MG FF - Piya Tose Naina Lage Re ON HOLD TILL 19/6 - Page 34

Posted: 11 years ago
UPDATING... again!!!
update will be short sorry! but I have planned something big for PART 15!


Edited by halemakhan - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago

She told Anvesha that she will go in after she goes and pays a Good Night to her mother-in-law' Anvesha respectfully agreed and walked off' little did she know that she was going somewhere else'

 

 

 

 

 

PART 14

 

 

 

Geet started walking down the long vast corridor to reach the destination Maan asked her to come to. The walls of the deserted corridor seemed as if they were still mourning at some kind of loss of some kind.

 

 

The paint was peeling off of the walls and each door was bolted shut with a secure lock... Geet carried on walking aimlessly down the corridor viewing it for the first time of her time at the Mehal.

Khurana Mehal ke ye ajaan jahga...

 

 

Geet carried on walking... the walls seemed to shriek with pain and grievance. But what was the reason? Were the walls trying to say something to Geet? Dust was building up in areas, but why has she never seen this place in Khurana Mehal?

 

 

Geet has been in this Mehal ever since one member of this family brought her into the house. That day that person brought Geet in to Khurana Mehal, but sadly fate planned that person's life to end on that very day. Until that point and today at this moment she had never seen this area of the Mehal.

 

Was it hidden from her on purpose?

 

 

 

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Geet looked fascinatingly around at the unexplored area... She suddenly heard some vessel near by. She swiftly hid behind a pillar and saw Meera opening a door with her unstable shaking hands. She was looking here and there to check if there was anyone else coming. She briskly opened the door and gazed in curiously.

 

 

Geet saw an image hung on the wall. She knotted her eyebrows seeing Meera this cautious, normally she acts very stiff and strict but today she looks awfully scared for some reason.

 

Before Geet could make out the image on the wall, Meera bolted the door from the inside, thus blocking her sight inside.

 

 

Geet became quite aware at what was happening... she carried on walking down the vast corridor and came to an old image which was covered with a sheet of dust. Geet grabbed her sari pallu and started to wipe it. She stared long and hard at the image... It almost watched Geet, trying to her something very important. Geet noticed a garland on the photo and shot a quick prayer to the deceased and made her way to Maan.

 

 

 

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Geet made her way to an open area. It was more like a courtyard and someone was there. Geet's audible anklets stopped that person from their exercise...

 

"Kaun hai wahan?" the voice asked.

 

"Humne pucha kaun hai wahan?" the voice sounded agitated at no reply.

 

Geet suddenly became afraid at the strong voice blooming out on her so she ran from there with all her might.

That person came from where they heard the sound and viewed the rest of the corridor to see no one was there anymore.

 

"Koi to ta wahan"they said to themself. He could smell a faint smell of perfume left off by Geet. He inhaled the scent strongly and uttered...

 

"Yahan koi ladki ti" A smirk implanted on his face and a sense of lust gathered.

 

 

 

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Geet finally reached the back balcony as per Maan's demands after an eventful adventure down the vast corridor of the Mehal.

 

Geet vividly saw a Gazebo Bed, which was lavishly decorated with a thick layer of red and white petals.

 

 



Geet reached the bed, which was also covered with candlelights at the perfect light intensity for the night.

 

However, Maan was not there... Geet could see a little note left on the bed... she opened it and read it with a smile...

 

 

Humari Jaan,

Humara intezaar karna... Ek surprise hai!

Pad kahu ga nahi!

 

I love you! Aap ka Dusht Danav

Maan

 

 

 

Geet read the letter and blushed at what he was pointing out to in the note...

 

Geet lay on the bed and kissed the note and kept it close to her heart...

Slowly she dosed off to a light slumber whilst awaiting his arrival...

 

 

 

She dreamt about Maan in her dreams...

 

 

It was the perfect weather and rain was on their four corners...

 

Behne De Mujhe Behne Mujhe Behne De... Mujhe Behne De!!

 

She was secure in Maan's arms and he was kissing her fervently adding to the passion of the weather and the emotions.

 

Behne de ghanghor ghata
Behne de paani ki tarah  


Geet was submitting herself to his love even in her dreams! Maan and Geet broke out of the hug and the fervent kissing and they gazed madly at each other.  


Saagar me ja girna hai
Behne de nadiya ki tarah  


 Maan scooped her up in his arms and twirled her around slowly, soaking in the passion of the atmosphere around.  


Beh ja beh jachal tod kinaare ko
Beh ja bah ja bhar de majhdhaare ko

 

 

 

Maan took her in his arms securely... Geet lost in his passion managed to indicating him to let go of her... He slowly placed her down and Geet pulled his hand to him causing the two to collide harshly yet briskly... Geet wrapped her arms around his neck and pulled him even more close closing the gap...

 

 

 

 

PRECAP' ___________

 

I need the likes!!! If I get them a big update is coming next week!! I have left you in suspense with the unknown precap but wait for the next update

 

 

Edited by halemakhan - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
hey superb updt..
bt m wondering who tht person was..

waiitng eagerly for d nxt part!!
Posted: 11 years ago

awsome update dear

dere r some hidden secrets in KHURANA PALACE

waiting to know abt dem

Posted: 11 years ago
Woo suspence se bhara part...
Now wat is hidden?? Wat is meera upto?? N who is dat person??
N maan kaha chala gaya??? Hope geet is not in danger...
Agar hai bhi toh maan shuld be there with her...
Posted: 11 years ago
small update
but very nice and thrilled
Posted: 11 years ago
Ye Maan kahan hai? Aur wo kon tha?

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