VirMan SS...Tum Ho Mera Pyaar...Part 29 pg 146 - Page 13

Originally posted by: gsrocks

That was just superb!!! Thnk U...😊

I should admit that u r a brilliant writer!! Well thnk u,,,all thnks 2 u guyz

I could very clearly see those scenes in my mind!!

Loved the part where virman were desperate to talk to each other!!

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Originally posted by: nnpr_nadella

lovely update😊

i think its virka's plan to tease virman

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Ya it was VirIka's plan,,,btw thnks..😊

Originally posted by: isha.raj_98

omg i loved this update as well was laughing through out amazing pm me!!!!!

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Originally posted by: LuvVirManNiShal

Too Cute Bechare VirMan Getting A Taste Of Their Own Medicine Lol Loved The Eye Talks And Especially At The End Manvi Running To Viren And Virat Running To Jeevika Awww
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Hey Guyz,,,Thnks a lot 4 ur comments n lyks...herez part 6...hope u'll lyk it,,Enjoy...


VirMan...Tum Ho Mera Pyaar...Part 6...

~Recap~

VirIka just blurst out laughing, they were unable to control their laughter anymore, while VirMan looked at them confusingly.

VirMan: (confused) KYA HUA?

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Jeevika:  Kya Hua? (laughingly) Shakal dekho apne.
Viren: (laughingly) Yaar tum dono toh hum dono se bhi desperate ho ek dusre se baat karne ke liye.
Jeevika: Haan Viren ji, aur yeh sab in dono ke hi wajha se hua tha, aur ab khud ek dusre se baat karne ke liye tadap rahe hai. (holding her stomach while laughing) Aur in dono ki shakal bhi dekhne layak hai.
Viren:  Kamal hai, maine toh suna tha ki kare koi aur bhare koi, par yahan toh ulta hai, jo kare wahi bhare. (holding his stomach while laughing/gives hi-5 to Jeevika)

Viraat and Maanvi looking at each other with widden eyes.

Jeevika: Aur jis tarah yeh dono humare paas, aaye aur kaha ki (imitating Viraat)Please mere Bhai se baat karlo, (imitating Maanvi) Please meri Di se baat karlo, main sach keh rahi hun Viren ji, main toh apni hasi control hi nahi kar paayi, yaar itna desperate toh hum bilkul nahi hai.
Maanvi: Di, iska matlab aap dono yeh natak kar rahe the?
Viraat: Aap humse badla le rahe the?
VirIka: Haan.
VirMan: Itna Bada Dhoka?
VirIka: Haan.
VirMan: Humare saath?
VirIka: Haan.
VirMan: KYUN?
VirIka: Kyun Nahi?
VirMan: Aap dono humare saath aisa kaise kar sakhte ho?
Viren: Humare saath kiya tha, tab toh bada maza aaya tha na tum dono ko.
Maanvi: Di, Jiju, aap aisa kaise kar sakhte hai?
Viraat: Bhabhi, this is not fair huh...aur Bhai aap bhi?
Maanvi: Di aapko pata tha na ki mujhe Viraat se baat karni thi aur tab bhi aapne yeh natak kiya.
Jeevika: Nahi Mannu...
Viraat: (cuts Jeevika off) Bhai, main wahan Maanvi se bina baat kare maara jaa raha tha aur aap yahan Bhabhi ke saath plan bana rahe the humse badla lene ke liye?
Viren: Viraat...
Maanvi: (cuts Viren off) Jiju aap bhi Di ke saath mil kar yeh sab...aap toh mere peace loving Jiju the na, aur aap hi.
Viren: Maanvi...
Viraat: (cuts Viren off) Bhabhi aap toh meri sweet, simple, and cute Bhabhi thi, aur aapne bhi?
Jeevika: Viraat maine,,,
Maanvi: (cuts Jeevika off)Di, Bahen hun main aapki, Khoon ka rishta hai humara, aur aapne yeh kiya apni choti Bahen ke saath?
Viraat: Bhai, Main bhi aapka...aapka Bhai hun, humara bhi Khoon ka rishta hai, aur aapne aisa kiya, woh bhi apne chote Bhai ke saath?
VirMan: AISA KAISE KAR SAKHTE HO AAP DONO HUMARE SAATH? Jao hum aapse baat nahi karte. (turns their face away from VirIka)
VirIka: (looking at each other) Yeh dono toh bura maan gaye.
Jeevika: (stands in front of VirMan) Nahi Mannu, tu toh janti hai na ki teri Di tujhse kitna pyaar karti hai, main aur Viren ji toh bas mazak kar rahe the, (looking at Viraat) humara tum dono ka dil dukhane ka iraada bilkul nahi tha Viraat.
Viren: Haan, yeh sab sirf ek mazak tha, hum bas dekhna chahte the ki tum dono ek dusre se kitna pyaar karte ho aur ek dusre se bina baat kare reh sakhte ho ya nahi.

