pyar k tufano me ghire h~hum kya kare UPDT ON PG19

veena singh

@veena23

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Posted: 11 years ago

hmmm to ab serial puri trh se chal pada h sapration aur leap ki trf to mne socha ki chalo bhai m bhijra apne deemag k kido ko kaam pe lagau...aur kuchhh alag type ka scene create karu...😉

waise to hame pta h ki raya k beech bht pyar h lekin aajkl is pyar me ghajab type ki khamoshi ho gyi h jo ki ek ghajb type k tufaan ka andesha de rha h ..to ab main ye dekhna chahti hu ki is tufan me raya kya krenge😕

khair jo bhi karenge meri story me to wo ekta style se defnatly hat k hi hoga...😊

lekin m is story ko kl shuru karungi qki mujhe aaj kuchh adhure kaam pure krne h...sp please wait for me i will back with my new ff...

"pyar k tufano me ghire h~hum kya kare"

thank u

Edited by veena23 - 11 years ago

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Krutika

@kaparikh1

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Posted: 11 years ago

Will be waiting or the OS...

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kaviya10

@kaviya10

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Posted: 11 years ago

Great diii...ill be waitng eagerly for the updates...😛

ROCK ON VEENA DII...😃

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salsaly

@salsaly

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Posted: 11 years ago

that's a gr8 news... i'll b waiting for it di... :-)

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anizor

@anizor

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Posted: 11 years ago

waiting eagerly for it veena

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veena singh

@veena23

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Posted: 11 years ago

hmmm...pta h kya...mujhe lag rha h ki inlogo k sapration ki wjh niharika wala scene nhi hona chahiye qki phir priya k itna sabkuchh confidently krne ka koi mtlb nhi rh jayega...yar m janti hu ki ekta logic nhi lagayegi lekin hum kya kare hmara deemag to logic use krne ko bolta h to main ek logic story bnane ki soch rhi hu jise bnane ka koi logic nhi h qki ekta ko to whi krna h jo use shi lagna h aur wo bilkul bina logic k hoga... I know...phir bhi here i go with my imagination with thoda bht logic...

To shuru krte h...os...

"pyar k tufano me ghire h..hum kya kare"

Scene 1...

In raya room...

Priya taiyar hoti rhti h tabhi achank se ram aa jata h priya abhi puri trh dressed up nhi hui rhti h...wo use dekh k thoda chaunk jati h ram bhi thoda jhep jata h...dono me pyar hote hue bhi is natak ki wajah se phir se ek akwrdness aa gyi h...priya apna huk band krti rhti h...ram ko dekhti h to uske samne mud jati h ram bhi use dekhta h pr kuchh kehta nhi h jane lagta h...

Priya...mr.kapoor ek min

Ram...kya???

Priya...thoda neha ko andr bhej dijiyega ...mujhe help chahiye

Raam...ok

Ram chala jata h priya ko bht bura lagta h pr wo kuchh keh bhi nhi sakti h wo usi trh huk ko pakade baith jati h aur purani bate yaad krne lagti h
BG me ..bade achhe lagte h song chalta rhta h..priya apni soch me khoyi rhti h tabhi ram aa jata h use huk pakad k baithe dekhta h to ake band kr deta h aur kehta h

Ram...wo neha nhi mili aur tum thoda jaldi taiyar no jao mujhe bhi hona h ...mere pas bht kam h

Itna kh kr ram jane lagta h to priya
Kehti h...

Priya...mr.kapoor thanks

Ram ...rukta h aur khadus tareeke se bolta h..thanks ki koi jarurat nhi h mne kisi pyar ki wajah se nhi kiya ..ue mne isliye kiya qki tum faltu time wst kr rhi thi aur mere pas time wst krne k liye bhi nhi h...aur nahi tumse yha khade hoke bakwas krne ka hi time h ...m bahar dekh k ata h mujhe mera kamra khali chahiye mujhe bhi taiyar hona h

Ram chala jata h aur priya ankho me ansu leke use dekhti rh jati h...uska mn to nhi ho rha tha lekin wo bs ye soch k apne aap ko relax krti h ki aaj sb theek ho jayega...

