NEW OS: PLEASE STAY!! - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
that was excellent!!! loved it... do pm me when u update
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Posted: 12 years ago

I so wanted to read a story like this, where Khushi leaves Arnav and he is totally dejected. But he comes home and finds her there. Thanks you honey for this.

A beautiful piece, love reading it.
You have done a wonderful job :).
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sim, its beautiful as always
I loved the ending a lot.
What a graceful charecter of khushi is portrayed.
She has always been the fighter.
This time again she has proved it.
Fantastically written each and every emotiones very simply.
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow that was like a rollercoaster of emotions! I felt the pain, the anguish, the regret, the relief and the happiness all at once! Loved it! love ur writing it was so easy to keeep up with and the twists were amazing! absolutely SUPERB! LOVED IT a million! when he walked out first it killed me! LOL loved it!
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Posted: 12 years ago
This is nowhere near crappy! This is AWESOME!! I loved it!!
 
 
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Posted: 12 years ago
it's beautiful
so emotional yet  very subtle
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautifully written... she stayed back 😃

loved it so much ,gonna read it again n dream about it 😍
Thanks for the pm dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice os
n now this was different i expected the same manaofying scene n then khushi forgiving him, but this was nice n different
especially the ending was calm n beautiful
n like i always say u have got a thing to come up with unique n good concepts
nikki
Edited by niknavyu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
aww..lovely Os😊
At frst i thought she left him but the ending was a pleasant surprise :)
really liked it!! thanx for d pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
aww so cute, love the ending :)