Viraat and Maanvi looked at each other when Viren said he wanted to see how much they love each other. Viraat smiles while Maanvi just looks down at the ground.

Jeevika: (holding ears) Maaf nahi karegi apne Di ko? (to Viraat) Viraat tum bhi apni Bhabhi ko maaf nahi karoge?
Viren: Yaar Jeevika, main bhi hun, meri taraf se bhi toh maafi mang sakhti ho na.
Jeevika: (turns towards Viren) Aap toh chup hi rahiye Viren ji,,,yeh sab aap hi ka idea tha na.
Viren: Haan toh tum bhi toh is mein shamil thi, jab maafi mangne ki baari aayi toh akele hi,,, Pati hun tumhara main, tumhari zimedari banti hai ki meri taraf se bhi tum maafi mango.

VirMan smiled mischievously and winked at each other.

Jeevika: Rehne dijiye aap, aap hi ki saari galti hai, pata nahi kyun maine aapki baatein maanli.
Viren: Maine nahi kaha tha tumhe ki mere saath yeh natak karo, tum khud raazi huyi thi iss baat se.
Jeevika: Aap ab mujh par yeh saara ilzam mat lagaiye Viren ji, yeh aapka plan tha, iss mein galti aap ki hai.
Viren: Meri koi galti walti nahi hai, tumhi ne toh yeh sab challenge wali baatein shuru ki thi, kyun bhul gayi?
Jeevika: Haan, par...par...hum uss topic par baat nahi kar rahe hai, yahan galti aapki hai aur sirf aapki hai.
Viren: Sirf meri galti kaise, is mein tumhara bhi utna hi haath hai jitna ki mera.
Jeevika: Viren Ji aap na...
VirMan: CHUP!!! BILKUL CHUP...

VirIka were looking at each other and than at VirMan with widen eyes, index finger on their lips.

Viraat: Aap dono kitna ladte ho.
Maanvi: Haan, humse bhi zyada.
Viraat: Aur nahi toh kya, bilkul bacche ho aap dono.

VirIka looking at each other with opened mouth.

Maanvi: Aise ek dusre ko kya dekh rahe ho, sach main bacche ho aap dono.
Viraat: (controlling his laughter) Kab bade honge aap dono?
Maanvi: Shadi bhi ho gayi hai fir bhi bacchpana nahi gaaya aap dono ka. Uff kya karun main aap dono ka?
Viraat: Aur ek dusre par ilzam lagana band karo, galti aap dono ki hai, maafi aap dono humse mango.
Maanvi: Chaliye shuru ho jayiye.

VirMan turned their face away from them, hands acrossed their chest, and smiled at each other, still controlling their laughter.

Jeevika: (Sweetly/saddly) Maanvi, please mujhe maaf karde, hum toh sirf mazak kar rahe the, Viraat please maaf kar do mujhe.
Viren:  Please Sali Sahiba, aap toh meri sabse pyaari Sali ho please (holding his ears) maaf kardo na apne Jiju ko, aur tu toh mera sabse acha Bhai hai na Viraat, maaf kar dena apne bade Bhai ko.
Viraat: Kyun maaf kare hum aap dono ko?
Maanvi: Sorry hum aapko maaf nahi kar sakhte.

VirIka looking at each other saddly.

VirMan: KYUN KI HUM AAPSE GUSSA HAIN HI NAHI.

VirIka looked at VirMan surprise/shocked/confusingly.

VirIka: Matlab?
VirMan: Jab aap dono mazak kar sakhte hai, toh hum kyun nahi, aur yeh toh humara copyright hai, kyun.
VirIka: Mazak?
VirMan: (smiles widely) Haan Mazak.
Jeevika: (pulls Maanvi's ear) Maanvi Ki Bacchi, apni Di se mazak karti hai.
Maanvi: Ouch,,,sorry Di, par aap ne bhi toh kiya tha na.
Viren: Aur tu..(holding Viraat's ear as well) apne Bade Bhai ke saath itna bada mazak karta hai.
Viraat: Aahh, Bhai, sorry, par aap ne bhi kiya tha na.
VirIka: (releasing their ears) Chalo thik hai, maaf kiya tum dono ko.
VirMan: (hands folded in front of VirIka) Thank You.

