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    the story revolves around three sisters prerna, bhoomika and kumkum. Prerna is the elder sister of them who is married with anurag , a big bussiness tycon. prerna has brought up  anurag's brothers and consider them as her sons

prerna:mom mere kyal se humay bhoomi ki shaadi ab kar dene chaiye
mom:par beta kis se
prerna:meri nazrar me he koi
mom:kon
prerna:(smile)dev
mom:dev se, tumne anurag se baat ki
prerna:hhhmmmm, woh to khush the
mom:bus phir bhoomi se bhi baat kar leti hoon...
bhoomika:(suddenly come)prerna dede khud to shaadi karli ab kya saare khandan ki ladkion ki shaadi karwa kar chore ge
prerna:(huste hua)ha janab jub tak apki shaadi nahin ho jati fikr to hoge na
bhoomika:acha ab yeh sub batein chore aur raat ko party par  ane ki tyari karey
prerna:party...kis khushi mein
bhoomika:dede tum bhi na......are mujhe itna bada assighnment mila hein
mom:prerna tumhe bataya to tha, keh bhoomi rajisthan keh culture par eik short movie banane ja rahi he
prerna:are wah, congratulations
bhoomika:isse kam nahin chale ga , raat ko sub family semet aana
prerna:dev bhi aye ga
bhoomika:dede mujhe dev se koi alergy nahin he jo tum mujhe uske bare mein bata rahi ho
AT NIGHT
bhoomika:pata nahin  kumkum de kaha chali gaye hein
kumkum:(hiding)baap re, kaha tha bhoomi ko keh is  ko mat bulana phir bula liya....
bhoomika:de aap yahan kya kar rahi hein
kumkum:neeche ho
bhoomika:de...
kumkum:yeh mr wadwa ka beta yahan par kya kar raha he
bhoomika:(smile)woh...de apni khushi me to sub ko shamil karte he na
kumkum:tum nahin sudharu ge
summit:are aap donon yahan
bhoomika:(smiling)
kumkum:(doosri tarf dekh rahi he)
summit:(looking at kumkum)
bhoomika:woh actually.....
summit:acha woh sub chore  and to u bhoomi, many many congrats
bhoomika:thanks a lot,excuse me
kumkum:bhoomi, (jate hua)
summit:are aap kahan ja rahin hey
kumkum:(ANGRILY)KYUN, mera kahin jane par koi pabande he
summit:are aap to naraz hogaye, apki  wajah se to mein party mein aya hoon aur aap he
kumkum:(look at summit)what?meri wajah se, maine koi mithai ki dukan kholi he jo meri wajah se yahan par aye he(then go away)
summit:oh my god!(smile)she is too much
prerna: bhoomi,congrats to u
anurag:from me, too
bhoomika:itni der, jija ji
anurag:are bhai tumhare liye kuch lana bhi to tha
bhoomika:(smile)ohhh, gift, where iz my gift
anurag:gift bada he, is liye thori deer lage ge
bhomika:jija ge, aakhir he kya
anurag:tum khudi dekh lo, gate par
bhoomika:(shocked)
prerna:(laughing)
anurag:(laugh)kaisa laga
bhoomika:DEV.....oh my god, what a great gift
dev:(wearing sunglasses, black coat and blue jeans)hi bhoomi
bhoomika:dev, r u ok
dev:what happen?
bhoomika:yeh sunglasses kyun pehne hoi hein
dev:oh its fashion dear
bhoomika:yeh ofcourse
dev:so many many congrats ,and again congrats
bhoomika:yeh do dafa congrats kyun
dev:yeh first one for ur assignment u got and second one for ur marriage with me
bhoomika:(sharmate hua)to de ne tumse bhi baat karli
dev:ji janab, bus tum ajao to mangani aur phir shaadi
LIGHTS OFF
summit:(sing a song, while looking at kumkum)nasha yeh pyar ka nasha he, yeh baat yar meri mano......(from MANN)
kumkum:(looked at him)
anurag:prerna yeh kon he
prerna:mr wadwa ka beta he
summit:(come close to kumkum)nasha yeh pyar ka nasha , yeh baat yaar meri mano...
kumkum:(frustrated)

