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Hello Guyzzz...Hope All Of U R Doin Well..So Neways, 2day M Goin 2 Write A New SS, I Really Hope U Guyz Lyk It.. So Here We Go...Enjoy...
VirMaan SS...Tum Ho Mera Pyaar...
Viraat: Bhai, Maanvi aa gayi kya? Main kabse uska intezaar kar raha hun aur woh hai ki abhi tak aayi nahi.
Viraat was impatiently waiting for Maanvi, he ran to his Brother and started asking question about Maanvi when he saw him coming from down stairs. It was Viraat and Maya's Roka, everyone had arrived at the Vadhera house except the Chaudhary family. Everyone in the Vadhera house came to know about Maanvi's illness after Jeevika's accident, except Jeevika and Viraat. Everyone knows how important Maanvi is to Jeevika, so they decided to hide the fact that her little sister, who's her life, is suffering from cancer. On the other hand, Viren decided to hide this fact from Viraat because he knows what place Maanvi holds in his heart and if he comes to know about her illness, he would be broken into tiny pieces once again. He knows how much Viraat loves Maanvi but doesn't realize it, so it was his responsibility to make him realize his feelings towards Maanvi. He will go to any extant to see his little brother happy and his happiness lies only in Maanvi's, not in Maya's, even if it means to hurt his Badi Maa. After many attempts, today was his last day to make his little brother realize how much he loves Maanvi before its too late.
Viren: (serious tone) Kyun Viraat, tu Maanvi ka intezaar kyun kar raha hai? Tujhe toh mujhse puchna chahiye ki Maya aa gayi hai ya nahi?
Viraat: Bhai main Maya ke baare mein kyun puchun, uska roka hai woh toh aaye gi hi na, app please batao na Maanvi aa gayi hai ya nahi?
Viren: Nahi aayi hai woh.
Viraat: (sitting on the coner of his bed) Yeh Maanvi bhi na, maine usse kaha tha ki jaldi aa jaana, fir bhi nahi aayi.
Viren: Aur kyun aaye gi woh jaldi, akhir kyun woh tere roke ke liye jaldi aaye gi Viraat.
Viraat: Bhai app yeh kya keh rahe ho, woh meri partner hai, mujhe uski zarurat hai.
Viren: Tujhe uski zarurat kyun hai Viraat? Tere paas toh Maya hai na, fir kyun baar baar Maanvi Maanvi karta rehta hai? Maanvi toh teri sirf ek achi dost hai na, fir kyun har pal Maanvi ko call ya messages karta rehta hai? Aur agar reply na aaye toh kyun phone ko dekhta rehta hai? Us din kyun tune Maya ko Maanvi kaha? Batao Viraat.
Viraat was little confused, why was his Brother behaving this way, why was he saying all this to him.
Viraat: (stands up) Bhai, appko ho kya gaya hai? Bhai, Maanvi meri ek bahut achi dost hai, mujhe uske saath baat karna acha lagta hai, uske saath time spend karna acha lagta hai, woh mujhe itni achi tarah se samajhti hai, meri har ek choti si choti baat mere bina boley hi samjh jaati hai, main kya chahta hun kya nahi woh sab janti hai Bhai, aur rahi baat Maya ko Maanvi kehne ki toh woh toh galti se ho gaya, woh Maya baar baar Maanvi ka naam le rahi thi, isiliye...
Viren: (cuts Viraat off) Galti se ho gaya? Maya ko Maanvi kaha chalo yeh maanta hun ki galti se ho gaya, par tu mujhe yeh baat Viraat, jab tu Maanvi se baat karta hai, toh I'm sure woh bhi Maya ke baare mein baat karti hogi, kya kabhi tune Maanvi ki Maya nahi kaha?
Viraat: Haan Bhai, main jab bhi Maanvi se baat karta hun toh woh Maya ka naam bich mein zarur laati hai, par maine use kabhi bhi Maya nahi kaha.
