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VirMan SS...Tum Ho Mera Pyaar...Part 29 pg 146 (Page 43)

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Posted: 01 February 2013 at 10:05pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sreshta90

<font size="3"><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">haha funny nd super cute update it was... loved starting more, aftr anguti rasam... nd yes Sreshta is my real name</font></font> Smile.<font color="#996600">.<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"><font size="3"> thanks fr pm dear...</font></font></font>
Thnk u Sreshta...must say u have a nyc name...glad u lykd da update...

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Posted: 01 February 2013 at 10:07pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by LuvVirManNiShal

Lol Virat's Nervousness Too Cute
Suhaag Raat Lol
Arkward VirMan
Interesting Loved It
Update Soon And PM Me Please
Thank You<3
Thnk u so much...glad u lykd it...will surely pm u wen i'll update.. Smile

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Posted: 01 February 2013 at 10:08pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Kanwal_chohan

Was awesome loved it Lol virat and manvi forgot it was
Their suhaagraat was a beautiful update loved it continue soon
And do pm me
Thnk u so much...will update soon..n pm u.. Tongue
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Posted: 01 February 2013 at 10:09pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by keertu

y u have to stop there.
pls continue soon.waiting .thanks for the PM.
M sorry...n thnk u..will update soon Smile
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Posted: 01 February 2013 at 10:11pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by innocentmanvi1

ufff very short plz continue sooon mmmuah]

M sorry didn't knw it was dat short..i'll update soon...thnk u.. Smile
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Posted: 01 February 2013 at 10:12pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by jia123sagar

superb update
thanks for pm me
Thnk u n ur most wc... Smile
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Posted: 01 February 2013 at 10:14pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by keertu

hey update soon i am waiting for u updateSmile
Hey i'll update 2morrow 4 sure..sorry m making u wait.. Smile
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Posted: 02 February 2013 at 11:43pm | IP Logged
Hey guyz...m bck...thnks a lot 4 ur lovely comments n lyks...i hope u'll lyk dis update as well...Enjoy...

VirMan...Tum Ho Mera Pyaar...Part 14...


Both were feeling very uncomfortable in front of each other. They just sat their without saying a single word, it was a pin drop silence.


Viraat and Maanvi, both sitting on the bed, feeling awkward in front of each other, looking everywhere, but at each other.

VirMan: (looking at each other) Woh,,

After an hour or so, finally both said something.

VirMan: Main...

Maanvi looked down, as she was feeling uncomfortable and nervous at the same time.

Viraat: (looking at Maanvi) Tumhe kuch kehna tha...?

Maanvi: (looked up at him) Tumhe bhi...?
Viraat: (smiles) Haan woh...Par tum pehle.
Maanvi: Main? Main kyun pehle? Tum bhi pehle keh sakhte ho na.

Viraat: Haan, par ladies first hota hai na.

Maanvi: (eyes narrowed) Toh?

Viraat: (index finger pointing at her) Toh pehle tumhe kehna chahiye, bolo kya kehna tha tumhe?

Maanvi: (finger pointing him) Pehle tum kahoge.

Viraat: Kyun? Waise toh din bhar chapar chapar lagaye rehti ho, aur aaj jab main mauka de raha hun toh bolti nahi.

Maanvi: Tum bhi kuch kam nahi ho Mr. Vadhera. Mujhe pareshan karne ke liye tum apna muh band nahi rehkte aur aaj jab main bolne ke liye keh rahi hun toh bolte nahi. Dimaag hil gaya hai kya tumhara?

Viraat: Haan, tumhare saath reh kar hil gaya hai, kyun ki tumhara toh pehle se hi hila hua tha, kyun?

Maanvi: (slightly hits on his arm) Just shut up Viraat.

Viraat: Mujhe kyun chup kara rahi ho? Waise tum, aise, ghunghat udhe hue, kya kar rahi thi?

Maanvi: Woh, tumhara intezaar...(bites her tongue)
Viraat: (smirks) Mera intezaar? Kyun?

Maanvi: (looking down at the floor) Woh...Umm...actually Di ne kasam di thi ghunghat na uthane ki...isiliye.

Viraat: Oh...

Maanvi: Yahan kuch zyada garmii nahi hai?

Viraat: Woh, AC ka temp low hoga, main high kar deta hun.

Maanvi: Nahi, rehne do, main kapde change kar leti hun, waise bhi in kapdon mein mujhe neend nahi aaye gi.

Viraat: Ok.

Maanvi opened her bag and took out her night dress. She walked towards the bathroom, and locked the door behind her, as Viraat walked towards his wardrobe and took out his clothes. Viraat turned around and saw Maanvi, standing in front of him, still in her wedding dress, looking down at the floor, shyly.

Viraat: (confused) Kya hua Maanvi? Tumhe kuch chahiye?

Maanvi: (nervously) Woh...actually, mujhse..
Viraat: Tumse kya?

Maanvi: Woh...,mujhse, actually (shyly, pointing towards her back) mere haath...woh...mere peeche..

