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Posted: 11 years ago

Dedicated to my two most favorite and closest sisters

Shiz and Fari, this one's especially for you guys😳

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As I grew up

I always found you by my side

Mom and dad often forgot to say goodnight but you never left me un tucked under the soft covers

 

As I grew up

I always faced challenges and judgment from the society

Soon my owners became the crowd too, but you still remained on my side

 

I would cry in the dark, under the shower, while everyone was asleep

They would believe my lies but you always saw through me

Saw through the lying eyes, the brimming tears in the steam, the quiet sobs in the dark

 

They never believed me, went unnoticed my pleas

Even though you were a part of them just as I was, you needn't ever a tearful plea

 

Life became rough

Not just for me, yours was worse too

Despite, I had always remembered that cheerful smile

Don't get me wrong but the pain in those eyes was visible too

 

Yet you assured that everything was right, just right

I knew you wouldn't tell me but I understood too well

 

Life took a u-turn and we stood where we had started

Again and again it all had repeated

 

I could take it no longer

Wonder what you went through

 

Our hopes had died, your smile soon faded

Pain in those eyes grew as we lived

 

Until those eyes closed too

 

i felt so alone, so rejected, in despair

But I made sure your smile didn't die

 

You no longer had pain but with that the soul was gone too

I let them say whatever they wanted but inside I knew you were always here

…right by my side

 

I still see you tugging me under the covers

Your scent lets me know you came to look me over

 

As I grew

I smiled for you

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awww it's BEAUTIFUL <3
You never fail to make me smile with your writing..it's so amazing!
I love youuu 🤗
It touched my heart 😳
& woh dedication ke liye bhi thank you 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: OnlyHope

Awww it's BEAUTIFUL <3

You never fail to make me smile with your writing..it's so amazing!
I love youuu 🤗
It touched my heart 😳
& woh dedication ke liye bhi thank you 🤗


THANKS FARIII🤗
and u never fail to make me smile with ur comments hehe
ILY2😳

it was completely out of boredom/randomness lol
thanks again!

OnlyHope thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago

& that's when we write the best :P

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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow that is beautiful writing Grace, loved it . <3
So lovely, thanks for PM . 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
I love this piece. So nice and so serene. thanks for the pm which led me to here. I really poems and this one is just amazing.
Do not hesitate to pm me in the future regarding such fantastic pieces.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very nice. Very solemn and beautiful. This poem had an ascetic value.

😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
thank you fiji, desi fire, cherry and baji!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Iqra, you just made me cry - with this poem. This is exceptionally beautiful - the emotions you so carelessly spilled onto papers spoke in volumes :) You weaved a tale through despairing words but they struck the heart - that's how beautiful this poem is!!

thank you for your index - slowly going to catch up with missed stories :)) & a 🤗for the dedication for this piece <33
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Posted: 11 years ago
very emotional poem dude, i love it ❤️