..feeling difficult to breath...she got up carefully not disturbing hareem...n walked out of room ...her eyes searched of him only...

And At last she heard some noise of sobbing...Her ears got attentive...n her eyes widened...the fact of realization was not good indeed...as she walked towards pool side...n she went in deep shock when saw him sitting near pool shedding tears...she get support of door at behind...which caused a but disturbance making him to look at back...n he got puzzled...quickly wiped off his tears...n turned face away to avoid looking at her...

KHIRAD:Ashar Ap yahan kia ker rahe hain??

But as heard her steps...he turned getting up from place...he get unbalanced...n his hand in way to held anything...get in contact with her hand...she was helding it...giving him support to stand..their eyes meet up...n both could seen mist in seeing each other due to  tears in their eyes...

Both recalled the past...When She had left the room to cry for her mother n how ashar get to know about this...he took her back in their room stating it as her room too...for being herself...

How can she foget it...Yes memories had been old now but still had the same charm in themselves as their relationship had once...

Her warm touch ... his cold hand was sinking into her warm palm...

Holding her he felt himself as that lucky person who get water while dying in desert of thirst...

Why she was there...it was unknown to herself...only thing she knew her heart can't see him in pain...n tears...his tears had stabbed her heart hardly...

He had felt himself the most unluckiest few minutes ago..cursing every moment for acting like a jerk...on being an cruel Lover n more ir-responisble husband...mistrusting her wife...for not being a good father...he was unlickest though...but may be the most blessed to be with pious n most loveable wife..

Feeling Depressed n getting someone supportive...was indeed something beyond expressable happiness...n contentment...

Taking steps towards their room they felt that being with each other had been written for the whole life...

Forgiving n FOrgetting..She may had forgave him but unable to foget all that...he may had forgot all but unable to forgive himself...

Sun shone on sky...remind them of hope...

She turned after putting off curtains n could see him waking up ...looking at his sunshine...

Hoping for better today n best tomorrow...

It was first day for their daughter...to wake up her in early morning had become a bit difficult for them as being father s darling she had developed of sleeping late waiting for her dear dady n getting up late to have breakfast from loving mom in bed...

Khirad:Hareem beta utho na...dekhein subha ho gae hai...Aj tu apney school jana hai na..wahan ap new friends banao ge...aur...

Khirad sitting beside her daughter tried to make her wake up...Where Ashar kept lookng at their daughter n also stealing glances at Khirad...

HAREM:mama mjhey sona hai plzz..soney do na...

Hareem said in her sleepy tone n tunred hiddng herself in her father s chest...Asher couldnt control his smile on her adorable way n took her in his arms..looked at khirad who made a sad face complaning him for being extra loving...he gave her a look ... n then get attentive to their daughter...

Hareem felt him creasing his hairs lovingly  n whispering in her ears...

Ashar:Hareem plz get up na or ur mom wil not gona let us watch cartoon n listen bedtime stories Please For Your Daddy My Baby...

Khirad could listen his whispers...n she could not help in smiling as heard their daughter replies...

Hareem:papa phir hum dinner pe bhe jaein gey na pleaseee.. aur ice cream chocolates bhe chahye Tab hareem uthey ge...


Ashar:GOd hareem tm bohat tez ho ...ise lea ni uth rahe the na...

Ashar started trickling around her stomach as she started laughing aloud...n khirad s laughter too included in atmosphere...Ashar stole glance at khirad...n seeing smile from her heart  at her face reaching to her eyes...he felt the life alive... as she got up n moved to wardrobe to take out ashar n harem s dresses...

Khirad:Ashar Hareem Ap log uth jaein warna ap dono late ho jaein gey...

Hareem n Ashar replied in union...Yes Mama...

Khirad smiles at them...
Precape:

Candle Night Dinner <3

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Posted: 11 years ago
utter cute πŸ˜Š
thanks for the pm
loved hareem,s tacticsπŸ˜‰