Viraat: Oh..um..main madat kar dun?

Maanvi just nodded, looking down at the floor, feeling uncomfortable in front of Viraat. Her heartbeat was increasing by each second, as he started walking towards her slowly.


Jaadu hai nasha hai, madhoshiyaan...

Viraat placed his clothes on the bed, and took little steps towards Maanvi, who was standing just two feet away from the bed, facing the mirror.

Jaadu hai nasha hai, madhoshiyaan...Tujhko bhulake ab jaaun kahan...

Maanvi looked up in the mirror and saw Viraat, who was looking at her with so much love in his eyes for her.

Shama tujhko, khinchti hai, apni ore,,,aaja...Parwaane meri baahon mein aa...

Viraat looked up at the mirror, and saw Maanvi looking at him. They both got lost into each others eyes, unable to move their glance. Both of them were feeling nervous in front of each other, their hearts were beating through their chest at a uncontrollable rate.

Jaadu hai nasha hai, madhoshiyaan...Tujhko bhulake ab jaaun kahaan...
Shama tujhko khinchti hai apni ore,,,aaja...Parwaane meri baahon mein aa...

Viraat, slowly lifted his hands up and removed her dupatta that was neatly placed on her head.

Jaadu hai nasha hai, madhoshiyaan...Tujhko bhulake ab jaaun kahaan...

Maanvi didn't understand what was happening to her, this new feelings were driving her crazy, whenever Viraat was near her, she felt something different, something really weird,  yet amazing. She just kept on looking at Viraat, through the mirror, as he opened her hair down.

Kuchh bhi, na samjhe, kuchh bhi, na maane, Dil kar raha hai, kitne bahane
Tumko dekhe, tumko chahe, Iss tarah se...kabhi...

She closed her eyes tightly as he moved her hair on one shoulder to removed her necklace, giving her goosebumps, as his cold hands brushed against her skin.

Humne kisi ko chaha kahaan...

After placing the necklace on the table, Viraat looked up at Maanvi's face, as he leaned towards her ears to remove her earrings. He slowly removed her earrings, still not moving his eyes away from her beautiful face.

Jaadu hai nasha hai, madhoshiyaan...Tujhko bhulake ab jaaun kahaan...

Viraat raised his hand towards her head and removed her maang tikka, a smile crept on his lips as he saw her maang filled with sindoor, which he appiled. His gaze slowly went towards her neck, where she had her mangalsurat on, which he tied around her neck. Maanvi slowly opened her eyes, and saw Viraat's gaze on her. She looked down at the floor and turned around to leave, when suddenly she was pulled back. Viraat looked into her eyes as she was looking at him questioningly, both of them looked down and saw Maanvi's dupatta entangled around Viraat's watch. They both looked up at each other, Viraat slowly removed her dupatta from his watch and held it in front of her.

Lo thaam lo yeh, lamhon ke dhaage,,,,Hum chal padhe hai, sapnon se aage,,,

Maanvi closed her eyes yet again, as Viraat stepped forward, and wrapped his arms around hers. She tightly placed her hands on his back, as she felt his fingers touching her bare back. It was getting difficult for Viraat to control himself, he was losing his senses with Maanvi being so close to him.

Rasta yeh, hai kathin par, iss safar mein...kabhi...Na hongi koi ab duriyaan...

Maanvi gasped and tightly clutched into his sherwani, as Viraat moved his hand towards her dori and pulled it open. His hands slowly made its way down towards her bare waist, making her knees go weak.

Jaadu hai nasha hai, madhoshiyaan...Tujhko bhulake ab jaaun kahaan...

Shama tujhko, khinchti hai, apni ore,,,aaja...Parwaane meri baahon mein aa...

After a min or two, she opened her eyes, as Viraat pulled away from her, and looked down at her. Maanvi looked down at the ground, embarrassed, she hurriedly walked away, towards the bathroom, unable to face him, and lock the door behind her.

Maanvi: (hand on her chest)Yeh kya ho raha hai mujhe? Mujhe Viraat ke samne itna ajeeb kyun lag raha hai? Mera dil, itni teezi se kyun dhadhak raha hai?

Maanvi looked up and saw her maang, which had sindoor on it. Then she saw her neck, where she had her mangalsutra tied around. Then, she looked at her mehndi, which were dark brown.  She smiled, touched her mangalsutra with her fingers...all this symbolized that she is his, she's not Maanvi Chaudhary anymore...She is Mrs. Maanvi Viraat Singh Vadhera. Her cheeks went bright red as she blushed at the thought of being called by her new name. She lighty slapped her head and grabbed her night dress to change.


Viraat was in his night dress by now, he changed as she walked away from him towards the washroom.

Viraat: (to himself) Tumhare itne kareeb hone ke bawajood, main tumhare paas nahi aa sakta. Tum meri Patni ho, fir bhi tum par apna haq nahi jata sakhta. Tumse itna pyaar karne ke baad bhi, tumhe apne dil ka haal nahi bata sakhta. (smiles) Par mujhe bilkul bhi dukh nahi hai, kyun ki tum meri ankhon ke samne ho, duniya ke liye hi sahi, tum meri ho.