Viren: Acha, toh jab Maya Maanvi ki baat karti hai toh tera dimaag Maanvi par hi rehta hai, par jab Maanvi Maya ki baat karti hai toh bhi tere dimaag mein Maanvi hi basi rehti hai Viraat?
Viraat: (confused) Bhai aap kehna kya chahte ho? Saaf saaf kaho please.
Viren: Main yeh kehna chahta hun Viraat, ki tujhe Maya se nahi Maanvi se pyaar hai. Tu Maya se pyaar nahi karta tu sirf Maanvi se pyaar karta hai.
Viraat: Bhai maine appse kitna baar kaha hai ki main Maanvi se pyaar nahi karta, hum sirf dost hai.
Viren: Jhut mat bol Viraat, kam se kam ab toh mat bol, ab toh realize kar ki tu usse chahta hai. Teri life mein jo pyaar hai, woh sirf Maanvi ki wajha se hai, tu Maya se nahi Maanvi se pyaar karta hai Viraat, ab toh realize kar.
Viraat: Bhai main Maanvi se kaise pyaar kar sakhta hun? Main Maya se pyaar karta hun, infact maine Maya ko second chance diya uski letter padhne ke baad. Main manta hun ki Maanvi ne bahut koshish ki mujhe samjhane ki, par maine Maya ko maaf kiya tha because of that letter. Bhai agar woh letter app bhi padhte na, toh app bhi mujhe Maya ko Maaf karne ke liye kehte, usse second chance dene ke liye kehte.
Viren: Aisa kya tha uss letter mein, jisne tujhe apna saara dard bhulane pe majbur kar diya Viraat? Kya main woh letter dekh sakhta hun?
Viraat: Of course Bhai, ek min.
Viraat took the letter out of his drawer and handed it to Viren.
Viraat: Yeh rahi Bhai.
Viren: (opening the letter)Thanks.
'Dear Viraat'
Main jaa rahi hun, hamesha ke liye...tumse dur. Tum jeet gaye, lekin main bhi haari nahi. Kyun ki ek bahut badi sikh le kar jaa rahi hun...ki zindagi mein hum jisse sab se zyada pyaar karte hai, usse for granted le lete hai,,,hume lagta hai ki jo bhi ho jaye, hum dono kabhi ek dusre se nahi bichde gein, aaj ek rutha hai toh kal dusra mana lega, lekin maine kabhi nahi socha tha, ki agar kismat hi humse ruth jaye toh fir kya hoga? Ek dusre ko lambe choude vaade dene ke chakar mein, hum bhul jaate hai, ki zindagi bahut choti hoti hai Viraat. Aur iss choti si life mein, sirf kismat walon ko sacha pyaar milta hai, chahe woh kuch hi dino ke liye kyun na ho. Tumhara aur mera rishta, bhale hamesha ke liye na rahe lekin woh pal jo tumhare saath guzarein hain, unke sahare zindagi kya. maut bhi jee lungi. Hamesha khush rehna aur apne appko kabhi akela mat samajhna, kyun ki koi hai jo tumhe hamesha chahata rahega aur hamesha ke baad bhi...My Dear Jeevi...Viraat...apna khayal rakhna...
Love Maya...
After reading the letter, Viren starts laughing, how could Viraat miss the most important word in this letter, he thought.
Viraat: (confused) Bhai kya hua? App has kyun rahe ho?
Viren: (looking at Viraat) Viraat tu sure hai ki yeh letter Maya ne likha hai?
Viraat: Haan Bhai, yeh Maya ki hi writing hai.
Viren: Writing zarur Maya ki hogi Viraat, par words kisi aur ke hai.
Viraat: Bhai, what are you saying? Bhai akhir app kyun Maya se nafrat karte ho?
Viren: Viraat main Maya se nafrat nahi karta. Main tujhe khush dekhna chahta hun aur janta hun ki tu Maya ke saath khush nahi rahega. Aur agar tujhe aaj bhi lagta hai ki main tere life mein interfere kar raha hun, then I'm sorry, but main teri zindagi barbad hote huye nahi dekh sakhta.
