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FlowerHater

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Posted: 11 years ago

loved it vidishaa!!!!!! but awww ahem ended being alone!!!!!!!!!!

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Vinder90

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Posted: 11 years ago

wow ::: Umang dead LOL . .. a relief. . .

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Vidisha

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: abbay
loved it vidishaa!!!!!! but awww ahem ended being alone!!!!!!!!!!

Not exactly..he still has his cellphone and lappy with him...they are his jeevan saathi😆

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ritika

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Posted: 11 years ago

Nice ending. Loved the detective koki.

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-Eris-

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Posted: 11 years ago

Hey you ended it:-( i actually wanted it to go on some more but it was fab:-)

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Xarina

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Posted: 11 years ago

Vidisha. That was truly a great piece of writing. Read all parts together in one go. Fantastic.

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-neela-

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Posted: 11 years ago

Just caught up with the last 3 parts, they were great Vidisha, Detective Koki did it again 😛

Will go an read your new ff now, thanks for the PMs 😊

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swasthi

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Posted: 11 years ago

Great resolution by Kokila.

Really sad for Ahem as he was left all alone without any hope or dream of having Gopi in his life ever.

This was an exciting story Vidisha.

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Vidisha

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Dracula.bhai
Hmmm...
Ahem alone and Umang died
Nice part

Seeing you after a really long time...thanks dracs😊

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