VirMan SS...Tum Ho Mera Pyaar...Part 29 pg 146 - Page 5

Posted: 11 years ago
wowww kaya come back dia hai lol amazing ss i justt lovvvd it beautifully written
Posted: 11 years ago
SUPERB
MISS UR UPDATES
its long time see u
liked a lot
Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update... Continue soon...!!!
Posted: 11 years ago
wowww awesome loved it... it was superb... i liked how virat convinced maanvi... waiting for next part...
Posted: 11 years ago
Read yr both parts truly amazng
love to read more n updt sun
waitng fr nxt prt.
Posted: 11 years ago
I love this!
I love everything about it! PLease PM
when you continue!
Posted: 11 years ago
awesome!..jst read both the parts!!!👏
virman gettin married..bloody maya the b**** gettin kicked out!!!
loved it
canr wait 2 read the next part..
pls update asap nd pm mw wn u do pls..😊
Posted: 11 years ago
Aww amazing update yay VirMan's wedding uff i cant wait til virat confesses to manvi and jeevika finds out about manvi's cancer continue asap and pm me when u do
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by ahaanfan


 
 

Outstanding update as usual..completely loved it...

Viren: (smiles) Thik hai, so 'Mission Maanvi' shuru.
Viraat: Nahi, 'Mission VirMan' Shuru.
Viren: (smiles)Not bad yaar, Mission VirMan. Humara bhi naam hoga na.
Viraat: Haan hai na...VirIka. (smiles)
Viren: (smiles) Haan yaar, amazing name, acha ab mission shuru karein?
Viraat: Haan chalo.

 

Jeevika and Viren looked up and saw Viraat and Maanvi standing at the door.

Viraat: Bhabhi mujhe appse kuch kehna hai.
Jeevika: Haan bolo Viraat, kya kehna hai tumhe?
Viraat: Bhabhi woh...woh main...
Maanvi: (cuts Viraat off) Di woh..woh...(closes her eyes tightly & opens it again) Di, Viraat mujhse shadi karna chahta hai.

Viraat turns to face Maanvi, Jeevika was shocked and Viren was happy, he smiled at his little brother.

Jeevika: Aur tu?
Viraat: (looking at Maanvi) Nahi Bhabhi woh..
Maanvi: (cuts him off again) Aur main bhi.

Specially loved these two parts⭐️
Is baar jaldi update kariyega😳
Thanks for the pm😃



Thnk u..😊...i tried my best i hope it won't b late...koshish karungi aaj update karne ki..neways thnks..😊
Posted: 11 years ago
LOVED IT!!!  You are truely a brilliant writer! I can't wait for the next update!!!

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