Originally posted by: peppygeekThe tension was there alright.
Arnav's possessiveness and pride about having Khushi as his life partner and Khushi's nervousness and trying to understand Arnav as she spent more time with him.I think you did it extremely subtly and moved the storyline as well which is extremely commendable.Poor Arnav was left speechless by Khushi! I think Khushi surprises Arnav a lot!I want a chapter from Arnav's POV now. He is such an interesting character!
Originally posted by: ss374
Thank you so much for the lovely comment.
To write a chapter from Arnav's POV is very difficult...he is a ver complex character!!!😆
But I will try in the next chapter!!!😳
Originally posted by: peppygeek
Because he's so complex that's why he's so interesting!I've have a strong feeling that you will surprise me in the next chapter 😃
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