 

AFTER ONE MONTH AT RAJISTHAN
bhoomika:so at last we have done
assistant:madam , phir yeh movie kub submit karane he
bhoomika:well, kal hum wapas mumbai ja rehe he to phir next week karadenge
assistant:ok madam
bhoomika:(recived phone from dev)hy dev!, so how r u
dev:buhat bewafa ho
bhoomika:me, kyun baba , aisa bhi kya kardiya
dev:phone karne mein bhi kanjoosi karti ho
bhoomika:tumhari saari shaqayat door kardoonge, bus kal ka intezaar karo ,mein wapas a rahi hoon
dev:thats great! so we will meet tommorrow
bhoomika:plz sub kuch packup karde
assistant:bus madam packup hone wala he
bhoomika:(talking to some other person)
assistant:MADAMMM.......MADAMMMM......
bhoomika:(suddenly fall due to a big camera which fall on her)
AT MUMBAI HOSPITAL
bhoomika:(on bed, behosh)
doctor:mujhe inke dad se baat karni he
dad:doctor, kya hua
doctor:dekhiye, inko buhat gehere chote aye he, jiske wajah se......
dad:kya doctor....
doctor:in naazrein chalin gaye hein
dad:kya....(crying)
prerna:(crying)bhoomi tumhe kya hogeya, hum sub to buhat khush the keh tum wapas arahe ho par yeh sub kuch
kumkum:(having tears in her eye)de hosla karey, woh humay aise dekhe ge to kya soche ge
prerna:(crying)dukh ise baat ka to hein, keh woh humay nahin dekh paye ge
kumkum:(crying)
anurag:dev is waqt bhoomi ko agar kisi keh saat ki subse zaada zaroorat he to woh tumhe ho, use hosla dena
dev:(having tears)
AT ROOM
bhoomika:yeh mujhe nazar kyun nahin araha....doctor...doctor....
kumkum:bhoomi..
bhoomika:kumkum de, (having sadness in her voice)mujhe kuch nazar nahin araha
kumkum:bhoomi woh.....
bhoomika:kya de, de mujhe buhat ghabrahat ho rahe hein
kumkum:bhoomi tum nahin kuch dekh sakti
bhoomika:(shocked)
prerna:(standing  at door)crying
anurag:(put his hand on prerna's sholder)
AFTER TWO DAYS
bhoomika:(on bed)dev.....dev tum aye hona
dev:ha bhoomi, mein hon
bhoomika:buhat der karde tumne ane mein
dev:woh...
bhoomika:socha tha tumhe a kar surprise doonge, par lagta hein surprise dene ki zaroorat he nahin pare
dev:tum maysoosi ki baatein mat karo
bhooimka:phir kya karoon mein
dev:bhoomi sub kuch sahi ho jaye ga
bhoomika:shaid....
AT HOUSE
dev:(on phone)yaar mujhe kya pata tha keh yeh sub kuch hojaye ga, ab bhoomi keh saat zindigi guzarna, its not that much easy, par yeh sub kuch kaise kahoo
prerna:(at door)(clap)ha dev sahi keh rehe ho tum
dev:(shocked)aap
prerna:zindigi, bilkul sahi keh rehe ho eik andhi ladki keh saat zindigi guzarna buhat mushkil hota he
dev:aise baat nahin he...
prerna:buhat mushkil hena sub ko batana, koi baat nahin mein mana kardoon ge(went away)
AT ROOM
prerna:(crying)
anurag:kya hua prerna
prerna:(tell everything)
anurag:(khamosh)
prerna:dukh is baat ka anurag, keh dev ne zara bhi mera ehsaas nahin kya, maine use apne bachoon ki tarh pala, phir bhi.....
anurag:mein abhi dev se baat karta hoon
prerna:nahin anurag, rishte zabardasti nahin bante

 

