Hey Awesome FF. I read all in one shot and i Loved it! In the back of my mind I kept thinking, wouldn't it be great if they run this track on the actual show. VERY WELL DONE!!👏👏👏
Also one of my fav descriptions was when you were describing baby Rohan responding to Priya's touch and you said he sqeezed his legs together and tried to shrink himself. SOOO CUTE, when i read that i was like AWww.
I could go on for a while with compliments BUT very very very well written and an amazing story!! Keep it up! 👏👏👍🏼
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