Viraat: Bhai I trust you but Maya sach mein badal gayi hai.
Viren: Acha? Agar woh badal gayi hai, toh usne tujhe yeh bataya ki yeh letter mein jo wordings hai woh Maanvi ke hai?
Viraat: (confused) Maanvi ke wordings?
Viren: Kya hua? Nahi bataya usne?
Viraat: Bhai app kehna kya chahte ho? Maanvi ka Maya ke letter se kya connection?
Viren: Main yeh kehna chahta hun ki yeh letter mein Maanvi ke words hai, uski feelings hai woh bhi Jeevika ke liye.
Viraat: (confused) Maanvi ki feeling woh bhi Bhabhi ke liye?
Viren: Haan. Tune sach mein nahi dekha Viraat? (showing the letter to him) Yeh dekh, My Dear Jeevi...matlab Jeevika.
Viraat: (shocked) Bhai yeh..
Viren: Tu ab bhi sach se inkar karega Viraat? Yeh feeling Maanvi ke hai,(hands on his shoulder) tu Maya se nahi Maanvi se pyaar karta hai Viraat, tune usse maaf kiya, usse second chance di, iss letter ki wajha se, jo ki Maanvi ke hai, toh tujhe toh usse pyaar hoga na?
Viraat: (tears in his eyes) Maya ne...Bhai,mere saath hi aisa kyun hota hai?
Viren hugged his brother tightly, he didn't wanted to hurt him but he had to do this in order to save him from the pain he would've suffered for his whole life after getting married to Maya.
Viren: (teary eyes) Viraat, jo hota hai ache ke liye hi hota hai. Dekh aaj tera roka hai aur aaj tujhe sach ka pata chal gaya. Tujhe toh khush hona chahiye.
Viraat: (sobbing) Kyun khush hona chahiye Bhai, usne mere saath...aur Maanvi bhi uske saath...
Viren: Viraat, isme Maanvi ki kya galti hai, woh toh tujhe khush dekhna chahti hai, tu janta hai na uska mann kitna saaf hai, woh kisi ke bhi baare mein bura nahi sochti toh Maya ke baare mein kaise soche gi.
Viraat: (broke the hug) I'm sorry Bhai, maine uske liye appko...I'm really sorry Bhai..
Viren: Pagal hai kya, isme teri kya galti. (smiles) Mujhe toh khushi huyi tujhe apne pyaar ke liye itna protective dekh kar, par agar woh Maanvi ke liye hota toh aur bhi khushi hoti.
Viraat: Bhai Maanvi aur main? Kaise?
Viren: Pyaar karta hai tu usse. Yakeen nahi ho raha hai?
Viraat: Nahi.
Viren: Ok chal apni aankhein band kar.
Viraat: (confused) Aankhein kyun?
Viren: Band karna yaar.
Viraat: (eyes closed) Ok ab?
Viren: Ab tu imagine kar ki tu ek bahut hi khubsurat beach par khada hai, hawa chal rahi hai, sunset hai, violin baaj rahi hai, phool baras rahe hai, aur ek ladki hai, jo tujhse dur kadhi hai. Usne saree pehni huyi hai, jo hawa mein lahera raha hai, uski baal khuli hui, jo uske chahre par aa raha hai, aur woh usse haatne ki koshish kar rahi hai. Tu usske paas jaata hai, woh palati(turns) hai, muskurate huye. Woh kisi pari (angel) ki tarah lag rahi hai, uski aankhein, jisme doob jaane ka mann karta hai, uski woh smile, jisse dekh kar kissi ko bhi usse pyaar ho jaaye, jisse dekh kar har dard bhi mitha lagta hai. Kaun hai woh ladki Viraat? Jisse tu pyaar karta hai?
Viraat was imagining what Viren was telling him to. He saw himself standing on a beautiful beach, with beautiful sunset, wind blowing, three little girls playing violin, flowers falling down, and a girl standing far away from him. She was wearing beautiful red saree, her hair was open, she was trying to keep her hair away from her face as the wind blew. He went close to her, she turned around and smiled widely. Viraat smiled back at her, she looked so beautiful just like an angel, her eyes, her smile was one in a million. She was none other then his Bhabhi ki Behna, Maanvi.
