Afsar Bitiya


Afsar Bitiya
Afsar Bitiya


MeriAashiquithh Senior Member

Joined: 07 July 2011
Posts: 396

Posted: 10 April 2012 at 3:17am | IP Logged
Helloo friends,after watching yesterday episode all are i thought of writing as OS on PRISHNA.

Hope u guys will like it.

Vidyapathi House:

Krishna is not getting sleep.she is remembering pinto words 'we cannot meet again'.she is getting restless.

She comes out and stand there.

Vidyapathi who comes out for something looks at krishna who is looking lost.

He calls krishna.

No response from krishna.

He calls out loud.

Vidya:krishna beta.

Krishna come out of trance.

Krishna:what papa.

Vidya comes to krishna and asks

Vidya:what r u thinking beta at this time that too outside.

Krishna:nothing papa.just came out for air.

Vidya smiles and says

vidya:i know what u r thinking.u r thinking about rishta na.krishna whatever u do i will support u.but do the thing that u feel right at heart.i trust ur decision.

Krishna nods her head in approvement and says

Krishna:thanks papa.i know u are always with me forever.

Vidya:i cannot be with u forever.i can be with u before ur marriage.i want to tell u something that is very important.but i am waiting for the time came.krishna every person needs a partner in this world.u have to choose a partner like that he have to support u in ur hurdles.he has to involve in ur happy and sad moments.he has to understand ur views n feelings.thats it.u will have a complete life when u get a person like that.that is my wish.

Vidya places hand on krishna head lovingly and says..

Vidya:may god give all happiness to my child.

Krishna smiles at her father.

Vidya:lets go inside.

They go inside.krishna goes to her room.

After so much time,she gets sleep.

Krishna is looking herself in mirror.while she is going.
Someone calls her.she looks everywhere and no one is there.she looks at mirror.she finds her soul there.

Krishna soul:krishna what do u think about pinto ji.

Krishna:what will i think.

Soul:what is ur opinion on him.

Krishna:pinto ji is a nice guy.he always support me.
And krishna tells soul all the moments they shared.

Soul:i am feeling familiar with his character somewhere.
Ya.your father has told you to choose a partner like pinto ji.

Krishna is shocked to hear that.

Krishna comes out of the dream.and is very shocked with the dream.

Well i will write os in 3 parts.i will write 2nd part after.

will krishna is going to propose pinto ji?

This is my first os on prishna.

If u like press will be an encouragement for further writing.

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AngeloScuro IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 10 April 2012 at 3:18am | IP Logged
Nice . Please do carry on.Big smile

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nishersal Senior Member

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Posted: 10 April 2012 at 6:16am | IP Logged
very nice...awaiting Part 2

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moniluvskinshuk IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 10 April 2012 at 8:28am | IP Logged
Woww Very very nice OS . Plzzz continue Big smile

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Dilbole_ShiOmRu IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 10 April 2012 at 8:58am | IP Logged
Wow Nice waiting for next part

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-SilverDragon- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 13 April 2012 at 6:11am | IP Logged
Great Part please do carry on Thumbs Up

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wadi..doll IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 13 April 2012 at 6:55am | IP Logged
Wowww Ver Nice OS please Continue Love it ...

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sandiab IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 18 April 2012 at 7:50am | IP Logged
really enjoyed cnt wait 4 the next part

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