Ra Ya's baby - Part 20 on Page 63 - Page 34

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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: ravichitra

Nice update dear


Thank you so much didi...😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: Nany

Good one bhai ,continue soon


Glad that you liked it 
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: TVserialfreak


Happy that you liked it Kaviya 😳 😊


Bhaiyaa I loved it...you rock...
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Posted: 11 years ago
ohh nice scene bhai...she has developed feelings for him on this place only soo past memories .beutiful bhai ,thank you for the update
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: luvsakshi

ohh nice scene bhai...she has developed feelings for him on this place only soo past memories .beutiful bhai ,thank you for the update


Thanks for liking it sister... 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update..continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely Bhai, how cute ,really awesome please continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
good going...update asap...liked very much the convo of mother-son
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: haribol79

Nice update..continue soon


Thanks sister...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey Awesome FF. I read all in one shot and i Loved it! In the back of my mind I kept thinking, wouldn't it be great if they run this track on the actual show. VERY WELL DONE!!👏👏👏

Also one of my fav descriptions was when you were describing baby Rohan responding to Priya's touch and you said he sqeezed his legs together and tried to shrink himself. SOOO CUTE, when i read that i was like AWww.

I could go on for a while with compliments BUT very very very well written and an amazing story!! Keep it up! 👏👏👍🏼