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Posted: 11 years ago

oye Ek hi part dobara kyu post kiya lallu...hehehe
it was nice I hate shanky too
and I feel Koi mistry h armaan is alive
hai nai update soon

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Posted: 11 years ago

U've reposted the part dear.
I've already commented on this part.
I feel that Armaan is alive and has went away somewhere.

Plz add me to ur pm list and kindly update the next part soon.
Take care!

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Sunita Tandel

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Posted: 11 years ago

Superb update!
I have dis feeling dat Armaan is alive!
Cont soon
thnx 4 pm

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Aayushi

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Posted: 11 years ago

part 10

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ridhima-tumhe uthna hoga armaan tumhe aapni ridhima ke liya uthna hoga .. apne baby ke liya uthna hoga... samjhe tum...

and ridhima place armaan's hand on her stomach...

and baby kicked first tym feeling this Safest touch.

ridhima - aauch..

armaan unconsious - ri... ridh...ridhima...

ridhima - hain armaan...mein yahin hun..

armaan - ridhima mein... mein... maf ...aapa.. chera... kaise... dikhaun...

ridhima - armaan

armman - i.. i m.. sor...sry basket...

ridhima - armaan mein yahin hun armaan... plz aankhein kholo armaan... armaan plz...

she slids on the floor beside armaan while holding his arm's... n crying..

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armaan get consious feeling ridhima near...

Armaan-ridhima...

Ridhima - armaan. Tum theek hona... Armaan .. Bolo na...

Armaan was just lost in her eyes love n concern she is having for him...

Armaan tries to get up...but

armaan - ahh.!!!

Ridhima - armaan... Araam se kya kar rahe ho...

Armaan - ridhima mein...

Ridhima - armaan shhh.. Chup bilkul tumhe araam ki jarurat hai...tum aram karo mein abhi aati hun...

Ridhima turn around to let her tears fall from her eyes which she was holding back as she knows armaan doesn't like tears in her eyes... Her tears hurt armaan like anything in the world..

Armaan hold her hands but ridhima stop there but didn't turn around then ridhima wipe her tears from free hand and then turn around..

Ridhima - *with fake smile* kya hua.. Mein bus aabhi aai armaan.. *armaan keep looking in her eyes* mein nahi ro rahi... Mujhe pata hai mera armaan ko mera ansun pasand nahi...

Hearing this armaan give faintly smile... And try to remove oxygen mask from his mouth...but ridhima stopped him from doing so...

Ridhima - ye kya kar rahe ho.. Tum aram karo mein doctor se baat karti hun... Bus 2 min mein wapas aai.. Plz... At this armaan leave her hand...

Armaan was shifted to the private ward... Ridhima taking care of armaan... Armaan notice ridhima's figure n notice her grown stomach...

Armaan - basket ye... Tum kitni moti ho gai ho... Mera pich kuch jayad hi khane lagi kya.. Mera hisse ka bhi...

Ridhima- armaan wo... Wo tum...

Armaan-tum aise wo... Karti rahogi ya aaage bhi bologi...

Armaan- meri zindagi aab koi aur bhi hai...

Armaan- matlab tumne mera letters padh liya...

Ridhima- letters ???? **confused look**

armann - hain... Vo jo mein ne wooden box mein rakhe the...

Ridhima - oh voo... Hain... Kyun... Tumhe achana vo kyun yad aa gaye...

Armaan- nahi bus... Toh kahan hai sammy...

Ridhima- sammy...!!! Sammy koun...

Armaan- oh vo... Samarat... Kahan hai vo...

Ridhima - oh... Vo ... Samrat mera saath kyun aayega...

Armaan- kyun aagega matlab.. Vo aur tum aab...**looking down**...

Ridhima- kyun armaan aab kyun aankhen jhuka rahe ho... Aab kyun nahi bol pa rahe tum jo tum likhe ke gaye the... Armaan tumhe kya lagta hai ki mein tumhare bina khush rah sakti hun...

Armaan- ridhima tum...

** armann was cut short with the entry of the gang**

anji- hey armaan kaise ho...

Muski- armaan tum kahan chale gaye the...

Atul- itni mahine.. Pata hai hum sab pe kya biti hai...

Nikki- dr ne jab aa ke kaha ki tumm...

Ridhima - nikki plz...

Ridhima want to run from there but armaan holds her hand...

Armaan- guyies kya mein kuch der ridhima se aakele mein...

All nodded and leave the room...

Armaan- ridhima plz.. Meri taraf dekho... Plz ridhima...

But ridhima didn't turn around she keep sobbing..

Armaan tries to get put..

Armaan - isss aauchh (groning in pain)

ridhima-armaan plz.. Armaan tum araam karo..

Armaan- mera liya toh tumhari khushi hi araam hai.. Plz ridhima mujhe maaf kar do.. Mujhe pata hai.. Ki mein ne vo hi galti dusri barr ki hai..par mein kya karta ridhima mein coma mein ja chuka tha... Aur tum janti ho ki coma mein insaan sirf sun sakta hai dekhe sakta hai par kuch na toh bol sakta hai na kuch kar sakta hai.. Tumhi batao ridhima mein kaise roj tumhe ghut ghut ke jeeta hua dekhta rahta... Isse toh aacha hota ki mein mar...