Viraat turned around and saw Maanvi coming out of the bathroom with her wedding dress in her hands. She walked towards her bag, carried it towards the bed, opened it and placed her dress neatly inside it.

Viraat: Um...Maanvi, tum apne kapde wahan kyun rakh rahi ho?

Maanvi: (closing her bag) Kyun ki mujhe nahi lagta ki tumhare wardrobe mein mere chizon ke liye jagha hogi. (smiles at him) Par tum fikar mat karo, main apne liye jaldi hi jagha bana lungi.
Viraat: (utter under his breath) Woh toh pehle se bana chuki ho.
Maanvi: Kuch kaha tumne?
Viraat: Huh,,,nahi...mera matlab hai, haan. Nahi,,mera matlab hai nahi...

Maanvi: (placing her bag beside the bed) Kya bak rahe ho Viraat?

Viraat: Woh kuch nahi. Um, ab hume so jaana chahiye, kafi raat ho chuki hai, tum thak bhi gayi hogi.

Maanvi: Haan.

Both walked towards the bed and looked at each other.

Maanvi: Tum bhi yahan..?

Viraat: Haan, toh main aur kahan jaun?

Maanvi: (worriedly) Dekho Viraat, tumhe pata hai ki maine tumse shadi kyun ki, main tumhare saath ek hi bed share nahi kar sakhti.

Viraat: (smirks) Thik hai, agar tumhe problem hai toh tum sofe par so sakhti ho I don't mind.

Maanvi: (gasped) Main sofe par soun? Tumhara dimaag kharab hai kya? Tum mujhe, apni Patni ko, jo cancer patient hai, usse sofe par sone ke liye keh rahe ho? How rude Viraat.

Viraat: Oye, problem tumhe hai, main kyun sofe par soun? (grinning mischievously) Aur waise bhi, tumhe koi problem nahi honi chahiye agar tumhe khud par bharosa ho toh.

Maanvi: Mujhe khud par bharosa hai, tum par nahi hai.

Viraat: Oh please, mujhpe log aankhe band karke bharosa karte hai.

Maanvi: (fake smile) Haan, isiliye muh ke bal girte hai.

Viraat: Acha?

Maanvi: Aur nahi toh kya?

Viraat wrapped his arm around Maanvi's waist and pulled her close to him. Her eyes widen at his sudden action, she looked nervously into his eyes, unable to utter any word.

Viraat: Toh fir tum mujh par kabhi bharossa mat karna, warna gir jaogi, jo main nahi chahta.

Viraat raised his free hand and moved away some strands of hair from her face, which made her shiver at his touch. He looked at her admiringly, her sweet scent was making him crazy, her being so close to him was his dream, but today his dreams became reality. She was his, she was his Wife.

Viraat: (lost in her eyes) Maanvi, I..I..

Maanvi: (lost in his eyes) Tum kya Viraat?

Viraat: (back to his sense) Huh...woh, kuch nahi, (looking everywhere but her) tum bed par so sakhti ho, main sofe par so jaunga.

Viraat remove his hand away from her slim waist and walked towards the bed. Maanvi stood there, looking at Viraat as he took a pillow and walked towards the sofa. He made himself lie comfortably down on the couch and looked at Maanvi questionally.

Viraat: Tumhe sona nahi hai kya?

Maanvi: Haan woh...(sits on the bed) Tum kuch keh rahe the na Viraat, bolona kya kehna tha tumhe.

Viraat: Kuch khas nahi tha Maanvi, tum so jao, subha jaldi uthna bhi hai. Good Night.

Maanvi: Good Night.

Maanvi disappointedly lied down on the bed. Tossing and turning unable to sleep, while Viraat fell asleep in no time, dreaming about his Wife..Maanvi.

Maanvi: (to herself) Viraat kehna kya chahta tha? And why am I so curious to know what he wanted to say?

She rose up from the bed and saw Viraat, sleeping on the sofe, hugging himself.

Maanvi: (to herself) Yeh Viraat bhi na, thand lag rahi hai, fir bhi usne blanket nahi liye.

Maanvi got up from the bed and went towards his wardrobe. She took out a blanket and walked towards Viraat, who was still hugging himself. She covered him with the duvet and smiled as she saw him pulling the blacket up and cuddled it close to him with a cute smile. He looked like a little baby, who was lost in his dreams, who had no worries or problems in his life. She knelt down, in front of him and ruffled his hair lovingly, which made his smile more wide.

Maanvi: (smiles/looking at him lovingly) Thank You Viraat, meri zindagi mein aane ke liye.

She didn't know why she said that, she just felt like saying that to him. She got up, walked towards the bed, looked at Viraat one last time and smiled once again. She pulled the duvet over her body and lied down, waiting for the sleep to engulf her.

Okk,,so hw was it? Plz leave ur comments n hit lyk if u lykd it...Thnk U...Luv Aartii...

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