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FF: Destination Called Love *Chapter 7 on Page 69 (Page 62)

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Posted: 25 June 2012 at 4:09am | IP Logged
Sobi great update 

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Posted: 25 June 2012 at 5:05am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Rabzooo

Res
Wow!!!! I must say it was worth the wait... Smile
That was amazing!!!
Their emotions their feelings so well described...I'm lost for words... Embarrassed
That was just so perfect...extremely adorable and a treat to read!
Great update absolutely loved it!!!!!
Continue soon:)


Thank you so much for ur lovely comment!!!
Its really appreciated!!Smile

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Posted: 25 June 2012 at 5:09am | IP Logged
Originally posted by --Siva--

No Matter what my position is! I claim by right Sobi! I will agree with u over here!!Approve

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Sobi, is that really you? Yes...the last time I checked!!!LOL Wrote such an update. Someone someday told me, they dont like love stories much and this one is just a try!Wink And as I have mentioned it was one of the most difficult chapters!!Embarrassed

Amazing as usual. And I loved the way you switched back and forth. Initially it seemed a little unclear as when u mentioned "His hand was still under her chin" I was wondering when did it go to chin.

When I read that last one. I was like Awww! Lost in their perfect moment.

Both were scared to make a move. How sacred is their feelings. I'm overwhelming with that.

Is it the end? Please dont say yes! I want you to continue in whatever ways you want and could!

Thank you so much.
Yes I thought it would be confusing initially, thats why I put a note in the beginning.
I am glad u have liked.
Your comments mean a lot to me Siva!!


Thanks for the pm Mech engineer. :D U r welcum!!!!LOL


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Posted: 25 June 2012 at 5:14am | IP Logged
it was marvelous...
i enjoyed reading it...

thanks so much for the pm...:)

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Posted: 25 June 2012 at 5:15am | IP Logged
Originally posted by AngelTeen

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Ah. Beautiful, author and reader I dont know the name of! Author? R u asking my name? Strange I know urs and u dontLOL Btw my name is Sobi.

The love making was sensuous and poetic and just completely natural for the state they have reached. The new writing style you were experimenting with...I really liked it and there was no roughness in transition. :)

The whole thing started off with Khushi losing her cool but then ended on such a beautiful understanding! I do hope you are continuing with this story. :)

Aww...Thank you so much.
Its not ending yet...there is still a lot to come...and the prologue is still remaining.


And I dont mind waiting for the update when it is so beautiful! But thank you for the dedication! :)

I really appreciate ur comment Rae.
Thank you so much for commenting!!!Smile



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Posted: 25 June 2012 at 5:33am | IP Logged
Originally posted by peppygeek

Damn. I wanted the 1st spot :(


It doesnt matter...u always have the first spot in my heart!!!Blushing

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Posted: 25 June 2012 at 5:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Shruti_P

Aww shucks I again didn't get 1st position
No probs
Resing now

Gosh sobi you really using my siggies thanks re
Ur dabba looks shrutified nowROFL


Its ok Shruti.

Yes thats what I said...It is certainly Shrutified!!LOL

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Posted: 25 June 2012 at 5:43am | IP Logged
Amazing update!  Both were scared to make a move. How sacred is their feelings. I'm overwhelming with it.Clap

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