Ridhima put her hand on his mouth...

Ridhima-plz armaan... Armaan tum meri jindagi ka hissaa hi nahi meri zindagi ho...armaan mein pal pal marti rahi ye soch ke ki tum kuch aur pal ji sakte the mera saath aapni ridhima ke saath par mein ne hud tumhe mar... Armaan tumne jo kiya hai mein uske liya kabhi maaf nahi kar sakti..

Armaan- basket plz .. Mujhe se naraj mat ho ... Tum jis din mujhe se narag hui toh mein maan lunga ki meri zindagi mujhse se narag ho gai... Aur uss din tumhara ye armaan aapne aapko bhagwan ke hawale kar dega... Agar tum mujhe se narag hui toh mein duniya ko tumhare kadmo mein chod ke bahut dur chala jaunga... Plz ridhima.. Mein tumhe aur dur nahi dekhna chalata... Plz basket...

Ridhima- armaan dur toh mein bhi nahi rahna chahati... Armaan plz mujhe pyaar karo.. Plz armaan mein tumhe khone ka dar se nikal na chahati hun... Plz armaan mujhe pyaar karo plz armaan plz...

Saying so Ridhima lean upon armaan.. But armaan just hug her tightly...

Armaan - basket mein yahin hun... Hamesha tumhare saath.. Hamesha...

Armaan know that ridhima was trumbling with fear.. He to wanted her... He need her badly as she need him...

They were carving for eachother...

Ridhima - armaan.. Kya mein kuch puchun...

Armaan- kya hua ridhima...

Ridhima-kya mera pyaar kum padgata hai. Kya tumhe lagta hai ki mein strong nahi hun.. Ki mein tumhe sambhal paau...

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Aayushi

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Posted: 11 years ago

Part 11

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Ridhima lean upon armaan.. But armaan just hug her tightly...

Armaan - basket mein yahin hun... Hamesha tumhare saath.. Hamesha...

Armaan know that ridhima was trumbling with fear.. He to wanted her... He need her badly as she need him...

They were carving for eachother...

Ridhima - armaan.. Kya mein kuch puchun...

Armaan- kya hua ridhima...

Ridhima-kya mera pyaar kum pad jata hai. Kya tumhe lagta hai ki mein strong nahi hun.. Ki mein tumhe sambhal paau...

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Ridhima-kya mera pyaar kum pad jata hai. Kya tumhe lagta hai ki mein strong nahi hun.. Ki mein tumhe sambhal paau...

Armaan - nahi ridhima plz aisa mat bolo ... plz ridhima tum toh strong ho aur jahan meri aur hamare pyaar ki baat aati hai tum aur bhi strong ho jaati ho...

par mein ridhima ... mein itna strong nahi hun aur na ban sakta hun ki mein aapni ankhon ke saamne aapni zindagi ko roj mera liye aaur aapne pyaar ke liya tadapta dekhta rahun...

mein itna strong nahi hun ridhima ki aapne liya tumhe roj roote dekhta rahun aur ek lash (dead body) ki tarah padha rahun...

nahi dekh sakta mein tumhe dukhi... '

ridhima mein ne aaj tak bhagwan mein nahi maan apar jab se tumse pyaar kiya hain jab se tumhara saath mila hai,,, jab se tum meri jindagi mein aai ho ,,, aur meri zindagi ban gai ho... tab se mein ne bhagwan mein yakin karna shuru kiya hai ...

ridhima tum puchti thi na ki jab bhi mein tumhare saath mandir ja ta hun toh bhagwan ke aage haath kyun nahi jodta ...

kyun ki ridhima mein ne us pathar ki murti mein kabhi bhagwan nahi dikha mujhe toh hamesha tum mein hi aapna bhagwan mila hain... jaise tumhare maan na hai ki tumhar bhagwan ne hum sab ko banaya hai, vo hi humein khushi dete hain... toh vo sab kum toh meri zindagi mein tumne kiya hain ridhima ...

tumhari wajhase aaj mein ek dost .. ek boyfreind .. ek beta .. ek damad... ek pati aur ek acaha insan ban paya hun...

aur jo khushi sab bhagwan se mangte hain ...

vo sari khushiyan mujhe tumne di hain...

phir kyun mein us pathar mein yakin karun ...

jaise tum aapne dukh aapne pathar ke bhagwan ko nahi batati ...

toh mein kaise aapni najuk si ridhima jo meri sab kuch hai usse kaise mushkil mein dal deta... kaise usse dukh de deta ...

jise mein itna pyaar karta hun ki mujhe bhi nahi pata ki mein kab aapne aap ko bhul gaya aur khud ko kab uske hawale kar diya... kab mein itna uske pyaar mein dub gaye ki mein aapni khud ko ki parchai se aanjaan ho gaya.. apni saari khawaish aapni saari dreams usko sirhane rakh diya... usse itna haq de diya ki vo aapni marji se meri zindagi ki maanji, meri kismat aur mera future likhe saake... chahe aachaa likhe ya bura par jo likhe vo likhe...

