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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: R.Lavanya

song selection nice ...awesome update


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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: NiShal4Life

Omg so cute!! Plz continue soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: madpaki

Another beautiful update loved it the the core
Loved how viren said he was lost in jeevika
Lol @ virat loved the song choice awesome
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: keertu

OHH VIRMAN ENGAGEMENT IS OVER.NEXT MARRIAGE.NICE SONG SELECTION BECOZ IT IS MY FAV.THANKS FOR THE PM AND CONTINUE SOON😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: innocentmanvi1

only u can do this made us enjoyed evry word of radha song lovely yar hats offf continue sooon

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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey guyz...Merry Christmas..(i knw it over but still) N a Very Happy Wala New Year,,,thnks a lot 4 ur lovely comments..Herez part 10 not really happy wid it..but still..Enjoy..

VirMan...Tum Ho Mera Pyaar...Part 10...

~Recap~


Maanvi slipped the ring into Viraat's finger and blushed a little as she heard everyone clapping for them. After enjoying their night and giving their blessing to the couple, everyone made their way towards their homes.

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*2 Weeks Later*

Kadambari Chachi: Arey kya kar rahe ho tum dono, jaldi karo shaam hone ko hai aur abhi bhi kaam khatam nahi hua hai.

Viren: Arey Chachi relax, sab ho jaye ga.

It was VirMan's, or should I say Maanvi's Mehndi Function. Everyone was busy decorating the hall, where the function was going to take place.

Pinky Chachi: Haye rabba, kaise hoga Viren Putar, mehndi ki function hai, aur abhi tak kuch hua nahi hai.
Viren: Chachi sab ho jaye ga.
Vanshika Maa: Arey ab tum log baatein kam karo aur kaam zyada. Arey Jeevika kahan hai?
Viren: Maa, woh Maanvi ke paas hogi, usse taiyaar kar rahi hogi.
Vanshika Maa: Arey usne kuch khaya bhi hai ya nahi?
Viraat: Mom, aapko lagta hai ki Maanvi ke rehte huye Bhabhi bhuka rahe gi?
Vanshika Maa: Haan, woh toh hai. Acha tum dono jaldi se sab kaam finish karo, main dono Behno ko dekh kar aati hun.
VIren & Viraat: (smiles) Maa, Behne nahi, Devrani Jethani.
Vanshika Maa: (laughs) Haan Haan. (left)

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~Maanvi's Room~

Maanvi: Di, main keh rahi hun na, mujhe yeh nahi pehna hai.
Jeevika: Mannu, tu meri baat nahi maanegi, akhir problem kya hai isme Mannu?

Maanvi and Jeevika were fighting over Maanvi's dress, which she didn't wanted to wear as it was too heavy for her.

Maanvi: Problem? Di, isme toh problem hi problem hai, itna heavy dress, main dub(drown) jaungi isme.
Jeevika: Chup kar Mannu, ek dungi na rakh ke.
Maanvi: (pouts) Di.
Jeevika: Aisi shakal mat bana, main teri badi Bahen hun, maine yeh khaas tere liye choose kiya hai Mannu, tu mere liye itna nahi kar sakhti? Waise toh hamesha kehti hai Khoon ka Rishta hai Humara, yahi tha tera khoon ka rishta?
Maanvi: Di, aap mujhe blackmail mat karo, main yeh nahi pehena chahti.
Jeevika: (pretending to be hurt) Thik hai Mannu, jaisi teri marzi, mujhe pata chal gaya ki kya izzat hai meri teri nazar mein.
Maanvi: Diii...aap yeh apna emotional backmail karna kab band karogi, ufff...
Jeevika: (smiles) Toh tu yeh pehne gi?
Maanvi: Haan, but aapke liye nahi, Chutku ke liye.
Jeevika: Chal koi nahi, tu maani toh sahi.
Maanvi: Di aap na, ek bahut badi Drama Queen ho.
Jeevika: (hugs her sideways) Haan, par tujhse kam.

Both laughed as Vanshika Maa walked in.

Vanshika Maa: Arey wah, aaj dono Devrani Jethani bahut pyaar barsa rahe hai ek dusre par.

Jeevika: Maa, aap? Aaiye na.
Maanvi: Woh kya hai na Aun...Sorry sorry Maa, aaj Di pyaar nahi barsa rahi hai aaj Chutku pyaar barsa raha hai apni Maasi par.
Vanshika Maa: Maanvi, Maasi nahi, agar mere Bete ne sun liya na toh aa jaye ga kehte huye Maasi nahi Chachi.

