VirMan SS...Tum Ho Mera Pyaar...Part 29 pg 146 - Page 51

awsum update arti *charan sparsh* ashirwad do mujhe.. Mujhme me bhi thodi bahot writing skill aajaye..
U r a great writer..
loved jealous manvi
Loved virat -''itna karib kafi hain?''
bt wat hapnd to manvi in d end??


pls pls pls update kuch is tarah 0

I m speechless...i hv no words...ill give my comment later...ohhh goddd

kya update hai yaar... awsum... Edited by amnavirman - 11 years ago

Phweee...ok let me think 1st wat should i write...hmmm???...u n ur updts r fab, amazing, mindblowing, awesome, fantastic, superb, mismerising, n lots more...seriously the last scene was damn awesome...i think i m not that able to comment on ur talent...bcs i m absolutely nontalented lolzzz...cont soon

plezz can u do one more update today

i loved the update it was jst awesome :)
Again tanya and her nautanki hate tht lady bt still thankful to her coz of her virman romance ;)
Manvi faint nw virat will regret on what he did nd thts nt good :(
Pls update soon

brilliant update

yaaar wen is maanvi gonna realise that she too loves him

shes having weird feelings n all bt the relisation hasnt struck yet!!!! so hw will she realise hw pure virats love is...

terrific update tanya deserved that thappad who told her to mess with manvi's virat

thanx for the pm n do update quickly 😊

Hey dear...it is a fab update...
U r a great writer dear...
Thanx for the pm...and plz cont ASAP bcoz it's really very hard to wait to read next update...
Plz dear cont soon and pm...

Wow yaar what a update you left me speechless was superb
Loved jealous manvi and virat was awesome in the bedroom
Scene omg manvi in the end hope she's ok beautiful update continue
Soon and do pm me. Thanks for the pm