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--ANSH LIGHTS out --Part 2 Updated pg -14 - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
SHIV STAY AT HAVELI 

After reaching the haveli ...

Dressed in soggy clothes SHiv and Anandi enter the haveli along wid baapusa and tausa,Ds and Ghena are sitting in Hall worried .On seeing them entering they both r shocked Dadisa run upto anandi and Shiv and ask ''ki ho gaya chodi ko  
Ki halat ho gaya manna kiya tha ki maat ja akeli  !! bhagwaan ka laak laak shukr hain tharo ko kuch hua nahin warna main toh..''
Shiv says ''mere hote hue anandiji ko kuch nahin hoga dadisa ''
''haan chodo par hua kya aur tu itna paani mein anandi ke paas phucha kaise ?''
"Masa ab yeh sab baat baad mein hoga Shiv keh raha tha anandi behosh ho gaayi thi anandi ko aaram karna chahiye ghena zaara leke jaa gille kapde  badlwa de ''said bhairon ''Shiv tum bhi kapde badal lo  tum bhi kaafi thak gaaye hoge ''
''nahin main chalta hoon ghar jaka kapde badal loonga ''said Shiv 
''Kya baat kare choda aabhi bhi baarish thami naako aur yeh bhi toh tera hi ghar hain '' Declared DS 
"nahin mera yahan rukna itni raat ko thik nahin hoga aur  itna sab hoone ke baad anandiji ko pasand na aaye main thik hoon ''
"kya baat bolt ho Shiv tumne anandi ki jaan baachai maana anandi tumse narazz hain par  itni bhi khudgaraz nahin ki tumhara yahan rukna usse pasand nahin aayega ''
''haan chodo !!''

"Thik hain aap sab itna bol raahe hain toh main ruk jaata hun !!"Replied SHIV 
"accha chodo tu tharo kapdo bhi gilo ho gaaye tu bhi badal le par yeh shirt toh na hoga kurta aur dhoti phenle jaa"
Shiv goes to a room and changes his clothes but suddenly the door opens and there is anandi ,who had already changed and her hairs were open as soon as she sees Shiv half wearing the kurta she turns around and 
says "Maaf kijiyega mujhe pata nahin tha aap yahan hain main toh dawaai lene aayi thi "and she starts to go 
"Ji appki tabyat ab kaisi hain ?"asks Shiv wearing his kurta hurriedly !!
"Ab thik hain baas zukhaam na ho is liye dawaai leni thi "said she 
"Toh aap le lijiye kahan hain "He asks 
Anandi turns around n says "wahan uss drawer  mein " and She starts giggling  as she just saw hw Shiv's hairs were standing like spikes 
Shiv opens the drawer and takes the medicine "yeh hain kya ??"
Anandi comes towards him and then she says "haan yehi hain "takes it n leaves ..Shiv continues to stare at the door and Anandi reaapears again carrying a comb "yeh lijiye iss kamre mein shisha naahin hain aap niche jaake thik kar lijiye " and leaves
Shiv is lost and a smile appears on his lips ..
Shiv comes down the hall and meets all at the dining table 
DS says"arre choda koi takleef toh naa hui tharoko idhar apna hi ghar samaj tune anandi aur hamare liye itna kuch kiya hain waise tune bataya nahin ki  tu skul kaise phucha aato paani mein !!"
Shiv tells all thing but skips the part where he used the rususcitation technique !!
Everyone is thankful tat Anandi is safe !!They all have dinner and then he sees Ghena who is taking soup in bowl for anandi !!
DS" ghena kahan jaa rahi hain "
Ghena "Masa woh anandi ko khana khane ka mann nahin hain toh socha uske liye yeh garam sopu le ja jaon "
"Anandiji ki tabiyat toh thik hain na ab??"ask Shiv 
"Arre haan baas yeh soup piyegi toh zukham na hogi "
Every one retire for night Shiv is sleeping in a room just near Anandi's and is lost in her thoughts He resolves he can never let anything to happen Anandi 

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Next morning ...

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Posted: 11 years ago
Ritzi I read this FF @ one go and have to tell u loved it πŸ˜³ Haye Spikes waala Shiv πŸ˜β˜ΊοΈ keep up the good work sweets.. update soon 😳 
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: GoldenDew

Ritzi I read this FF @ one go and have to tell u loved it πŸ˜³ Haye Spikes waala Shiv πŸ˜β˜ΊοΈ keep up the good work sweets.. update soon 😳 



Thanx sou  even i am nw imagining spikes wala Shiv lolz!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely...awesome...Waiting for the next update😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
whoa nice..i  hope ab love story start ho dono ke bich..😍
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Posted: 11 years ago
hehe love story ka pata nhain par maazedar story shall start !!!🀣
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow ritzi excellent work yaar
I'm waiting for next part πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 11 years ago
Next morning kya huaa...Jaldi bhejiye...waiting eagerly...Itna intezaar mat karwaayie...Actually the thing is missed ANSH this whole week a lot, isiliye satisfying by reading and rereading all the FFs, OS, and SS.
 
Waiting for the next part eagerly...πŸ₯±
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Posted: 11 years ago
sabar karo baacha sabr ka  fal mitha this time i wrote slowly and see my writing trned out better  than earlier versions  thanks all !!!πŸ˜†
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Posted: 11 years ago
aww...i just finished reading last two parts...thanks a lot for the PM ritzi otherwise i would have missed it! πŸ˜›...gr8t going...sweet updates...loved it! πŸ˜³...will wait for ur next update! πŸ˜ƒ