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FF - WHISPERING HEARTS (NEW OS ADDED) (Page 81)

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Posted: 06 June 2012 at 12:37pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by nizwa_hazel

recently came across ur chapters..read al 23 in one go! Big smile
amazing re!! Clap
there are very few one shots that have grabbed my attension...kya kare...m a picky reader LOL
i like those wich retain khushi nd arnav character... Embarrassed
hate it wen ppl give them dialogues that they cn never say Confused

loved ur style of writing Hug
pls update soon...
nd also pm me :))
 
hey thnx a million hun...i like to write wt i might get to see in d our serial ...n dtz y i dnt change d nature of our characters...yup...ll surely pm ya on nxt update

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Posted: 06 June 2012 at 12:38pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by bridgeofdreams

I really missed ur updates!!! after so long!!!
Anyways, I liked this. And this is ou Arnav who can do everything 4 his Di. so sweet!!!
Excited to read the next part!!!
Thanks 4 d PM.
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 ya hun i kinda gt busy wid clg...i ll dfntly try 2 update soon...Big smile
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Posted: 06 June 2012 at 12:40pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Soloperson

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Good update ...bro sis relationship a the best...you did great justice in depicting them, now we r waiting for you do justice with husband and wife tooWinkEmbarrassed
 
where were u hun???i kinda gt in2 d habit of reading ur comments on d very 1st page of d update..anywayz...hmm...i hpe so too Wink

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Posted: 07 June 2012 at 7:02am | IP Logged
awww..sooo swt...!!!
baby arnav n baby khushi,,...!!!

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Posted: 07 June 2012 at 10:50am | IP Logged
CHAP 24

while walking back upto his room...
he remembered wt his di had said..."one day u ll ve ur own children..."
jst d thought of having his own children ws so beautiful...he cud nt help smiling...his children...wid khushi...
he had never thought of this before...
he never thought of many thngs like dis before...bt al dt happened..
he never thought of falling in love wid some1...
atleast nt wid some like khushi...
bt today...she means world to him...
she ve changed his world upside...or she had set it right...
he had never ever thought of proposing anyone...bt again...he did it...
he had never imagined him going out of d way 2 make thngs perfect as he did dis evening...js to let dt girl knw wt she meant to him...
n before dt...came his MARRIAGE...
dt ws never der on his to-do list...
n nw since few days hez trying hard to b a gud husband for khushi...he never had thought of dis either...
n NOW...
he is thnking bou his own kids...
LIFE has surely taken an entirely different route...
a pleasant route...wid destination...wid a beautiful partner he had never dreamt of...
life looks good now...
he smiles to himlf...
he is looking forward to it...

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"khushi...u ve gt to give some answers tonight..."
he raced to his room...
he enters his room n finds khushi sitting on d stool infront of d mirror...

she is looking at her ring admiringly...
cute smile playing on her lips...
remebering how dt ring gt der...
blushing silently...
how thngs ve changed overnight...

khushi ws startled when he took her hand...
she never heard or saw him come inside...
"kya soch rahi ho??"
he sat on d floor infront of her...
staring right into her eyes...
"kuch nahi..." she breaks d eye contact...
arnav took her hand n kissed it...
EYELOCK
RABBAA VVEEE...

he makes her get up n closes d gap between dem...
neither of dem leave der gaze...
he takes her towards d bed...
khushiz dupatta gets stuck on d stool...
she snaps out of d moment...
hey devi mayya...wt m i doing??
she takes her time to remove her dupatta...so dt she gets some time to thnk over her nxt move...
i m nt supposed to fall for dis...arrgghhh...thnk khushi thnk...bt firstly control urslf...
"humein umm...bhook lagi hai...i ll go n get somethng ...umm...do u want somethng??" she asks him trying hard to control her naughty smile...
stop being such a tease khushi...he wants to scream at her...
bt d ASR inside him wants to play along...
"hmm...ok ...no u go ahead...m nt dt hungry..."

khushi noticed dt he is annoyed...bt of course he does nt wana show it...n she is totally fine by dt 

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they ve changed into night wears...
khushi ws preparing d bed..
arnav stopped for a moment ...n den straight away went to the other side of d bed n layed down...
he knew how khushi wud react to dis...
he badly wanted to steal a glace bt decided against it...scared dt he might give away somethng...
he faced d other way to hide his smirk...

khushi looked at him confused when she saw him walking towards d bed n her jaw dropped whn he took over d other side of d bed..

she took her pillow cursing under her breath...walking towards d recliner...
"khushi wt r u doing??" - arnav asked
wt do u thnk m doing she thought..."umm...sone ja rahe hai aur kya?"
"khushi...i thnk ...atlst NOW v can share d same bed..dnt u thnk??"
she started to protest...bt closed her mouth...as she had nothng to say dt wud make sense for her actions...

she walked towards d bed reluctantly n layed down...
she made sure dt she ws at d corner most area of d bed..far far away from him

arrghhh...devi mayya...for once...cant u b on my side??
i want to punish him...i dnt want thngs to b so easy for him...
n here u r making him win...like always...

NEXT MORNING

khushi woke up late...
she had d best sleep after ages...
she tries opening her eyes...bt had to shut it down immediately thnx to d sun rays falling directly on her...
she dint wanted to get up anyway...five more mins...
never before her pillow ws so comfy she thought...bt ws it making sounds??
she gt up a bit n arranged herslf on it again...
she cud stil hear it...
DHAK DHAK DHAK DHAK 
her eyes snapped open...
HEARBEATS
she jumped up...
n saw arnav sleeping peacefully...
how did i gt here???wat on earth ws i doing??
was i sleeping on his chest????????????

THE END

PRECAP- khushi ws in d kitchen...touching her lips n smiling shyly...remembering how..."hey bhagwan khushi...ye kya hogaya??" n ws pointing towards her neck...

i cant blve i m writing al dis...lol
thoda romance to banta hai boss WinkLOL
do leave ur comments sweethearts...
n add me 4 pmz...

NEXT 



Edited by BARUN-myladdu - 08 June 2012 at 1:20pm

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Posted: 07 June 2012 at 12:18pm | IP Logged
Nice update!!!!!Smile

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Posted: 07 June 2012 at 12:21pm | IP Logged
Awesome
just loved it

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Posted: 07 June 2012 at 12:21pm | IP Logged
really beautiful update...

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