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JuArnav Senior Member

Joined: 18 March 2012
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Posted: 04 July 2012 at 2:48pm | IP Logged
waiting for next part.. nice one

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BARUN-myladdu Goldie

Joined: 18 September 2011
Posts: 1504

Posted: 04 July 2012 at 3:03pm | IP Logged

Hello darlings'

I thought of dedicating few chaps only to ARHI

No other bakwas 'cuz in d future chaps der ll b loads of drama,MU,tension n probly no romance 'bt hey now is nt d time for al dt'keeping d suspense alive lets move on to our ARHI FILLED CHAP Big smile






"Mr Raizada'"

"Mr Raizada '"

"If u want us to take a break'"

"U can come back later if u want.."

"bhai'" akash spoke finally'

"bhai'r u ok??"

"huh" arnav came back to reality '

he looked arnd'where khushi??
dis got him realy pissed 'he wanted to scream at whoever it ws to disturb his daydreaming..


he saw a group of employees n delegates looking at him suspiciously 'some confused..some scared'some worried'

never ve they seen asr like dis'his work ws everything to him n now he ws nt concentrating on dt'looking at him in a such position'employees were obviously thinking dt surely something must ve gone horribly wrong dt made dis WORKOHOLIC change'ofcourse dey were relieved 'bt stil'


arnav looked arnd n realized dt he ws attending d most important meeting n his mind drifted away..thnking bou khushi'

khushi staying away from him ve done to dis to him'

he cud nt concentrate on anything else'all he wanted was to gt her back to his house'TO HIM'


"aa'ahem'..I'.ok gentlemen'I ll xcuse myslf 'I ve got something urgent to do'akash'plz take over'" n walked out of conference room'leaving behind confused set of employees n his brother

well dey were nt d only one surprised wid his behaviour'

he himself ws surprised'

he never had to lie to anyone before for any of his actions so y now??





Arnav reached laxminagar'

He had parked his car away from her house near d market. so dat khushi or anybody who knew him cud see him'.

He was thinking of going inside d house wid some or d other xcuse'when he saw her in d market 'she was done wid d vegetables n ws going out n stopped near a shop'she ws stuffing something inside her purse n failed to do so as she ws distracted by something'.

He came out of his car'.n by d time he reached her she was already gone n was on d opposite side of d road at d kirana store..

He picked up d papery lying on d ground...

Aloo- check

Bhindi- check

Tomatoes ' check

Hate arnavji '

Don't miss him'

Arnav smiled'typical khushi he thought

This ll never happen khushi'n u knw it'

And then he stood infront of d window of d shop where khushi ws standing before..




Khushi bought whatever she remembered from d list'

Bargained wid d shopkeeper'arnav cud nt resist smiling at her..

She is now Mrs Arnav Singh Raizada n she stil bargains??


While walking back to her house'it started raining heavily'

Khushi looked up at d sky'her face was glowing wid joy'she wanted to play in d'disappointed flashed on her face when she looked down on d bags she ws holding'

Bt of course there was no stopping dis girl

Arnav was watching her'wid intense passion'

Khushi ws njying d rain when'she felt him'

He is here!!

She searched the streets'

Arnav hid himself before she cud see him


Khushi hmm'u knw whn I m arnd dnt u???stil wana "hate me or want 2 miss me" ???

he saw khushi rush back to her house'

He was about to leave when she ws standing at d door n sneezing'he stopped 'oh wow'dis is al wat ws needed'now she is gona catch cold'"PERFECT" he murtered angrily'

it took him al his strength to stop him form marching in 'he cant let anything ruin his plan..NOT EVEN HIM!!!



Buaji n garima rushed inside khushiz room n saw a bewildered khushi staring down on her bed where there was a huge bad dt buaji had received earlier on d name of Mrs Arnav Singh Raizada


Khushi was standing covering her face wid her hands'widened eyes'she stood der unable to believe wat layed infront of her'

It ws d clutch she had seen on dt shop'nt just 1'7 of al d colors available..

"ka hua bitiya" garima asked'"ye sab kya hai???"