Jeevika and Vanshika Maa laughed.

Maanvi: Arey Maa, main thodi na darti hun aapke Bete se, mere liye toh woh ek Chep hi hai.
Jeevika: Bas Mannu, ab chal taiyaar ho ja, warna der ho jaye gi.
Vanshika Maa: Haan, tum dono taiyaar ho jao, main bhi taiyaar ho jaati hun.

Vanshika Maa turned around to leave, but stopped as she remembered something.

Vanshika Maa: Arey main jis liye aayi thi woh toh bhul hi gayi...Jeevika Beta, tumne kuch khaya?

Jeevika: Maa, aapko lagta hai ki Maanvi apni Chutku ko bhuka rahne degi?
Vanshika Maa: (smiles) Tumhe pata hai, abhi Viraat ne bhi yahi kaha tha.

Jeevika: (teasingly) Haan woh toh hoga hi na Maa, ab Viraat se acha Maanvi ko kaun janta hai.
Maanvi: (unknowingly blushes) Oh Di please huh.
Vanshika Maa: Acha ab tum dono taiyaar ho jao, main chalti hun.

Maanvi and Jeevika smiled at Vanshika Maa before she left the room.

Jeevika: Chal Mannu, ab taiyaar ho jaate hain.

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~Main Hall~

Viraat and Viren were sitting on the couch, after doing all their work.

Viren: Chalo, yeh saare kaam toh ho gaya, ab hum araam se kamre mein jaa kar so sakhte hai.
Viraat: (smiles mischeviously) Bhai?

Viren turned to face Viraat, who was smiling at him weirdly.

Viren: (confused/little scard) Kya?
Viraat: (hand around his shoulder) Bhai?
Viren: (moves away from him/scared) Yaar, mujhe tere iraade kuch thik nahi lag rahe, aur tu aise kyun muskura raha hai?
Viraat: Chill yaar Bhai, main bas yeh soch raha tha, ki kyun na hum...aaj...Mehndi ke function mein..
Viren: (stands up from his seat) No Viraat, aisa kuch nahi hoga.
Viraat: Oh come on Bhai...Kya aapko nahi dekhna hai Bhabhi ko? Dance karte huye?
Viren: Tu chinta mat kar, maine usse keh diya hai ki woh dance nahi karegi.
Viraat: Oh ho ho, aapne kaha aur Bhabhi maan gayi...Bhai don't forget, woh MAANVI ki Bahen hai. (emphasizing on her name)
Viren: Haan, woh bhi toh,,par Jeevika aisa nahi kar sakhti yaar.
Viraat: Bhai, aaj tak aapne dekha hai Bhabhi ko Maanvi ki baat taalte huye?
Viren: Nahi.
Viraat: Then?
Viren: Par Viraat, agar hume wahan koi dekh lega toh?
Viraat: (hand on Viren's shoulder) Koi nahi dekhe ga, jaise Bhabhi ki mehndi mein maine aur Chachu ne gatecrash kiya tha, tab hume koi nahi pakad paaya tha, waise hi aaj hoga.
Viren: (shrugged his hands off) Chal hat, tu toh range haathon pakda gaya tha.
Viraat: Bhai, main pakda nahi gaya tha, woh toh main khud samne aaya tha warna aaj tak koi bana hi nahi iss duniya mein jo Viraat Singh Vadhera ko range haaton pakde.
Viren: Bas huh...tujhe range haathon pakdne wali aa gayi hai.
Viraat: Acha? Kaun hai woh?
Viren: Maanvi, meri saali.
Viraat: (smiles) Arey Bhai, maine toh hamesha ke liye aapki Saali, meri Adhi Ghar wali ka haath pakad liya hai.
Viren: Bas kar Mr. Romeo.
Viraat: Bhai, please na, chalte hai na.
Viren: Chal thik hai, tu itna keh hi raha hai toh, main chalne ke liye taiyaar hun.
Viraat: (excitedly hugs him) Thank you Bhai, I love you.

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Jeevika walking down the stairs, with Maanvi beside her, who was looking beautifully gorgeous in her  green and orange net lehnga choli, hair was in side twisted braids, and without any jewelry. They both headed down and sat on the stage, where she will get her Mehndi done. Vanshika Maa handed Jeevika a tray, which contained Maanvi's jewelry that were made of beautiful flowers and roses. Jeevika gave Maanvi a huge smile as she made her wear the jewelries. All the other ladies started dancing, playing the music, enjoying the Ceremony.