AT HOSPITAL
kumkum:bhoomi tumne kub ka kuch nahin khaya, kuch to kha lo, mom aye ge to buhat naraz hoge
bhoomika:de ab aisa lagta he keh zindigi hi mujhe se rooth gaye he, aur dev.....(having tears in her eye)
kumkum:(put hand on her sholder)
bhoomika:kyun yeh sub mere saat kyun ho raha he
prerna:(suddenly entered) bhoomi mein ainda tumhari ankhon mein yeh ansoo kabhi na dekho
bhoomika:par prerna de.....
prerna:rishta ehsaas ka naam he aur jub kisi keh dil mein apke liye ehsas he na ho to phir zabardasti karna sahi nahin hota(went away)
kumkum:bhoomi de sahi keh rahi he , aur tum nahin janti keh tumhare liye shaid dev se bhi acha koi he, jo tumse pyar karta ho, jiske dil ki dharkan tumhare dil ke saat dharakti ho
bhoomika:(smile)kon janta he....
summit:hello beautiful ladies!
bhoomika:hy its u na summit
summit:yah beautiful lady, its me
kumkum:(making faces)
bhoomika:i m very happy that u hv come
summit:par shaid koi khush nahin he
kumkum:(looking at him)
bhoomika:kaise ana hua
summit:well, mera eik dost he ARJUN, he is a great specialist, he is coming this week,maine usse tumhare bare mein baat ki he, and he is very positive aur isliye ise hafte se tumhara alag shura ho jaye ga,
kumkum:thats great
summit:shukr he keh apke chehre par bhi khushi ka ansar aya
bhoomika:thanks a lot!
summit:bhoomi mein tumhare bhai jaisa hoon, itna to haq banta he hai
bhoomika:mere liye aap bhai se bhe barh kar he
kumkum:(smile)
AT HOUSE
prerna:(going upstairs)
dev:(cryng)
prerna:dev, kya hua
dev:mujhe maaf karde
prerna:(looking at him)
dev:mein bhool geya tha , apka pyar, apka khaloos, apne jis tarah mujhe pala
prerna:(having tears in her eye)
dev:apne mujhe kabhi bhi mom ka ehsaas nahin hone diya, mein selfish hogeya tha
prerna:dev ghalti meri he thi, maine tumhe itna pyar diya ke baaz jazbatoon se tumhe ashna karana he bhool ge
dev:mein bhoomi se shaadi karonga
prerna:(shocked)
anurag:(happy)
AT ROOM
anurag:prerna tumhari tarbiyat mein koi kami nahin thi, jiska saboot dev ne de diya he
prerna:anurag, mein bhi buhat khush hoon aaj dev ko istarh dekh kar,par
anurag:par kya
prerna:dev ka bhoomi se shaadi karna , yeh ab nahin ho sakta
anurag:(shocked)
 

