FF: Har Pal Ka Intezaar... Part 16 (Pg. 72) (30.6) - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
read both the parts its outstanding 
continue soon the next partπŸ€—
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb post Amby πŸ‘πŸ‘...please don't stop writing 😳...its a request 😊...very touching too...thanks for the PM..😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amber , girl ou are awesome dear. Simply superb update.
I think the present trach is what inspiring our writers to give such fabulous updates so cannot even hate the present track.πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 11 years ago
Fantastic touch Amby.. Absolutely loved it. There is so much love between these 2... Father-son scene was very cute...

Beautifully written my friend.. 
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Looking forward to their return from outing.. 
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Posted: 11 years ago
This is making up for lost times! You described it really well Amby! The tedi bindi makes
Its return and it's always romantic! Awww those little things that make you smile!
So u did leave a clue that they were living faraway because of NIH. Can't wait to see things unfold!
Assuming th next chapter is the pending things to do when Prem is off to sleep πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: azk92

<font color="#cc0000" face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">Thank you Chitra Di. I will try and write a birthday sequence in this FF.. just wait for it😊and i will try to go further than a kiss too hahaha.. If i can actually sit here and write it without running away from my computer. 😳</font>

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<font color="#cc0000" face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">Actually, I had a bit of a different idea but I will try and incorporate yours too. 😊</font>


If u have a better idea go for it dearie.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Oi maa main mar jaawa Amby. Kitna pyaara update hain dear.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: viny_queen

yaar this bindi wala scene cv ko tum se write karwana chahiye tha πŸ˜ƒ


Lol thanks πŸ˜› I'm glad you liked my version of the bindi scene πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: Siacutie

read both the parts loved it its outstanding continue soon the next partπŸ€—


Thanks Sia.. will post soon! πŸ€—
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: TVserialfreak

Superb post Amby πŸ‘πŸ‘...please don't stop writing 😳...its a request 😊...very touching too...thanks for the PM..😳


Thanks!
As long as you guys like it, I won't stop πŸ˜³