manveer ss:phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu CHAPPY:23 PG:90 - Page 7

Hey great update Swini...!!! It's so good how you showed Manyata's feelings...!!  Continue soon...

V:UFFO m bhai tum baar baar kaha kho jati ho.
Uv:lagta hai princess kuch gehri soch main hai.
M:nahi.main kahiki bhi nahi hoon.i mean gehri soch main nahi hoon.
U:hey M shanti yeh 2no toh tumhe bass aise hi chirah rahey the.
V:haan M bhai.
M:thik hai thik hai.vasai U hum yaha kya sirf tumhare bhai aur uski hone vali fiance keh liye ayey hai nahin na.toh abhi hum kuch apne liye bhi dekh lete hai.
U,Vj Uv ki taraf dekhta hai aur Uv unne 'I M ThE BEST'vala look deta hai.
U:pata hai M agar hum yeh baat tumhare muhhse na sunke kissi aur seh sunte na toh to humme pakka shak hota ki vo jealouse hai.
M:kya?
U:matlab humne tumhe nahi kaha hum toh baki larkiun ki baare main baat kar rahe hai.
M:toh phir thik hai.
U:acha yeh green vala kaisa hai.
M:bura nahi hai but acha bhi nahi hai.
Uv:acha aplog baat kijiye hum watches wagera dekh atey hai.
aur vo chala jata hai.
V:keun tum logo nahi lagta ki Uv aur J sirf ek dusre keh liye bane hai
U:yeah humme toh aisa hi lagta hai keun M?
M(whisper)bilkul nahi.
U:kya?
M:kuch nahi.
(FLASHBACK)
Uv:kya tum book ki baat kar rahi ho.
M:han aur siri vaha hai.
Uv:theke jaise app ki marji.
aur vo siri par char jata hai book lane keh liye
Uv:princess yeh vali.
M:haan yehi.
aur vo yeh book lene hi jata hai ki siri hilne lagti hai aur vo gir jata hai.
M:Uv.
Uv(with pain)aha..
M:tum thik toh hona.
Uv:haan hum thik hai.lekin bohout dart ho raha hai princess.
M:kaha?
Uv apni forhead pakarta hai.
Uv:yaha.
aur M usse vaha kiss karti hai.
M:aur kaha.
Uv phir chiks dekhata hai.
Uv:yaha.
aur M usse usske chikpe karti hai.aur phir 2no ankho pein n chin pein.
M:ab bolloaur kaha kaha pain ho raha hai.
n they both laugh
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ok now i start.so guys hope u like it.pliz hit the like button n leave ur commnt if u have time.

 ooo ... jealous M feisty . and UV unnati VJ pulling M'S leg was hillarious . poor M . loved the manveer flashbacks . and M kissing UV was so A W W W ...AWWW...thankyou so much for the double update . wish the CVs were as generous as you !!!! they are so stingy whn it cums to manveer scenes 

waooo...how cutee...manyata in full on jealous mode...n da flashback scenes r also awsum...

Originally posted by: sirjee

waooo...how cutee...manyata in full on jealous mode...n da flashback scenes r also awsum...

thanks yaar sirjee.thanks a lot for ur comment.but yaar all credit goes to Nia.usne likha maine nahi.Edited by Swini01 - 11 years ago

Originally posted by: princessnia

Nice one yaar.cont soon.

thanks Nia.but tu keun comment kar rahi hai?yeh pura part ki ek ek word toh tune hi likha hain na.

Originally posted by: lilybabes

ooo ... jealous M feisty . and UV unnati VJ pulling M'S leg was hillarious . poor M . loved the manveer flashbacks . and M kissing UV was so A W W W ...AWWW...thankyou so much for the double update . wish the CVs were as generous as you !!!! they are so stingy whn it cums to manveer scenes

thanks yaar but all credit goes to Nia.wo short wala likh ke hi meri halat buri hogayi thi toh ussne mere tarah hindi main likh dia.puri ki puri update usski thi meri nahi.

Very nice thanks for update...please cotinue soon...

Originally posted by: Amibaiju

Very nice thanks for update...please cotinue soon...

aww thanks.but all credit goes to Nia.n yeah jaha tak jalti cont karne ki baat hai toh i m so sry sweetheart but main manveer rain hug keh bat hi cont karoongi.

Hay i m new to the forum.n maine tumhare ss ki har part pari hai.itz just awesome.aur yeh part toh amazing hai yaar.hats off Nia.u r a brilliant writer.tumhe kuch ss likhna chahiye.n Swini pliz cont soon.manveer rain hug seh pehle pliz.n pm me if u can.n Nia this part was seriously awesome.