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Roshan

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Posted: 11 years ago

Hey everyone,

I will be adding my short Hindi/Urdu poems here. Some of them are songs, while others are just a work of poetry.

I hope you enjoy them.

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Roshan

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Posted: 11 years ago

Aye Mere Yaar

This is song that I wrote after the release of Atif Aslam's song, Hona Tha Pyaar, from the 2011 movie, Bol. I wrote the song on the same scale and tune as the original one.

Aye mere yaar, tu sun le pukaar
Saansein meri... hain beqaraar

Aaja bahon mein meri, masti mein jhoomkar... jhoomkar
Chhu loon nazron se main tujhe, aur kar loon main sabar.. dekhkar
Hosh mere... ab hain faraar

Meri zindagi mein mujhe, mili hain khushiyaan... tujhse hi
Teri parchayee bhi judi, hai kaheen na kaheen... mujhse bhi
Tu sanson mein... meri shumaar

Aye mere yaar, tu sun le pukaar

~Roshan

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Posted: 11 years ago

That's very lovely..

I actually played the instrumental of Hona Tha Pyaar. Sounds perfect, Well written.

Now I wish Atif sings this version also.. :P

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Roshan

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Posted: 11 years ago

Thanks, 😃

Yeah, I wrote it according to the tune and scale of the music.

I have one more that I have written. Will post soon. Finishing touches to go. 😃

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Roshan

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Posted: 11 years ago

Meri Jaan

This song is based on the song Meri Jaan by Vasundhara Das. I had written this song in the August of 2005, while on my break at work. I have also posted the original song at the end of my version. Again, the scale is the same, but the lyrics are completely different.

Har ishq ki sada bhi tu hai meri jaan
Har husn ki ada bhi tu hai meri jaan
Har sabz daal paat tu hai meri jaan
Har din ke baad raat tu hai meri jaan

Meri tanhayee aisi, meri angdayee aisi
Teri aahat ke dam pe, aankh khulti ho jaisi
Tere lafzon ki baarish, teri baton ki aatish
Aaj bhi dil mein paida, mere karti hain larzish

Sab surkhiyon ki jaan bhi tu hai meri jaan
Sab mehfilon ki shaan bhi tu hai meri jaan
Sab sargamon ka raag tu hai meri jaan
Sab sardiyon ki aag tu hai meri jaan

Tere saaye ko chhoone, haath kar doon main aage
Faasla chhota hai par, door kyun mujhko laage
Aah main bharta jaoon, saans main leta jaaon
Soch mein dooba dooba, tere hi naghmein gaaon

Ik purkusoon shafa bhi tu hai meri jaan
Ik purjunoon jafa bhi tu hai meri jaan
Ik zindagi ka noor tu hai meri jaan
Ik lazawaal goonj tu hai meri jaan

~Roshan

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FOSe4NLBxj4[/YOUTUBE]

Edited by -Desi-IFer- - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago

And once again, you nail it.

my favorite verse:

"Meri tanhayee aisi, meri angdayee aisi
Teri aahat ke dam pe, aankh khulti ho jaisi
Tere lafzon ki baarish, teri baton ki aatish
Aaj bhi dil mein paida, mere karti hain larzish"

Thank U =]

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Roshan

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: V.I.P
And once again, you nail it.

my favorite verse:

"Meri tanhayee aisi, meri angdayee aisi
Teri aahat ke dam pe, aankh khulti ho jaisi
Tere lafzon ki baarish, teri baton ki aatish
Aaj bhi dil mein paida, mere karti hain larzish"

Thank U =]

Thanks, Jennie!! 😃

More to come. 😉

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Angel-likeDevil

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Posted: 11 years ago

DESSIII! yay you posted yor poems!

They're great from what I understood 😆 ..my poor hindi doesnt let me understand a few words 😆

thanks for sharing Desii.. keep up the work! 👏

BTW..this "jaan" of yours must've been so inspiring to make you go all poetic ;)

Edited by Angel-likeDevil - 11 years ago

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.SilentPrincess

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Posted: 11 years ago

This is amazing! You're really good. :)) Please do write more.. Btw do you write shayari?

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Roshan

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Angel-likeDevil
DESSIII! yay you posted yor poems!

They're great from what I understood 😆 ..my poor hindi doesnt let me understand a few words 😆

thanks for sharing Desii.. keep up the work! 👏

BTW..this "jaan" of yours must've been so inspiring to make you go all poetic ;)

Honeybunch, I made a mention of you in the chat club today, stating how much I had missed you. 😃

No probs, you can always ask me whatever doubts you have in your mind.

You're welcome, dear... And actually thanks to you for all the love and encouragement. Hahaha... My jaan is somewhere in the clouds, cuz the last time I checked I could only see her flying in the air. Hahahahaha..

😃

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