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FF- His Innocent Wife's Moment(Pt11 pg83) *Now Up! (Page 61)

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Posted: 20 March 2013 at 1:50pm | IP Logged
i love it that u explain everything in English yet write the dialogues in Hindi, it makes the feeling associated with the dialogues so much more deep n natural.
i loved the update.

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Posted: 20 March 2013 at 1:59pm | IP Logged
loved the frank n open heart to heart they hd...

i believe any prob can b solved if one is willing to discuss it with a cool n open mind...

beautifully written .. n  very very touching..

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Posted: 20 March 2013 at 2:04pm | IP Logged
Khusi forgive arnav very soon dear

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Posted: 20 March 2013 at 2:05pm | IP Logged
Really really nice update.


Ur rite with love comes the trust.

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Posted: 20 March 2013 at 2:36pm | IP Logged
Hey!
 
Part 9
Well-written. Needless to say really ... but nevertheless, I've said it
LOLLOLLOL
 
Its natural for Khushi to think about Arnav's lie ... if he lied to her about this, then that means that he could've lied to her about other things ... OuchAngryConfused
 
The use of Hindi here somehow suits the dialogues being spoken by Arnav and Khushi. Exceptional.
 
Ok. This isn't as straight forward as it seems ... I understand that Arnav loved, loves Khushi ... he wanted her body mind and soul. Lying to her ... that is something I really feel that he shouldn't have done. It may have taken longer for her to get intimate with him ... but it would've been worth the wait. Jeeez! Men! Most men and their ways!
 
I'm glad that Arnav told Khushi about the Jess fiasco.
 
 

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Posted: 20 March 2013 at 3:02pm | IP Logged
awesome
 
she is so sweet

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Posted: 20 March 2013 at 3:37pm | IP Logged
wonderful update loved it

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Posted: 20 March 2013 at 3:52pm | IP Logged
Poor khushi didnt like the hidding fact arnav should e punished more

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