Viraat: (eyes closed/smiles) Maanvi.
Viren: (smiles hugely) Dekha maine kaha tha na, tujhe Maanvi se pyaar ho gaya hai.
Viraat: (opens his eyes/smiles) Haan Bhai, Maanvi, main sach mein Maanvi se pyaar karta hun,(hugs Viren) Bhai, I'm in love with Maanvi. Main usse pyaar kar baitha Bhai.
Viren: (hugs him back) I'm so happy for you Viraat.
Viraat: (frowns/pulled away from the hug) Par Bhai, mera roka?
Viren: Haan kuch toh karna padega.
Viraat: (smiles) Bhai, I have an idea,
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Chaudhary's finally arrived at the Vadhera house, Maanvi ran towards her sister and hugged her tightly.
Maanvi: Diii...Maine appko kitna miss kiya. (pulled away) Ab app kaisi ho?
Jeevika: Maine bhi tujhe bahut miss kiya Mannu, aur main toh bilkul thik hun, tu kaisi hai?
Maanvi: Mujhe kya ho sakhta hai Di, I'm also fit and fine.
Jeevika: Very good Mannu, main Beeji aur baki sab se mil kar aati hun.
Maanvi: Aur main bhi sabko mil ke aati hun.
Jeevika went towards the Chaudhary's and hugged them. Maanvi also hugged Vanshika Maa, Kadambari Chachi, Inder Chahu, and even Swamini Bua. She took Dadaji's blessing, pulled Shlok's cheek playfully and walked towards Maya to congratulate her.
Maanvi: (smiles) Congrats Maya, akhir mein tumne mere partner ko mujhse chin kar apna life partner banane ka first step le hi liya.
Maya: (little rudely) Thanks, aur Viraat tumahare partner hone se pehle mera partner tha maine usse kisi se nahi china, woh hamesha se sirf mera hi tha.
Maanvi: OK..chill Maya, waise hai kahan woh Chep?
Maya: Uska naam Viraat hai Maanvi, Chep nahi.
Maanvi: Arey relax, maine aise hi keh diya tha, tum toh kuch zyada possesive ho gayi, acha batao kahan hai Viraat?
Maya: Mujhe nahi pata.
Maanvi: (eyes widen) Tumhe nahi pata? Yaar tum ussi se hi shadi karne jaa rahi ho na? (to herself) Pata nahi shadi ke baad kya hoga Viraat ka, yeh usska khayal rakhe gi bhi ya nahi.
Maya: Haan nahi pata,...
Maya was cut off by Viren's voice.
Viren: (holding a mic in his hand) May I have your attention please. Aaj mere Bhai Viraat ka roka hai, Thank You so much for coming, i hope you all are having a good time. Anyways, Isse pehle ki mera Bhai kisi bandhan mein bandh jaaye, main chahta hun ki woh ek gaana gaaye, apne pyaar ke liye, apni feeling confess kare, uske liye jisse woh bahut pyaar karta hai ek gaane ke zariye. So Ladies and Gentleman, presenting Mr. Viraat Singh Vadhera, please give him a big round of applause.
Everyone clapped for Viraat, all the lights turned off. Then one spotlight turned on where Viraat was standing with his guitar.
Viraat: (smiles) Yeh gaana uss ladki ke liye, jisse main khudh se bhi zyada pyaar karta hun.
Everyone smiled at Maya, including Maanvi, who was standing beside Maya. Maya blushed a little and smiled at Viraat.
Viraat: (playing his guitar/eyes closed)Jism se rooh tak hai tumhare nishaan, ban gaye tum meri zindagi...
Maanvi smiled widely while Viraat was singing, he actually looks cute, lucky Maya, she thought.