AT HOSPITAL
arjun:(entered in the room wearing black suit)miss bhoomika
bhoomika:kon he,
arjun: well pareshan mat hon mein arjun, dr arjun, summit ne apko bataya hoga
bhoomika:oh aap
arjun:maine apki reports dekhi he, pareshani wali koi baat nahin he , every thing will get ok
bhoomika:hope so...
AFTER THREE DAYS OF HER TREATMENT
arjun:so bhoomi, sorry may i call u bhoomi
bhoomika:(smile)ofcourse
arjun:apka operation jald hi hoga, par patient ki liye buhat zaroori hota he ki woh kahin, i mean to say bahir ghome, because agar isi tarh woh bed par rehe ga to woh boreat ka shikar ho jata he
bhoomika:yeh u r right, par aaj kak sub itne busy hote he, keh kis ko kaho , upar se sub se zada mushkil to yeh he keh unhe mujhe sambhalna pare
arjun:aise baat he to.....i m free, hum chalte he
bhoomika:nahin, aap ka sara waqt to mera khayal rakhne mein he guzar jae ga
arjun:aise koi baat nahin he, i think we should go to a wonder garden, its really a nice place
bhoomika:well its one of favourite place
AT GARDEN
bhoomika:(touching flowers)
arjun:(smiling)
bhoomika:mujhe phool buhat ache lagte hein, khas tor par yeh hibiscus ke phool
arjun:apko kaise pata chala keh yeh hibiscus ki phool hein
bhoomika:(smile)mehsoos karti hoon aur jan jati hoon
arjun:mehsoos......ha, yeh jazbe kuch logo mein paye jate he
bhoomika:(seriously)aur eik jazba ehsaas hota he , jo shaid buhat hi kam logon mein paya jata he(thinking of dev)
arjun:bhoomi ankein buhat bari nimat hoti hein,ha....yeh nimat un logon ke liye such mein nimat he jo logon ki jazbat, ehsasat ko samajhte hein, aur kuch log is nimat ko pa kar bhi mehroom hote hei, kyunki woh mehsoos nahin kar pate
bhoomika:(smiling)
AT HOSPITAL
kumkum:bhoomi, kitni deer se mein aye hoi hoon, tum kaha thi
bhoomi:de woh sub chore aur yeh bataye mom ne khane mein kya bheja he
kumkum:well buhat kuch, dhokla, paneer ki sabzi, parathi..aur
bhoomi:bus bus de, itna kafi he
arjun:hello!
kumkum:hy! aur bhai hamari behen kab sahi hoge
arjun:(checkup karte hua) buhat jald
bhoomi:(smiling)
arjun:checkup maine karliya he, so shaam ko milte hein
kumkum:bye!(khana nikalte hua)
bhoomi:kumkum de, eik baat poocho
kumkum:ha....
bhoomi:yeh doctor arjun dekhne mein aise hein
kumkum:(thinking,coming towards her, look at her)
bhoomi:de....
kumkum:(smile)well theek he, bus 2 inch ke glasses ka frame pehenta he, 5 foot kad he, aur rang bhi thora sa....
bhoomi:(confused)
kumkum:(laugh)are nahin baba, he is really opposite to all what i say
bhoomi:de tum bhi na
NEXT DAY
kumkum:(sitting near window thinking about summit)
bhoomi:de humay apne jazbatto ko chupana nahin chaiye
kumkum:(shocked)
bhoomi:mujhe bhi woh ache lagte he
kumkum:(hiding)bhoomi kya keh rahi ho, aur kis keh bare mein baat kar rahi ho
bhoomi:de sub janti hoon mein, kya hua agar mein dekh nahin parahe, mehsoos to kar sakti hoon na
kumkum:tum bhi na, bhala summit aur mein never.....
bhoomi:(laugh)de maine to sumit ka zikr bhi nahin kiya
kumkum:(shocked)(go from there)
prerna:are yeh kahan gae
bhoomi:de... apne aane mein itni deer kyun laga de
prerna:anurag ki wajah se, tyar hone mein itni deer lagate hein na
bhoomi:tu jejo ko badal nahin saki de
prerna:ha baba ab kya karoon

 

