FF - WHISPERING HEARTS (NEW OS ADDED) - Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
This is sooo good i am wondering what khushi will say to him. I hope he finally finds out that khushi didnt do anythung in both the serial and in your short story i hope to see some rabba ve in the next part plz PM me
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Posted: 12 years ago
chap 5 - khushi makes up her mind

ARNAV'S BEDROOM-
arnav- "tumhare haath par ye nishan kaise aye khushi??"
khushi- "nishan??" she luks at her hands...den it hits her instantly-SHYAMJI

khushi is scared to say anythng...kya kahe hum arnav ji se
she lukz away..."wo...humein...nahi pata..."

arnav- points finger at her "dnt u dare lie to me khushi"
khushi- "hum keh rahe hai na...humein nahi pata"

arnav is furious nw..she goes near khushi - "tum jaanti ho di aur doctor kya soch rahe hai??tumhari waje se dey think..."

khushiz eyes r filled wid tears...shez scared to death...she thnks arnav ll hurt her again to get d truth out of her dis time...she looks at him...wid pleading eyes to stop 

arnav backs off...he can handle any accusation...he can handle any damn situation bt dis...he cant see khushi in tears...
he storms off...out of d room...

khushi starts crying...she cries her heart out...bas kar khushi bas...n she makes up her mind 

NEXT MORNING-
khushi gets up wid a heavy head...
she tries 2 get up bt she feels to weak to support herslf..
she realises some1z holding her hand... sitting right beside her 
arnavji...
she tries to set her hand free..arnav wakes up...n immediately takes his hand away
arnav- "kuch chahiye tumhe khushi"
khushi shakes her head - "nahi "
she tries to sit up...arnav helps her...he hold her shoulder n makes her sit right...
js den khushi rests her head on arnavs chest...closes her eyes...places her hand on his chest 
*rabbaa vveee in bg*😊
arnav wraps arnd his hand..
humein maaf kardijiye arnavji par hum majboor hai ...thought khushi 
khushi mein na chahkar b tumhari takleef ki waja kyu banjaata hu - arnav 

khushi gets up...looks into his eyes...
arnav looks back...

humein ye karna hoga...phir  - khushi

khushi- "hum apse kuch kehna chahte hai arnavji"

THE END 

wt is it dt khushi wants to talk bou??has she decided to arnav all bou shyam??ll she b able 2 do so??ll he believe her??

hw ws it??i knw itz short...i ve got 2 rush 2 d clg nw...
do leave ur comments...n ask me 2 pm if u want
thnx 

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Edited by BARUN-myladdu - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
am i first? if yes then YEAH!!! I absolutely love how this is going.. but im scared.. WHAT THE? what is she going to say? LOL i love them... and the rabba ve scene...awww so romantic and sweet! they're perfect for each other!
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh man cliff hanger...not fair...brilliant update continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: MrsRaizada101

am i first? if yes then YEAH!!! I absolutely love how this is going.. but im scared.. WHAT THE? what is she going to say? LOL i love them... and the rabba ve scene...awww so romantic and sweet! they're perfect for each other!



hey thnx alot hun😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: flowers4u

oh man cliff hanger...not fair...brilliant update continue soon



haha lol...ya sure hun 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
OH man
Great update

awesome 

thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Mindblowing.
Do write often.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Omg again an awesome update...
Aww this suspense will kill me,...lolz

But it makes story interesting too... Hehehe


Upd. Soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow!!! Now I am completely hooked on to the story, please continue..thanks for the PM...