Priya taiyar hoke nikalti rhti h aur ram andr aata rhta h...aaj to priya bs kayamt dha rhi hoti h...ufff..ekdm the ram kapoor ki wife lag rhi hoti h...priya ram kapoor...dono ki nazare ekdusre me atak jati h aur wo dono drwaze me atak jate aur humlog un dono me atak jate h...bhai ab dono chahe jitna bhi na na kare pr us pyar ka kya kare dono k dilo aur ankho me bhara pada h...wo to mauka pate hi chhalak jata h...
Phir ram hi khud ko rokta h aur peechhe hat jata h to priya bhi chali jati h lekin ram ke chhuan ke ehsas k sath khush hoke jati h ...

Party me...

Waise to dono alag alag ghum rhe hote h pr nazare ek dusre pr hi rhti h..tabhi neha aati h aur ram se kehti h...

Neha...aye fatty yha kya kr rha h??? Aur priya kahan h????

Ram...mujhe nhi pta

Neha...tumhe nhi pta ??? Tumhe nhi pta to kise pta hoga???

Ram...mujhe wo bhi nhi pta
Aur ram bol k chala jata h neha vikram se kehti h ki indono ka kuchh krna padega...

Uske bad party shuru hoti neha vikram ram aur priya ko pakad k late h aur ekdusre k sath khada kr dete h dono ekdusre ko dekhte h aur phir unhe wo reception party yaad aa jati h once more with bade achhe lagte h track

After tha item no & all that...phir krishuji ki dhansu entry with dhansu music...priya unhe dekh k khush hoti h aur recieve krne jati h...priya sanskari bahu ki trh pair chhu kr krishuji k gale lagti h...ram ye sb dekh rha hota h aur dekh kr chidh rha hota h priya krishuji k sath andr aati h to ram uska hath kas k pakad kr ek trf le jata h aur chillata h

Raam...priya ab ye kaun sa natak shuru kiya h tumne...ab ye bt jyada ho rha h ...m is aurat ko apne ghr me ek sec bhi bardasht nhi kr sakta...

Ram ki awaj sun kr niharika mam sid krishuji neha vikram dadi sabhi wha aa jate h

Priya...are m abhi bhi is ghr ki bahu hu to m bhi agr kisi ko bulana chahu to bula sakti hu

Ram...pr tumne mujhse promise kiya tha ki tum is aurat se kabhi nhi milogi

Priya...mr.kapoor jb rishta toot rha h to ek chhota sa promise tut gya to kya hua

Ram...m kuchh nhi janta mujhe ye aurat abhi isi waqt is ghr se bahar chahiye

Priya...sorry mr.kapoor mere hote hue to ye possible nhi h

Ram... M abhi use bahar nikalta hu tum dekho

Priya...mr.kapoor yha media h aap kyun apna tamasha bnwana chahte h aap

Ram..oh to tum mujhe dhamaki de rhi ho

Priya...nhi sachhai bta rhi hu...aur agr aap ne unhe yha se nikala to m bhi unke sath chali jaungi...phir chahe apki izzat ka jo bhi ho

Ram...theek h...waise bhi kuchh din bad jo hona h wo aaj hi ho jaye tum is aurat ko lekr abhi mere ghr se nikal jao m tumhe divorce paper bhijwata hu...

Aur priya krishuji k sath chali jati h... Pr ye tamasha yha hi khtm nhi hota h...aage aur bhi drama h keep visiting fr more...

Precap...niharika apni jeet ka jash full mood me mama aur sid ke sath apne so called headoffice me mna rhi hoti h aur chilla chilla k bole rhi hoti h...

Edited by veena23 - 11 years ago

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