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Posted: 12 years ago
chap 7 - shyam n khushi - CONFRONTATION 

khushi turns arnd 'itz SHYAM
she pushes his hand away'
shyam- "khushi ji ab ap ki tabiyat kaisi hai?"
khushi ' "ap se matlab?"
shyam ' "arey khushiji..kaise nahi matlab'bataeye na'"
khushi- "dekhiye shyam ji humne ap se pehle bhi kaha hai..hum se dur rahiye"
n she goes towards d door

shyam ' "waise ranisaheba ne humein sab kuch bata diya"

khushi stops'


shyam ' "nahi nahi ap jana chahti hai to jaeye" (wid his evil smile plastered on his face)
khushi- "ap kya keh rahe hai hamein kuch nahi samaj ara ha..aur na hi hum jaan na chahte hai "
shyam ' "ye hi k arnav ap par haath uta te hai"
khushi- "kya bakwas kar rahe hai ap shyamji'aisa kuch nahi hai aur di aisa kuch keh bhi nahi sakti"
shyam- "ab ap to aisa keh rahi hai par doctor ne jo kaha wahi raani saheba ne hamein bataya'"


khushi den recollects d morning scene'anjali ws rude wid arnav'cud dis b d reason ??

shyam- "kya hua khushiji?ab yakeen hogaya na hamari baat par??"
khushi- "arnavji hamare saath aisa kuch nahi karte'"
shyam ' "ab ap ye baat sabit kaise karengi khushiji..ye khush rehna ka natak karke??"
khushi- "kya matlab hai apka'HUM KHUSH HAI'humein natak karne ki koi zarurat nahi hai'par hum ap se ye sab kyu keh rahe hai'humein kisi ko kuch safayi dene ki zarurat nahi hai"
shyam- "khushiji'haha'apko kya lagta hai'humein kuch pata nahi hai??kis tarah arnav ne ap se zabardasti shaadi ki'.wo b ye dhamki de kar k wo payal aur akash ki shadi nahi hone denge.."

khushi is SHOCKED'
khushi- "ap'kaise'"
shyam- "bhang ka rang to lana hi tha khushi ji" (he smiles)
khushi stil in a state of shock'recovers'ji nahi'arnav ji aur humne isliye shadi ki kyuki'
shyam ' "ab ap aur kya kahengi khushiji..rehne dijiye'natak khatam'parda gira dijiye"
khushi- "HUM NE UNSE ISLIYE SHADI KI KYU KI HUM UNSE PYAR KARTE HAI!!!!"

shyamz smile wipes off'he walks up2 khushi'holds her aggressively ' "ap kisi aur se pyar nahi karsakti khushiji'ap sirf aur sirf hamari hai"
khushi ' "humne arnav ji se shadi ki hai'hum patni hai unki'chodiye humein'"
shyam- "nahi khushi ji'ye mumkin nahi hai'hum apko apni zindagi se aisa alag nahi karne denge"
khushi ' "humne kaha chodiye humein'.SLAP!!
shyam getz a gud well deserved slap on his face
khushi ' "HUM MRS ARNAV SINGH RAIZADA HAI...HUM ARNAVJI SE BEINTEHA MOHABBAT KARTE HAI AUR HAMESHA KARTE RAHINGE..IS BAAT KO YAAD RAKHIYE...AUR IS THAPPAD KO BHI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

she runs inside'she feels so disgusted arnd shyam'she wants to reach her room as soon as possible'js when she enters through d door..she collides wid some1'some1 who ws standing at d door
khushi is stunned - "ap???"

hw ws it??did u al like??? i dint want to wait anylonger...hehe
do leave ur comments...n 4 pm...u knw wt 2 do πŸ˜Š
thnx

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Posted: 12 years ago
πŸ‘Wow just awesome, this chap7 is so far the bestest best...πŸ‘
Mark my words the cv's are sure to copy ur idea into the serial, this is just too good...
Please do continue and thanks for the pm , one more thing the link you have provided on the first page for chap 7 is not taking to page 21 so kindly edit that...

Great job again!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
shyam deserves much more than just a slap😑
great update
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
luvd it...hope arnav heard everything...
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Posted: 12 years ago
This content was originally posted by: mannymo

πŸ‘Wow just awesome, this chap7 is so far the bestest best...πŸ‘

Mark my words the cv's are sure to copy ur idea into the serial, this is just too good...
Please do continue and thanks for the pm , one more thing the link you have provided on the first page for chap 7 is not taking to page 21 so kindly edit that...

Great job again!!!!



thnk u sooo muuchh...i realy want dis too happen in d serial too u knw...i had imagined dis ages ago...n ws hoping dis happen in d serial..bt it does nt look like dt nw...so thot y nt put it out here...
i did d editing...sorry 4 d inconvinience...
thnx a billion...ur comment is a gr8 boost πŸ˜Š
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Posted: 12 years ago
This content was originally posted by: baldyspook99



thnk u sooo muuchh...i realy want dis too happen in d serial too u knw...i had imagined dis ages ago...n ws hoping dis happen in d serial..bt it does nt look like dt nw...so thot y nt put it out here...
i did d editing...sorry 4 d inconvinience...
thnx a billion...ur comment is a gr8 boost πŸ˜Š


Aww...you deserve every bit of it...This part you wrote may not happen now but in future when the clearing of MU happens your scene makes perfect sense,for sure Shyam and Khushi dialogues,I am actually pretty sure...awesome job!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update!
I believe it's Arnav at the door!
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
it was tooo good...the one standing at the door must be arnav...ek dhappad ke sath do punch free..thanks 4  the pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
This content was originally posted by: mannymo


Aww...you deserve every bit of it...This part you wrote may not happen now but in future when the clearing of MU happens your scene makes perfect sense,for sure Shyam and Khushi dialogues,I am actually pretty sure...awesome job!!!!



*blush blush* thnx alot hun...i hpe d MU clears off soon...bt nt until ipl matches r over...cvs r hoping 2 gt gud trps post ipl so til den..dey r gona simply drag d MU...anyways...thnx alot πŸ€—
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Posted: 12 years ago
this has to be the best of all!!!!!
dhamakedaar ending!!!!
jst loved it!!!!