VirMan SS...Tum Ho Mera Pyaar...Part 29 pg 146 - Page 5

wowww kaya come back dia hai lol amazing ss i justt lovvvd it beautifully written

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Nice update... Continue soon...!!!

wowww awesome loved it... it was superb... i liked how virat convinced maanvi... waiting for next part...

Read yr both parts truly amazng
love to read more n updt sun
waitng fr nxt prt.

I love this!

awesome!..jst read both the parts!!!👏

Aww amazing update yay VirMan's wedding uff i cant wait til virat confesses to manvi and jeevika finds out about manvi's cancer continue asap and pm me when u do

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Outstanding update as usual..completely loved it...

Viren: (smiles) Thik hai, so 'Mission Maanvi' shuru.
Viraat: Nahi, 'Mission VirMan' Shuru.
Viren: (smiles)Not bad yaar, Mission VirMan. Humara bhi naam hoga na.
Viraat: Haan hai na...VirIka. (smiles)
Viren: (smiles) Haan yaar, amazing name, acha ab mission shuru karein?
Viraat: Haan chalo.

 

Jeevika and Viren looked up and saw Viraat and Maanvi standing at the door.

Viraat: Bhabhi mujhe appse kuch kehna hai.
Jeevika: Haan bolo Viraat, kya kehna hai tumhe?
Viraat: Bhabhi woh...woh main...
Maanvi: (cuts Viraat off) Di woh..woh...(closes her eyes tightly & opens it again) Di, Viraat mujhse shadi karna chahta hai.

Viraat turns to face Maanvi, Jeevika was shocked and Viren was happy, he smiled at his little brother.

Jeevika: Aur tu?
Viraat: (looking at Maanvi) Nahi Bhabhi woh..
Maanvi: (cuts him off again) Aur main bhi.

Specially loved these two parts⭐️

Is baar jaldi update kariyega😳

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