"ye koi dekar gaya thodi der pehle'ye sanka devi ke liye 'ka dukaan khulat rahi ho sanka devi??"

khushi dint react'

"ae sankadevi'" she shaked her'


khushi cud jst nt make out hw dese clutches got here'in her bedroom'

nt jst one'so many of dem n al in diff colors

how did'where did this'oh god'I knew it'


Oh so he is here'spyig on me is he??

A sense of relief hit her..

Only den she realized dt she ws actly waiting for him to come

Buaji ws shaking her n came back to her senses'


"buaji ye bag kisne laya??"

"koi aya tha'hum ka poch rahe hai...tum koi purses ka business karat rahi ho ka??"

"hare nandkishore'kapde badle naahi ab tak??"

"ha bas'abhi'aplog jaeye na.."


khushi closed d door..latched it'n started changing her clothers'

"oh u'MR RAIZADA'U 'U'.now u r tying to buy me by getting me expensive giflts'."

U gt it wrong her mind said'

She brushed it off'

NO'she ws right'

Her eyes went on d vase set at d corner of her room'she narrowed her eyes'.OHHH'FLOWERS TOO???

"Very good mr raizada '.u r nt gona get wt u want!!"


"Oh devi mayya'"

She checked herslf'she ws lil feverish'

"All I need is buaji's kada n I ll b fine...I need to lie down for a bit'n den go n ve it in a while'"

D moment she hit d piloow she went to sleep'


She ws woken up by d doc'

She running high temperature by now'

She cud nt make herslf get up n d doc asked her not to

Wat happened??

How long ve I been sleeping??

Doc ws checking her asking her to breath deeply n placed  d stet on her chest'

Buaji must ve gt d doc..

Itz just a fever'her kada wud ve been enough'

Doc told her dt shez fine bt ll ve to stay away from rains now'"barish mein khelne ki umar nahi hai apki Mrs Raizada"

She ws too tired to even try to make sense out of wat d doc ws saying'how did he know'oh whatever..n dozed off




after a while she cud nt sleep'it gt horribly cold

"y is it so cold" she shivered

she den suddenly felt warm

she moved up a little more towards d warm end'

buaji must ve turned on d a heater...n drifted to a deep slumber...of course der ws no heater...she ws in d warm embrace of her husband



hmmm so how ws it guyz??

do leave ur comments darlings...i ve already said a million times...I LOVE READING DEM...ENCOURAGES ME LOADZ...Big smile

n also from now on m gona send pmz only to those who comment...a line or two wont take up much time of urz n try n do so if u wnt updatesBig smile

no pmz 4 silent readers...sowie

buh bye


Edited by BARUN-myladdu - 10 July 2012 at 11:47am

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PrncssOfHeart Goldie

Joined: 12 April 2012
Posts: 1059

Posted: 04 July 2012 at 3:18pm | IP Logged
yayy!! M 1st to comment...
It ws so cute...luvd hide n seek of arnav frm must b sent by him only...totally i luvd it...:)

Edited by CutieSanaya - 04 July 2012 at 3:27pm

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1DAlice Goldie

Joined: 15 February 2012
Posts: 2002

Posted: 04 July 2012 at 3:54pm | IP Logged
Awesome update!!
Arnav must have been the one to send the doctor and now he is there with her!!
aww that's so sweet!!
Continue soon!!Smile

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bavucute Senior Member

Joined: 12 March 2012
Posts: 328

Posted: 04 July 2012 at 3:59pm | IP Logged
so beautifully update... cud imagine ASR's love & KUshi's Naughtiness ..plz update next part as early as well. Smile 

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LilaUK Senior Member

Joined: 12 March 2012
Posts: 596

Posted: 04 July 2012 at 4:53pm | IP Logged
Awww that was so sweet! He snuck into her room to warm her up and take care of her because she got sick.
Just discovered your FF and it's wonderful! Keep writing pls!!

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velangini IF-Rockerz

Joined: 09 December 2011
Posts: 5291

Posted: 04 July 2012 at 9:29pm | IP Logged
oh my that was so cute
adorable update
mr.raizada wooing mrs raizada
did arnav sneak into khushi's house
loved it

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kinjalcp87 IF-Dazzler

Joined: 26 April 2012
Posts: 4872

Posted: 04 July 2012 at 9:42pm | IP Logged
sweet update...
arnav is so much carrying abut her... 

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