Maanvi's Outfit: http://womenxone.com/files/2010/08/Resham-Embroidery-Lehenga-Choli-New-arrivals-and-latest-collection-6.jpg
Jeevika's Outfit: http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-llLAsTKMYuo/UKUIVDRjxTI/AAA44/XuQrpJC02bQ/s1600/Fish-Cut-Orange-Net-Lehenga-Choli-GHMADN1005-u.jpg


Maanvi: Di, aapko yaad hai, aapki mehndi?
Jeevika: Haan, yaad hai Mannu.

As JeeMan were talking, they saw two ladies, walking towards them slowly, their head covered up with their saree.

Maanvi: Di, yeh dono kaun hai? Aur inhone apna chehra kyun dhaka(covered) hua hai?
Jeevika: Pata nahi Mannu, maine bhi pehli baar dekha hai inhe.
Maanvi: Dekha kahan Di, inka toh chehra hi chupa hua hai.
Jeevika: Baat toh ek hi hai na Mannu.

It was none other than Viraat and Viren, walking slowy towards them, looking around as everyone was looking at them with weird faces.

Viren: (whishperes to Viraat) Bhai, chal bhaag chalte hai yahan se, sab kaise daravne chehre se ghoor rahe hai hume.
Viraat: (whisperes back) Bhai, kuch nahi hoga, aap bas chalte raho.
Viren: Viraat, mujhe toh lagta hai ki sab ne hume pechan liya hai, chal bhaag nikalte hai, warna bahut daant padegi.
Viraat: Bhai, aap kitne darte ho, relax, kuch nahi hoga. Aap bas awaaz badal kar baat karna, kisi ko shak nahi hoga.
Viren: Yahan meri awaaz ruk gayi hai, aur tujhe awaaz badalne ki padi hai. Kis manus ghadi(bad time) mein maine teri baat maanli, acha khasa araam kar raha tha main wahan.
Viraat: Uff Bhai, ek toh aap ki wajha se hum itne late aaye, Bhabhi ki mehndi mein main aur Chachu time se pehle aa kar ek conne mein baith gaye the, par aaj hum late hai aur sabki nazar hum par hai, ab hum yahan se bhaag nahi sakhte.
Viren: (little loud) Ab isme meri kya galti hai ki mujhe saree nahi peheni aati...
Viraat: Shhh..Bhai, marwana hai kya?

They finally reached where Maanvi and Jeevika was sitting, who were looking at them with confused eyes.

Viraat: (in a girly tone) Ji Namaste.
Beeji: Namaste, aap?
Viraat: Ji main...main...main Madhuri.
Beeji: (looking at Viren) Aur aap?
Viren: (in his low voice) Main...
Viraat: (hits on Viren's arm lightly/whishperes) Bhai, awaaz.
Viren: (in his girly tone) Ji main...main Aishwarya.

Maanvi and Jeevika laughed out loud as they heard their name.

Maanvi: (to Kadambari Chachi/laughs) Chachi, lo aapki Madhuri aur Aishwarya, aa gayi. (to Viren and Viraat) Aap dono yahan, Dola Re Dola karne aaye hai?
Jeevika: (controlling her laughter) Mannu.

Vadhera Boyz at the same time:
                         Viren: Haan...
                         Viraat: Nahi...


Viren and Viraat looked at each other.

Maanvi: Nahi?
Jeevika: Haan?
Viraat: Ji, haan, hum yahan Dola Re Dola karne aaye hain.
Maanvi: Thik hai, toh fir shuru ho jaiye.
Viren: Ji?
Jeevika: Dance shuru kijiye.
Vadhera Boyz: Da...da...da...dance?
JeeMan: Da..da..da...dance nahi...Sirf Dance.

Vadhera boyz swallowed hard, and looked at each other as they heard the music play.

Viren: (whisperes to Viraat) Viraat, agar main yahan nacha toh meri saree khul jayegi..
Viraat: Toh meri kahan rukegi Bhai, aapko haan bolne ki kya zarurat thi.
Viren: Arey main kya karta, dar ke mare muh se nikal gaya.

Viraat: Ab toh dance karna hi padega, izzat ka sawal hai.
Viren: Par meri saree?
Viraat: Jo hoga dekha jayega Bhai.
JeeMan: (smiles) Kya hua? Nacho na, Madhuri and Aishwarya.