nahi hun mein itna strong ridhima

nahi hun mein itna strong... nahi hun...andstarted cring very badly...

first time in life ridhima has seen him in this state...

ridhima was speechless by armaan's word she can clearly feel the pain that armaan had goen through in those months...

the expessions that ridhima was carring now on her face were of all kind... she was in pain and crying bitterly and at the same time she was happy and smilling with her whole heart...

she was sad in in pain feeling the pain that armaan had goen though during all this time... the pain the armaan put her through was no where to exist in comparison to the pain he suffered from only to make ridhima not suffer much...

and happy to know the depth of his love n the way he confess it was just as she is in 9th cloud n there exit above it she is there...

ridhima - armaan mein itna saal se tumjhe jaanti hun 4 saal shaadi se pehle n 5 saal shaadi ke baad... 9 saal armaan inh 9 saalo mein mein har daily ye koshis karti hun ki aaj mein tumhare pyaar ki haad jan lungi par armaan... armaan mein roj har jaati hun ... mein aaj tak itne saalo mein kabhi us ghehrai tak nahi pahuh pai...

jab bhi mein sochti hun ki aab mein jaan gai hun ki tum mujhe ki kitna pyaar karte ho ... kitni hai tumhare pyaar ki gehrai par.. tab hi tum kuch aisa kaarte ho ki mujhe ye lagta hai ki ye gehrai nahi ye toh tumhare pyaar ki shuruwat hai abhi toh mujhe kai janam lagange wahan tak pahuchne mein...

aur armaan paata nahi 7 janaam mein bhi mein tumhare pyaar ki gehrai tak ja bhi paungi ya nahi...

sab kahte hain shaadi saath janam ka bandhan hai... par hum har janam mein ye bandhan bandhenga taki har janam mein mein tumhare saath 7 janam ke liya tumse bandhi rahun...

taki kabhi bhi hum kisi bhi janam aalag na hon...

tumse hi meri saanse hain armaan... jab tum nahi the na tab bhi mein tumhar hi liya jinda thi... tumhe pata hai armaan mein ne tumse ek gift manga tha...

**armaan nodded**

ridhime placed armaan's hand on her stomach...

ridhima - tumne mujhe aapna ansh de diya.. mein tumhe har roj aapne andar mehsus karti thi... tum toh nahi the par tumhara ansh.. mera juniour armaan mera pass tha jo mujhe tumhare hone ka ehsas dhilata tha...

tumne mera har sapna pura kar diya armaan par mein tab bhi tumhe nahi jaan pai .. kabhi koi khushi nahi di mein n e tumhe... kabhi bhi nahi...

armaan - nahi ridhima aise nahi hai...

jo tumne mujhe diya hai vo koi bhi nahi de sakta tha... jo khushi tum mujhe mera bin kare de deti hao vo toh anmol hai ridhima...

ridhima tum mujse hamesha puchti ho na mein tumse itna pyaar kyun karta hun jab ki meri life me bahut hi ladkiyan aai aur jao hain...

aaj mein tumhe uska jawab deta hun...

hain mein tumse aapni jaan se bhi jayada pyaar karta hun.. isliya nahi kyun ki tum mera saath kaise ho aur kya o...

but isliya kyunki mein tumhare saath kya hun aur jab bhi mein tumhare saath hoti hun toh mujhe kabhi bhi sochna nahi padhta ki mein kya bolun kya karun... kya nahi karna kya nahi bolna... aaj tak kabhi bhi mein ne tumhare saamne kabhi kuch nahi socha... tumhare aas pass mujhe ek security ek ehsas ek sukun milta hain.. mujhe pata hota hai ki meintumhe kuch bhi bolun tum mujhe kabhi galat nahi samjhogi... aagr mera alfaj(words) galat bhi hua ya mera aapni baat express karne ka tarika galat bhi hua toh tum meri dil ki baat samjhe jaogi mera words se hatke tum mera bolne ka matlab samjhogi...

ridhima mein tumse agal nahi hun aur is baata ka proof ye hi hai tum hamesha sajhe jaati ho mera bina bole ki mein kya bolne wala hun kya soch raha hun...

I LOVE U FOR WHAT I M WITH U AROUND ME

after the confession with full of emotions they just hug each other tightly

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Sarvesh Redkar

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Posted: 11 years ago

Hey even this story is fantabulous... When in the 1st few parts you showed that armaan is dead i was so angry with you but den when you brought him back i'm glad that you wrote it in such a mesmerising way:) plz add me to ur pm list and pm me the next parts...

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Aayushi

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Posted: 11 years ago

This content was originally posted by: Savvy11
Hey even this story is fantabulous... When in the 1st few parts you showed that armaan is dead i was so angry with you but den when you brought him back i'm glad that you wrote it in such a mesmerising way:) plz add me to ur pm list and pm me the next parts...

😊 thnku..

i will surly pm u next

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Tanvi Dandime

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Posted: 11 years ago

amazing update😊😊

loved it❤️

and thanks for the pm😃😃

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633854

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Posted: 11 years ago

nice part its good armaan
I told u na armaan is alive
good ridzs got. her life back

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