Viraat:(opens his eyes/looking at Maanvi/walking around, slowly) Jism se rooh tak hai tumhare nishaan, ban gaye tum meri zindagi, (walking towards Maya and Maanvi) jab se tum ho miley, jaan-o-dil hai khile, tumse waah basta hai har khushi...(walking slowly around Maanvi & Maya)...Tum ho mera pyaar, tumse hai karaar, tumko hi basaya main yaadon mein...tumse hai nasha, tumse hai khumaar, tumko hi sajaya maine khwabon mein, (standing infront of Maya & Maanvi) tum ho mera pyaar tumse hai karaar, tumko hi basaya maine yaadon mein...
Everyone, including Maya and Maanvi was smiling at Viraat. Viraat handed his guitar to Viren, who was just two steps away from him, he smiled and started playing the guitar. Viraat went towards the girls, Maya held her hand out for Viraat, but Viraat held Maanvi's hand and took her in the middle of the hall leaving behind a shocked and embarrassed Maya, one spotlight on Virmaan. Everyone was shell shocked including Maanvi, she didn't know why Viraat took her hand when Maya held her hand out for him. Viraat took Maanvi left hand and placed it on his right shoulder, her right hand in his left hand, and placed his right hand on her waist, slowly, dancing with the love of his life. Maya was burning in jealousy, she was shocked, confused, surprised, angry, etc, etc, etc...
Viraat: Jab miley nahi the tum, na thi khushiyan na gam, tum miley toh badle zindagi ke yeh mausam...Ho...Sun raha hai jo duwa, mera rab hai tujh mein, har jagah tha kuch kam mila mujhe sab tujh mein...(moving the strands of hair behind her ears that was on her face)...Raat din dekhna tujhko aadat meri, yun tujhe chahana, hai ibadat meri...(spinning her around the hall) Tum ho mera pyaar, tumse hai karaar, tumko hi basaya main yaadon mein...(pushes her away and then pulls her back) Tumse hai nasha, tumse hai khumaar, tumko hi sajaya maine khwabon mein, (spinning her again) tum ho mera pyaar tumse hai karaar, tumko hi basaya maine yaadon mein...(pulled her close to him/their chest touching/slowly moving their feet)...Jism se rooh tak hai tumhare nishan ban gaye tum meri zindagi.
Everyone was confused and shocked looking at Viraat's behavior, it was his roka with Maya, and there his dancing with Maanvi like she is his soon to be wife. Viren and Jeevika were the only two who was happy to see them together. Maya was just pissed off, while Maanvi was confused, she didn't understand what Viraat was doing, but she was surely enjoying the moment with him. Maanvi's hands were around Viraat's neck and his hands were around her waist, only inches away from each other, lost in each other's eyes and slowly moving their feets.
Viraat: Aankhein sehra meri tu hai bheega ik badal, meri khwaishon mein tu, tere liye main pagal...O Ho..tu hai behti naadi dooba dooba main sahil, main hun tujh mein fanaa, tu hi mera hai haasil...
Viraat walked behind Maanvi and placed his hands around her stomach and pulled her very close to him. Maanvi closed her eyes as she felt the warmth of his body, his head resting on her shoulder. She slowly places her hands on his hands that is on her stomach, slowly and smoothly moves her feet along with him, lost in his arms.
Viraat: Jabse tu oh sanam, meri baahon mein hai, ik ujala sa dil ki panaahon mein hai...
Viraat turns her around, places his right hand on her waist, left hand on holding her right hand and her left hand on his shoulder. They moved their feet little faster this time but smoothly, looking into each others eyes deeply.
Viraat: Tum ho mera pyaar, tumse hai karaar, tumko hi basaya main yaadon mein, tumse hai nasha, tumse hai khumaar, tumko hi sajaya main khawabon mein...Tum ho mera pyaar, tumse hai karaar, tumko hi basaya main yaadon mein, (their forehead touching) tumse hai nasha, tumse hai khumaar, tumko hi sajaya maine khwabon mein, Tum ho mera pyaar tumse hai karaar tumko hi basaya main yaadon mein, tumse hai nasha, tumse hai khumaar, tumko hi sajaya main khawabon mein...(cups her face/looking deeply into her eyes) Tum ho mera pyaar, tumse hai karaar, tumko hi basaya main yaadon mein, tumse hai nasha, tumse hai khumaar, tumko hi sajaya main khwabon mein...(kisses her forehead)...