AT HOSPITAL
arjun:(put his hand on bhoomi's eyes)
bhoomi:(song played at background,na jane mere dil ko kya hogeya abhi to yahin tha yahin kho geya from dil wale dulhaniya lejayege)
arjun:do this exercise urself
bhoomi:(smile)
AFTER ONE MONTH
bhoomi:(sister opening the bandage from bhoomi's eyes)
prerna,anurag,kumkum, summit,arjun,bhoomi's mom dad seeing her
bhoomi:(opened her eyes)mom dad, i can see all of u
everyone very happy
bhoomi:mom dad , lag raha he jaise eik aur zindigi milli he
mom:beta yeh sub arjun bete  ki wajah se hua he
arjun:(see her)
bhoomi:(looking at him)thanks a lot
arjun:(smiled)my pleasure,waise thanks to summit, keh uske wajah se mujhe itne khobsurat patient ka alag karne ka moqa mila
summit:(laUGHED)
anurag:arjun raat ko hamare ha party he , khas bhoomi ke liye, zaroor ana
arjun:why not?
AT PARTY
anurag:bhoomi the party is 4 u, so enjoy it
bhoomi:ofcourse jiju
dev:bhoomi
bhoomi:tum....
dev:i m really very sorry
bhoomi:(seriously)
dev:mujhe apni ghalti mehsoos ho chuki he
bhoomi:DEV..tumhara to shaid yeh khayal tha keh meri ankein humesha ki liye chali gaye hein, such yeh he keh de ne tumhe maaf kar diya hoga , par maine nahin(went)
dev:(looking at her)
song played at background, from gangster, na jane koi, kaise he yeh zindigani, zindigani humari adhoori kahani
arjun:(carrying red flowers)bhoomi!
bhoomi:oh arjun u,
arjun:for u
bhoomi:thanks a lot
arjun:lets dance
bhoomi:yeh
both of them danced on jadoo he nasha he from jism
arjun:(looking at bhoomi)
bhoomi:(looking at him)
kumkum:kitne pyare lag rehe hein donon
summit:yeh... hum donon buhat pyare lag rehe he
kumkum:he.....i m talking about arjun and bhoomi
summit:but i talking about me and u
kumkum:tum khawaboon mein he rehna(go away from there)
prerna:(push summit)dont worry, ladkian thore nakhre karti hein
summit:prerna de apni behen ko kuch samjae
prerna:apni behen ko to nahin.... ha mom dad ko samjha doonge(laugh)
summit:(shying)

 

AFTER ONE WEEK
bhoomi:(on phone with arjun){song played at background na jane mere dil ko kya hogeya, abhi to yahin tha yahin kho geya.....}
AT NIGHT
arjun:(watching tv,talking to himself)kisi cheez mein dil nahin lag raha(thinking about bhoomi)
summit:arjun, kaise ho
arjun:(still thinking)
summit:arjun, tumse baat kar raha hoon
arjun:(suddenly see summit)summit tum
summit:bhai tumhari halat dekh kar to mujhe lagta he keh tumhe loveria hogeya he
arjun:kya....yeh kya keh rehe ho
summit:ha jub log dosron par kam aur khud mein gum rehna zada shuru karde to iska yahin matlab hota he
arjun:well....i think its enough, chalo chalte hein
summit:kaha
arjun:mr sherma ke ha,
summit:(thinking)kyun
arjun:bhai ja kar hal pooch ate hein
summit:(smile)samajh raha hoon mein
arjun:tum bhi na
AT HOUSE
kumkum:hello arjun, how r u
arjun:fine, auntie dekhai nahin de rahin
kumkum:woh aur dad prerna dede ke ha gaye he
arjun:ok
summit:janab yahan par hum bhi hen
kumkum:acha.. mujhe to dekhai he nahin deye
summit:kumkum arjun yahin par he, apna checkup kara lo, hosakta he kuch faida ho jaey
arjun:(laughing)
kumkum:(serious)
summit:(looking at kumkum)
bhoomi:are aap log hy!
arjun:(smiling)
bhoomi:(looking at arjun)
summit:bhoomi arjun tumhara elag karte karte lagta khud bhi eik bemari ka shikar hogeya he
arjun:SUMMIT..
bhoomi:kya matlab... mujhe to ye sahin lag rehe he
summit:bhoomi darasal isko...loveria hogeya he
bhoomi:(shying)
arjun:(shying)
kumkum:tumhare saat jo bhi rehe ga, yeh bekar ki bemariya to use hon ge na
summit:bilkul sahi irshad farmaya apne
AT PRERNA HOUSE
anurag:dad mujhe to summit aur arjun dono buhat pasand he
mom:par beta
prerna:mom, fikr mat karey is bar kuch ghalat nahin hoga
anurag:mere khayal se humay kumkum aur bhoomi ki shaadi eik saat hi kar dene chaiye
dad:par kumkum ka summit keh saat
prerna:dad woh sub kuch nahin he, mein janti hoon kumkum summit ko buhat chahti he
anurag:mom dad to phir methai khaye
dev:(listening the conversation from door)

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Posted: 17 years ago
nice zeenish......continue soon......
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Originally posted by: fakhra

nice zeenish......continue soon......

thanks