Originally posted by: rocksravya11
aww so sad aftre reding i had a tears in my eyes omg dis z awesome plz update d nxt part soon i cant wait mainly d last lines she forget me her nonu dats so sad i cant even express superb yr fab ...plz pm me ..ford next update...
Originally posted by: dmg_mjht_d3_rox
aww nidha it was awesome yaar!!!! the way ranveer came in the room and kiya tried to stop him he ignored her n moved towards his moti!!!! aww the way he waited for the slap but he dint get!!!! and loved the way u said panchi's mom tol him aww that was soo sweet of hr man!!!!
shit!!!!she forgot him,her nono,her love?????dam it it was soo freaking awesme yaar!!!!do write more it was an awesome one
Originally posted by: kittu_arsha
awww..this ws sad ! :(
Bt it ws Touching..Moti has Foregotten HER Nonu ! SIGH !
There's a Continuation..Yayyy ! :D
Plz plz plz Update the Next part Soon! THIS probably is added in my Favourites Now..M Simply Loving It !
Its Ahmaazinggg ! RANVEER..aww..my baby ! M sure he's not able to believe..HIS Moti has gorgotten her n Now She's Rude to HIM ! :O
Update Soonn.. :)
n Yes ! Dun forget to PM me :
Originally posted by: FeistySoul
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Thanks Kittu...</font><font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Ranveer has got a shock for sure...</font>
OMG sad OS on RaHi 😲
didn't expected that... i think its first Rahi OS m reading...its very touchy...liked it😊
Originally posted by: Analeez11
I so loved it. The last line 'she forgot him' brought tears to my eyes. You are really good at writing. Loved it.
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