The song finally ended, the light turned back on, Maanvi was just speechless, she was just confused and shocked. She didn't understand what was going on, she turned her face to see the look on everyones face around the hall. Maya looked pissed off; Virika looked happy; Inder Chachu, Vanshika Maa, Shlok, Dabbu, Pinky Chachi, Madhan Chachu, Kadambari Chachi looked confused; And Dadaji, Swamini Bua, Beeji looked shocked and angry.
Maanvi: (to herself/scared) Yeh Viraat ne kya kiya..?? Ab kya hoga Maanvi?
Hmm...Done...so guyz wat do u think? Sud i continue?...m sorry if its not good, i juz luv dis song dats y i wrote dis SS on 1 of my fav. couple...plz do comment and hit like if u lykd it...sorry 4 ne mistakes, dere mite b a lot of em...neways,,thnk u,,tc
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VirMaan SS...Tum Ho Mera Pyaar...
Viraat: Bhai, Maanvi aa gayi kya? Main kabse uska intezaar kar raha hun aur woh hai ki abhi tak aayi nahi.
Viraat was impatiently waiting for Maanvi, he ran to his Brother and started asking question about Maanvi when he saw him coming from down stairs. It was Viraat and Maya's Roka, everyone had arrived at the Vadhera house except the Chaudhary family. Everyone in the Vadhera house came to know about Maanvi's illness after Jeevika's accident, except Jeevika and Viraat. Everyone knows how important Maanvi is to Jeevika, so they decided to hide the fact that her little sister, who's her life, is suffering from cancer. On the other hand, Viren decided to hide this fact from Viraat because he knows what place Maanvi holds in his heart and if he comes to know about her illness, he would be broken into tiny pieces once again. He knows how much Viraat loves Maanvi but doesn't realize it, so it was his responsibility to make him realize his feelings towards Maanvi. He will go to any extant to see his little brother happy and his happiness lies only in Maanvi's, not in Maya's, even if it means to hurt his Badi Maa. After many attempts, today was his last day to make his little brother realize how much he loves Maanvi before its too late.
Viren: (serious tone) Kyun Viraat, tu Maanvi ka intezaar kyun kar raha hai? Tujhe toh mujhse puchna chahiye ki Maya aa gayi hai ya nahi?
Viraat: Bhai main Maya ke baare mein kyun puchun, uska roka hai woh toh aaye gi hi na, app please batao na Maanvi aa gayi hai ya nahi?
Viren: Nahi aayi hai woh.
Viraat: (sitting on the coner of his bed) Yeh Maanvi bhi na, maine usse kaha tha ki jaldi aa jaana, fir bhi nahi aayi.
Viren: Aur kyun aaye gi woh jaldi, akhir kyun woh tere roke ke liye jaldi aaye gi Viraat.
Viraat: Bhai app yeh kya keh rahe ho, woh meri partner hai, mujhe uski zarurat hai.
Viren: Tujhe uski zarurat kyun hai Viraat? Tere paas toh Maya hai na, fir kyun baar baar Maanvi Maanvi karta rehta hai? Maanvi toh teri sirf ek achi dost hai na, fir kyun har pal Maanvi ko call ya messages karta rehta hai? Aur agar reply na aaye toh kyun phone ko dekhta rehta hai? Us din kyun tune Maya ko Maanvi kaha? Batao Viraat.
Viraat was little confused, why was his Brother behaving this way, why was he saying all this to him.