Viren and Viraat started dancing on the song Dola Re Dola...while Maanvi and Jeevika enjoyed their dance. They somehow managed to control their laughter, as Madhuri aka Viraat and Aishwarya aka Viren were trying to handle their saree while dancing. Everyone clapped for their awful dance, as they were just concered about their saree.

Maanvi: Wah wah wah...kya dance tha. Aap dono ne toh Madhuri Dixit aur Aishwarya Rai ko peeche chodh diya.
Viraat: (smiles) Ji, Thank you.
Jeevika: Sachi mein, aisa dance toh main bhi nahi kar sakhti.
Viren: (smiles) Ji aap ka bahut bahut shukhriya.
Vanshika Maa: Waise tum dono ne apna sir(head) kyun dhaka hua hai?
Viren: Ji woh..woh,,,
Viraat: Ji woh, hume na, bahut sharam aati hai.
Maanvi: Sharam aati hai, woh bhi ladies se?
Viren: Ji,,,Ji haan, woh hum toh apni Maa ko bhi apna chehra nahi dikhate.
Jeevika: Ohh...acha?
Viren: JI.
Kadambari Chachi: Haye ni, itni sharam kyun?
Viraat: Ji woh...sharam toh khud besharam hai ji, kabhi bhi aa jaati hai.
JeeMan: OHHH...
Swamini Bua: Acha, chalo ab Mehndi lagna shuru karo.
Jeevika: Ji Bua ji.
Maanvi: Aap dono bhi aa kar baith jaiye.
Vadhera Boyz: Ji.

The ladies were appling Mehndi on Maanvi's and Jeevika's hands, while the Vadhera Boyz were sitting their looking at them lovingly, lost in their beauty.

Maanvi: Waise Madhuri Ji, aap bhi Mehndi lagwaiye na.
Viraat: Na..nahi..nahi...
Maanvi: Kyun?
Viraat: Woh..woh..mujhe Mehndi nahi pasand isiliye. Aur Maa kehti hai ki kuwari(single) ladkiyan mehndi nahi lagwati hai.
Maanvi: Acha, toh tum kuwari hai?
Viraat: (playing with his saree) Ji, abhi mujhe apne sapno ke raj kumar ka intezaar hai.
Viren: (to himself) Yeh Viraat kya bak raha hai, sapno ke raj kumar?
Jeevika: Aur aap Aishwarya Ji?
Viren: Ji, main bhi.
Jeevika: Oh, toh aapko bhi apne sapno ke raj kumar ka intezaar hai?

