FF - WHISPERING HEARTS (NEW OS ADDED) - Page 24

nice update...
thanks 4 d pm

don't tell me it's shyam😡

Hey loved d update...we got to see d deep bonding between arnav and anjali. I could imagine arnav crying his heart out :( I think we had enough of dragging so next should be confrontation. I am sure it must be tht creep shyam who walked in at d end, so hopefully arnav's gonna hear dem and realize hw much khusi loves him. Cnt wait update soon :D

great os..do pm me next tym u update;)

hey.. i juz read all 10 parts and i lovd it.. do pm me when you update .. :)

Nice update!!

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"CHAP 10 - arnav realises his mistakes  

arnav hugs anjali n starts crying'.
anjali ' "chottey tum jante ho na hum tumse zyada der tak naraaz nahi rehsakte'"
arnav does nt let her go'
anjali ' "shhh chottey'bas'."
she takes him towards d bed n makes him sit on d bed along wid her..
but he gets up n sits on d ground instead..places his head on anjaliz lap'n cries his heart out...
anjali "bas kijiiye chottey..rona band kijiye'.humein bataeye kya hua'ap khushiji ko lekar pareshan hai na??"

ARNAV'S OFFICE
khushi reached arnavz office
"arey khushi bhabhi ap yaha " ' one of d staff member asked
khushi ' "ji ha hum arnavji se milne aye hai'wo apne cabin mein hai shayad.." n starts walking towards d stairs..
"nahi to'sir to office mein nahi hai khushi bhabhi.."
khushi ' "kyaaa?????"

"ha shayad kahi gaye hai'ap unke cabin mein intezar karlijiye...wo ate hi hunge "
khushi - "ji shukriya"

khushi enters his cabin'.aj aisa kyu ho raha hai'hum jab'she looks at anjaliz pic whch is present on d shelf'she picks it up'smiles looking at anjaliz beautiful n innocent face'hum jaante hai arnav ji k ap apni di se bahut pyar karte hai par ye sachayi apko jaan na zaruri hai'.ye jaan na zaruri hai k apke jija ji k asliyat kya hai'apko ye jaan kar dukh to bahut hoga'kya hum theek kar rahe hai??(rewrite)

ARNAV'S BEDROOM -
anjali here thinks dt arnav is crying out of his guilt cuz he raised his hand on khushi..n nw he has realized wt he has done ws wrong

arnav remembers hw easily he believed shyam dt day'hw stupidly he fell for his trap dt both of dem loved each other..n al dis while he ws torturing khushi like hell'making her suffer for trying to ruin his sisterz life'.he thot hez an idiot for not trusting khushi'hw he forced her into marriage'
 
 arnav ' "di (sniff) agar hum se ghalti hojaye to humein kya karna chahiye??"
anjali cries along wid him ' "chottey koi bhi ghalti itni badi nahi hoti jise maaf nahi kiya ja sakta "
par agar hum ne aisi ghalti ki hai jise maafi mil hi nahi sakti'he cluthes her tightly'"agar kisi ka dil thod diya ho to'kya wo humein maaf kardenge ?"
anjali lifts his head'wipes his tears ' "chottey khushiji tumhe maaf kardengi'kyuki hum jaante hai'wo tumse bahut bahut pyar karti hai "
arnav ' "di wo mujhe maaf karegi na???wo mujhe'(sniff) chod kar to nahi chale jaegi??"
anjali "nahi chottey'tum aisa kyu keh rahe ho'rishte itni asani se toot te nahi hai "
arnav di main apko kaise batao'maine jo khushi k saath kiya hai'.
anjali ' "chottey uto...bas...ab uto jao aur khushi ji se baat karo"
d moment he heard khushiz name..he instantly gt up...wipes his tears..hugs anjali...n runs out to find khushi...

ARNAV'S OFFICE-
khushi thinks over d whole matter again'n decides not to tel arnav anything...not yet...hum sahi samay ane ka intezar karenge'
n leaves d office

Meanwile at RM-
arnav searches d whole house...he cant find khushi anywhere'
he den asks payal
"wo to apse milne apke office chali gayi...par ap to yaha hai..." - payal
arnav "office??theek hai main use fone karta ho.."
payal "arnavji to to apna fone ye chod kar gayi hai"
arnav leaves d house immediately n reaches office...

but khushi ve already left d office n goes to d near by temple...n prays "devi mayya...ap hi humein sahi raasta bataeye...hum theek kar rahe hai ya nahi?humein to kuch nahi samaj ara...bas ap hi hamari madad karsakti hai"

khushi den reaches home...straight away goes to her room...
bt d room is empty..."devi mayya...ap kya nahi chahti k hum sab kuch arnavji ko bata de??"

she walks towards d pool side...sits der..wraps her arms arnd her knees..."ap kaha ho arnavji ?"

somebody opens d door n walks in...

THE END 

precap- no precap 😆 jst like our serial dese days 😛

hw ws it guyz???u thnk i shud drag it further or jump to der confrontation???
lemme knw ha...m gona write d nxt chap based on ur comments...
n sweethearts i m nt getting enough response...kyu???though d views count is pretty gud bt d replies r nt much...n i dnt evn demand for so n so no. of pages of response only den i ll update d nxt chap n al...i only want 2 knw if u al r njying or liking it or nt...so plz do comment...positive or negative...m open for both 😃
thnx

awsum...<3<3

Awww, Both Didn't Meet Each Other :( 🥺

can't wait for the confrontation update soon

real sweet :) keep up d good work...and thanx for ur PM :)