Viraat: (stands up) Bhai, appko ho kya gaya hai? Bhai, Maanvi meri ek bahut achi dost hai, mujhe uske saath baat karna acha lagta hai, uske saath time spend karna acha lagta hai, woh mujhe itni achi tarah se samajhti hai, meri har ek choti si choti baat mere bina boley hi samjh jaati hai, main kya chahta hun kya nahi woh sab janti hai Bhai, aur rahi baat Maya ko Maanvi kehne ki toh woh toh galti se ho gaya, woh Maya baar baar Maanvi ka naam le rahi thi, isiliye...
Viren: (cuts Viraat off) Galti se ho gaya? Maya ko Maanvi kaha chalo yeh maanta hun ki galti se ho gaya, par tu mujhe yeh baat Viraat, jab tu Maanvi se baat karta hai, toh I'm sure woh bhi Maya ke baare mein baat karti hogi, kya kabhi tune Maanvi ki Maya nahi kaha?
Viraat: Haan Bhai, main jab bhi Maanvi se baat karta hun toh woh Maya ka naam bich mein zarur laati hai, par maine use kabhi bhi Maya nahi kaha.
Viren: Acha, toh jab Maya Maanvi ki baat karti hai toh tera dimaag Maanvi par hi rehta hai, par jab Maanvi Maya ki baat karti hai toh bhi tere dimaag mein Maanvi hi basi rehti hai Viraat?
Viraat: (confused) Bhai aap kehna kya chahte ho? Saaf saaf kaho please.
Viren: Main yeh kehna chahta hun Viraat, ki tujhe Maya se nahi Maanvi se pyaar hai. Tu Maya se pyaar nahi karta tu sirf Maanvi se pyaar karta hai.
Viraat: Bhai maine appse kitna baar kaha hai ki main Maanvi se pyaar nahi karta, hum sirf dost hai.
Viren: Jhut mat bol Viraat, kam se kam ab toh mat bol, ab toh realize kar ki tu usse chahta hai. Teri life mein jo pyaar hai, woh sirf Maanvi ki wajha se hai, tu Maya se nahi Maanvi se pyaar karta hai Viraat, ab toh realize kar.
Viraat: Bhai main Maanvi se kaise pyaar kar sakhta hun? Main Maya se pyaar karta hun, infact maine Maya ko second chance diya uski letter padhne ke baad. Main manta hun ki Maanvi ne bahut koshish ki mujhe samjhane ki, par maine Maya ko maaf kiya tha because of that letter. Bhai agar woh letter app bhi padhte na, toh app bhi mujhe Maya ko Maaf karne ke liye kehte, usse second chance dene ke liye kehte.
Viren: Aisa kya tha uss letter mein, jisne tujhe apna saara dard bhulane pe majbur kar diya Viraat? Kya main woh letter dekh sakhta hun?
Viraat: Of course Bhai, ek min.
Viraat took the letter out of his drawer and handed it to Viren.
Viraat: Yeh rahi Bhai.
Viren: (opening the letter)Thanks.
'Dear Viraat'
Main jaa rahi hun, hamesha ke liye...tumse dur. Tum jeet gaye, lekin main bhi haari nahi. Kyun ki ek bahut badi sikh le kar jaa rahi hun...ki zindagi mein hum jisse sab se zyada pyaar karte hai, usse for granted le lete hai,,,hume lagta hai ki jo bhi ho jaye, hum dono kabhi ek dusre se nahi bichde gein, aaj ek rutha hai toh kal dusra mana lega, lekin maine kabhi nahi socha tha, ki agar kismat hi humse ruth jaye toh fir kya hoga? Ek dusre ko lambe choude vaade dene ke chakar mein, hum bhul jaate hai, ki zindagi bahut choti hoti hai Viraat. Aur iss choti si life mein, sirf kismat walon ko sacha pyaar milta hai, chahe woh kuch hi dino ke liye kyun na ho. Tumhara aur mera rishta, bhale hamesha ke liye na rahe lekin woh pal jo tumhare saath guzarein hain, unke sahare zindagi kya. maut bhi jee lungi. Hamesha khush rehna aur apne appko kabhi akela mat samajhna, kyun ki koi hai jo tumhe hamesha chahata rahega aur hamesha ke baad bhi...My Dear Jeevi...Viraat...apna khayal rakhna...