All of them started laughing.

Viren: Acha ab hume sone jaana chahiye, kal tum dono ka roka hai, late uthe toh Badi Maa, aur Dadaji bahut gussa kare gein.
Maanvi: Haan Jiju, mujhe kal jaldi bhi uthna hai.

All four of them said good night to each other and went to sleep, after all its VirMan's Roka tomorrow.

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It was a beautiful morning as always, but today was not just any day for Viraat, it was his Roka, with His Maanvi. He smiled widely and walked towards his bathroom. On the other hand, Maanvi was still sleeping peacefully. She woke up with a jerk when she heard her alarm, she had her shower and went to the breakfast table.

Everyone ate their breakfast and got busy with the preparation, while Maanvi was bored sitting in her room.

Maanvi: Kitna boring hai, koi mujhe kaam bhi nahi karne de raha hai aur Di bhi khud mein uljhi hui hai, kya karun?
Viraat: (standing at the door) When Viraat is here, not to fear Balike..
Maanvi: (turns to face Viraat) Tum?? Yaar tum kyun aa jaate ho mujhe pakane? Abhi mera bilkul mood nahi hai tumhari yeh pakau baatein sune ka.
Viraat: (walking towards Maanvi) Yeh dekho, bore khud apni baaton se karti hai aur ilzam mujh par laga rahi hai. Yaar tum shadi ke baad bhi aisa hi karogi kya?
Maanvi: (smiles fakely) Shadi ke baad kya kya karun isska tum andaza bhi nahi laga sakhte Mr. Vadhera.
Viraat: (smirks) Acha? (sitting next to her/leaning close to her ears) Kya Iraada hai would be Mrs. Vadhera.
Maanvi: (stands up) Yeh, yeh tum...tum kya kar rahe ho?
Viraat: (smiles mischeviously/stands right next to her) Maine kya kiya Maanvi?
Maanvi: Zyada banno mat, aur...aur tumhe sharam nahi aati, kisi ke bhi kamre mein ghus jaate ho.
Viraat: Sharam kyun aaye gi, apni hone wali Biwi ke kamre mein khada hun main, kisi aur ki nahi. (winks)
Maanvi: Sudhroge nahi na tum kabhi Chep.
Viraat: Main kyun sudhrun, tum hi bigad jao mere saat, apne hone wale Pati ke rang mein rang jao Dedh Futiya.
Maanvi: Hone wale Pati my foot, main abhi tumhari Patni banni nahi hun, abhi waqt hai.
Viraat: Abhi banni nahi toh kya hua, banne toh wali ho na, aur waise bhi aaj hum first step paar karein ge, humara ROKA...toh obvious hai na ki hum aaj ek bandhan mein bandh jaaye gein, humari freedom par tala(lock) lag jaaye ga.
Maanvi: Bade aaye freedom par tala lagne wale, tum na, bas intezar karo, uss waqt ka jab humari shadi ho jaye gi, has has ke tumhara, yaane apne husband ka band na baja diya na, toh mera naam bhi Maanvi Chaudhary nahi.
Viraat: (standing behind her/leaning close to her ears) Chalo tumne aaj maan hi liya ki main tumhara husband hun. Aur rahi baat tumhare naam ki toh, woh toh badalne hi wali hai Mrs. Maanvi Viraat Vadhera.
Maanvi: (turns to face Viraat angrily) Would be Mrs. Maanvi Viraat Vadhera.
Viraat: (smirks) Arey wah, aaj khud hi keh diya. (smiled and left her room before winking at her)
Maanvi: (fuming with anger) Chep kahin ka, chodhungi nahi main tujhe.

Finally it was afternoon and time for VirMan's Roka. After checking the perparation for the 6th time, Jeevika went to help her sister Maanvi get ready, and Viren went to his little brother Viraat to help him get ready.

~Maanvi's Room~

Jeevika entered the room and saw Maanvi sitting on her bed and playing games on her phone.