Viren: Ha..haan...haan.
Jeevika: (smiles) ok...(to Maanvi) Mannu, tu apne haathon mein Viraat ka naam likhna mat bhulna.
Maanvi: Arey kyun Di uss Chep ka naam le rahi ho? Acha hua yahan nahi hai, warna dimaag karab kar deta mera woh.
Jeevika: Mannu, kitna pyaar karta  hai woh tujhse, thoda toh respect kar apne hone wale Pati ki.
Viraat: Haan Maanvi, thoda toh respect banta hai, woh tumhara hone wala Pati hai.
Maanvi: O please, woh Chep hai. Aur Di, aap bhi Jiju ka naam likhye na apne haathon mein.
Jeevika: Ab tu kyun unhe yaad kar rahi hai, arey tu nahi janti, jitna pareshan tujhe Viraat karta hai, usse kai zyada(lot more than) Viren ji mujhe karte hai.
Maanvi: Hawww Di, sachi?
Jeevika: Bilkul Mannu.
Maanvi: Dono Bhai ek jaise hai Di, halkat.
Vadhera Boyz: (to each other) Halkat?
Viren: Arey Jeevika, aisa nahi kehte apne Pati ke bare mein.
Viraat: Haan, aisa nahi kehte Maanvi.
Jeevika: Arey tum dono abhi nahi samjhoge, jab tum dono ki shadi ho jayegi na, tab samjh mein aaye ga.
Viren: (to himself) Ek shadi toh ho hi gayi hai, aur kitni karun. Aur toh aur meri Biwi yahan mere baare mein kya keh rahi hai.
Viraat: (to himself) Main halkat hun? Tujhe toh main baad mein batata hun Bandariya?
Maanvi: Tum dono chup kyun ho gaye?
Viren: Woh hum soch rahe the ki aap dono kitna pyaar karti ho apne Pati se.
Maanvi: Di aapko bol rahi hai, meri toh shadi hi nahi hui na abhi.
Viraat: Main bhi soch rahi thi ki tum kitna pyaar karti ho apne (emphasizing) HONE WALE PATI SE.
Jeevika: Nahi ji, utna pyaar nahi karti, bas thoda sa.
Viren: (to himself) Thoda sa? Koi thoda sa pyaar karta hai kya woh bhi itne romantic Pati se?
Maanvi: Main toh bilkul bhi nahi karti. Ab tum hi batao, kaun karega ek Chep se Pyaar? Kya tum karogi Madhuri?
Viraat: (to himself) Bandariya, pyaar toh tum mujhse ek din zarur karogi. Tab main puchunga, kaise karliya ek Chep se pyaar. (to Maanvi) Haan, zarur karti main usse pyaar. I'm sure his not that bad.
Maanvi: Bad? Nahi Madhuri, woh bad nahi, bad se bhi bad hai, bahut khatarnak. Tauba Tauba, main kaise rahungi uske saath, Haaye...
Jeevika: Tu rehne ki soch rahi hai Mannu, main toh reh rahi hun ek ke saath.
Viraat: (whisperes to Viren) Dekha Bhai, kya sochte hai dono humare bare mein.
Viren: Yaar, Maanvi ka toh samjh aata hai, par Jeevika?
Viraat: Maanvi ka toh samjh aata hai Matlab?
Viren: Arey matlab ki tu toh hai hi Chep, par main?
Viraat: Bhai, bhulo mat ki yeh mera idea tha, aur aap yahan baith kar mujhe Chep bula rahe ho?
Jeevika: Kya hua Madhuri, Aishwarya? Aap dono aapas mein kya baatein kar rahe ho?
Viren: JI...Kuch nahi...
Swamini Bua: Chalo Mehndi lag gayi na sabko?
Jeevika: Ji Bua ji.
Swamini Bua: Thik hai, Hum, Beeji, aur Bhabhi  khana laate hai tum sabke ke liye.

Swamini Bua left.

Jeevika: (looking at Maanvi's Mehndi) Wow Mannu, teri mehndi toh bahut hi pyaari lag rahi hai. Tujhe pata hai, log kehte hai ki Mehndi ka rang jitna ghera chadhta hai na utna hi ghera Pati ka pyaar hota hai.

Viren and Viraat looked at each other excitedly.

Viren: (to Viraat/smiles) Chalo, kuch toh achi baat kahi teri Bhabhi ne.
Maanvi: Acha, jaise aapke Mehndi ka rang tha?
Jeevika: Kahan Mannu, meri mehndi ka rang toh itna light tha, jitna tere Jiju ka pyaar.
Viraat: (laughing at Viren, slowly) Wah Bhai, bahut achi baat kahi meri Bhabhi ne.
Viren: (hits him slightly/annoyedly) Chup kar.
Maanvi: Tab toh aap bhul hi jao Di, Viraat ka pyaar toh Jiju se bhi phika hai.
Viren: (laughing at Viraat,slowy) Bahut Sachi baat kahi meri Saali ne.
Viraat: (giving him an angerily glare) Usse toh main baad mein dekhlunga.
Maanvi: Aap dono bar bar chup kyun ho jate ho?
Viraat: Ji woh..

Swamini Bua, Beeji and Vanshika Maa came with the food for JeeMan, Pinky Chachi, and Kadambari Chachi.

Vanshika Maa: Chalo, ab tum dono khana khalo.
Viren: Acha toh hum chalte hai, bahut late bhi ho gaya hai.
Viraat: Ji.
Swamini Bua: (smiles) Aane ke liye aur dance karne ke liye bahut shukriya.
Vadhera Boyz: (smiles back) Ji Namaste.
JeeMan: Namaste.

The Vadhera Boyz left, while saving their saree from opening, as Vanshika Maa and Beeji feed Maanvi and Jeevika their dinner.



Okk so..i didn't add any song sequence here...i knw its not a very gud update but still, i  hope u lykd it,,,plz do leave ur comments...Thnk u...luv Aartii..Merry Christmas N A Very Happy New Year Once Again...

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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update...virat gatecrasher niceee
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing. do cont soon and pm me😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Funny update
Thanks for the pm!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
OH IT WAS SO FUNNY.I WAS LAUGHING THROUGH OUT. i must say tis foursome are awesome.but it would be more funny if vv bros have gotten.anyways they have to explain ti jeeman.thanks for the PM.continue soon.😊