OS:Luv can smtms b magic.Bt magic cn b an illusion - Page 3

my god that was emotional!! U write SOO well! Love reading ur OS'S!! Wil u continue with this? Dyin to see repentence! thanku for the pm.

Agree, He should not get any chance to grovel anymore. He needs to repent a lot before he gets to see her.

Awww- why did you stop - that was beautiful but oh so sad - I was in tears at the end - please carry on with this asap

this was so sad!

This sad and emotional story made me cry!! Great job!! 👍🏼 Also because I'm still very emotional regarding to today's highly charged, sad and intense episode! Thanks for the PM! Edited by Katelyn - 11 years ago

Perfect. I want ASR to look for her and get desperate every passing second. Can you please write ASR's side too? The guilt, the realization, the desperation?

This content was originally posted by: tia.o

Perfect. I want ASR to look for her and get desperate every passing second. Can you please write ASR's side too? The guilt, the realization, the desperation?

Beautifully written and I second Tia on the request...hopefully the CV's will read and realize the meaning of remorse/realization

SOOO HEART WRENCHING... HE DEF DUSNT DESERVE HER AFTR ALLL SHES GONE THRU N DONE FOR HIM...

his words were absolute shocker..more than words yet again he didnt give her the opportunity to give her reasons..felt bad for khushi..
to top it off he didnt turn back to see her..
nice OS..

Wonderfully written.. Arnav hurt her so much.. He needs to know the worth of her in his life and this time all by himself..