Jeevika: Mannu, tu abhi tak taiyar nahi hui? Aur yeh kya, (taking the phone away from Maanvi's hand) Tu game khel rahi hai, koi apne hi Roke par taiyar hone ke badle apne phone par game khelta hai kya? Mannu tu bhi na.
Maanvi: Diii...main kaise taiyar ho sakhti hun, mere kapde toh aapke paas hai na, aap bhul gayi? Aur mujhe taiyar aapko karna hai, ab main kya karti aap itni late aayi, so main games khelne lagi.
Jeevika: Acha bas meri Maa, (walking towards Maanvi's wardrobe) ek baar shuru ho jaati hai toh rukne ka naam hi nahi leti hai. (taking out a packet) Pata nahi mera Pyaara Devar kaise sambhale ga meri Pagal Bahen ko.
Maanvi: Oh please Di, aapka Devar koi pyaara wyaara nahi hai, shakal par mat jao uski, woh na ek number ka Chep hai Chep.
Jeevika: Chup kar Mannu, mere Devar ke baare mein kuch kaha na, toh acha nahi hoga samjhi. Chal ab taiyar ho jaate hai warna bahut late ho jaaye ga, yeh le. (handing her the packet)
Maanvi: (taking the packet) Kya hai isme Di?
Jeevika: Khud hi dekh le.
Maanvi: (opening the packet) Yeh, wow Di yeh kitna pyaara hai, (smiles widely) yeh mere liye hai?

Inside the packet, was stunningly beautiful aloe vera green, brick red brocade and faux georgette salwar kameez. Its nicely designed with antique zardosi, bead, bugle beads/ cutdana, embroidery with stones/crystals and stones work.

http://www.indianclothstore.com/productdetail.aspx?pid=16045

Jeevika: Of course Mannu tere hi liye hai. Viren ji ka choice tha.
Maanvi: Kitna sundar hai yeh Di, Jiju ka toh jawab hi nahi, aur iska color toh mind blowing hai, main isse pahen kar aun?
Jeevika: Haan Mannu, yeh tere hi liye hai.
Maanvi: (hugs her Di) Thank you Di, I love you..(broke apart and ran towards her bathroom)

~Viraat's Room~

Viraat ran towards Viren when he saw him entering the room.

Viraat: Bhai (holding Viren's shoulder) Acha hua aap aa gaye.
Viren: (little worried) Kya hua Viraat? Koi problem hai?
Viraat: Bahut badi problem hai Bhai.
Viren: (confused/worriedly/hands on Viraat's shoulder) Aisa kya ho gaya Viraat? Sab thik toh hai, kahin Maanvi toh,,,
Viraat: Bhai relax, problem yeh hai ki main excitment mein apne liye kapde kharidna bhul gaya, main kya pehnu mujhe nahi pata.
Viren: Bas itni si baat, yaar kham-a-kha mujhe dara diya.
Viraat: Yeh bas itni si baat nahi hai, aaj mera Roka hai, aur mere paas kapde nahi hai, aap hi socho, ghar par sab naye(new) kapde pahen kar aaye gein aur jiska Roka hai woh hi ache se taiyar na ho toh kaisa lage ga, kuch karo na Bhai.
Viren: (smiles at his brother) Uski chinta tu mat kar, when Viren is here not to fear.
Viraat: Aap yahan meri copy karne aaye hai kya? Yaar Bhai, do something please.
Viren: Relax Viraat, maine tere liye already kapde le liye the.
Viraat: (smiles) Kya sachi, kahan hai?
Viren: (walked towards his wardrobe/took the sherwani and hand it over to Viraat) Yeh le.
Viraat: Wow Bhai, yeh toh bahut acha hai, yeh aapka choice toh bilkul nahi hoga, zarur Bhabhi ne kiya hoga.

It was an amazing kurta payjama in teal green and maroon color. All over self texture pattern of antique diamantes, stones, jari, jardozy, beads, cutdana, sequins resham thread work beautifying the collar, neckline and cuffs.

http://www.lalitkhatri.com/men/kurta-payjama/artistic-work-kurta-pyjama.html

Viren: Ya right, yeh teri Bhabhi ne choose kiya hai aur maine apni Saali ke liye choice kiya hai, ab tu meri Saali ko dekh kar batana ki kiska best choice hai, ab ja taiyar ho ja.
Viraat:(hugs Viren) Thank You Bhai, Love You...(rans to his bathroom)

Guest started to come, the Vadhera's and Chaudhary's were welcoming them, while JeeMan and Vadhera Boys were getting ready.




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Edited by Artii159 - 11 years ago

loved the conversation...awesome update cont.soon😊 Edited by avika26 - 11 years ago

nice update cont soon

beautiful update. Loved it

Very sweet! I loved the conversation between all 4! They are hilarious arguments :) thanks for the pm! Update soon :)