Love Maya...
After reading the letter, Viren starts laughing, how could Viraat miss the most important word in this letter, he thought.
Viraat: (confused) Bhai kya hua? App has kyun rahe ho?
Viren: (looking at Viraat) Viraat tu sure hai ki yeh letter Maya ne likha hai?
Viraat: Haan Bhai, yeh Maya ki hi writing hai.
Viren: Writing zarur Maya ki hogi Viraat, par words kisi aur ke hai.
Viraat: Bhai, what are you saying? Bhai akhir app kyun Maya se nafrat karte ho?
Viren: Viraat main Maya se nafrat nahi karta. Main tujhe khush dekhna chahta hun aur janta hun ki tu Maya ke saath khush nahi rahega. Aur agar tujhe aaj bhi lagta hai ki main tere life mein interfere kar raha hun, then I'm sorry, but main teri zindagi barbad hote huye nahi dekh sakhta.
Viraat: Bhai I trust you but Maya sach mein badal gayi hai.
Viren: Acha? Agar woh badal gayi hai, toh usne tujhe yeh bataya ki yeh letter mein jo wordings hai woh Maanvi ke hai?
Viraat: (confused) Maanvi ke wordings?
Viren: Kya hua? Nahi bataya usne?
Viraat: Bhai app kehna kya chahte ho? Maanvi ka Maya ke letter se kya connection?
Viren: Main yeh kehna chahta hun ki yeh letter mein Maanvi ke words hai, uski feelings hai woh bhi Jeevika ke liye.
Viraat: (confused) Maanvi ki feeling woh bhi Bhabhi ke liye?
Viren: Haan. Tune sach mein nahi dekha Viraat? (showing the letter to him) Yeh dekh, My Dear Jeevi...matlab Jeevika.
Viraat: (shocked) Bhai yeh..
Viren: Tu ab bhi sach se inkar karega Viraat? Yeh feeling Maanvi ke hai,(hands on his shoulder) tu Maya se nahi Maanvi se pyaar karta hai Viraat, tune usse maaf kiya, usse second chance di, iss letter ki wajha se, jo ki Maanvi ke hai, toh tujhe toh usse pyaar hoga na?
Viraat: (tears in his eyes) Maya ne...Bhai,mere saath hi aisa kyun hota hai?
Viren hugged his brother tightly, he didn't wanted to hurt him but he had to do this in order to save him from the pain he would've suffered for his whole life after getting married to Maya.
Viren: (teary eyes) Viraat, jo hota hai ache ke liye hi hota hai. Dekh aaj tera roka hai aur aaj tujhe sach ka pata chal gaya. Tujhe toh khush hona chahiye.
Viraat: (sobbing) Kyun khush hona chahiye Bhai, usne mere saath...aur Maanvi bhi uske saath...
Viren: Viraat, isme Maanvi ki kya galti hai, woh toh tujhe khush dekhna chahti hai, tu janta hai na uska mann kitna saaf hai, woh kisi ke bhi baare mein bura nahi sochti toh Maya ke baare mein kaise soche gi.
Viraat: (broke the hug) I'm sorry Bhai, maine uske liye appko...I'm really sorry Bhai..
Viren: Pagal hai kya, isme teri kya galti. (smiles) Mujhe toh khushi huyi tujhe apne pyaar ke liye itna protective dekh kar, par agar woh Maanvi ke liye hota toh aur bhi khushi hoti.
Viraat: Bhai Maanvi aur main? Kaise?
Viren: Pyaar karta hai tu usse. Yakeen nahi ho raha hai?
Viraat: Nahi.
Viren: Ok chal apni aankhein band kar.
Viraat: (confused) Aankhein kyun?
Viren: Band karna yaar.
Viraat: (eyes closed) Ok ab?
Viren: Ab tu imagine kar ki tu ek bahut hi khubsurat beach par khada hai, hawa chal rahi hai, sunset hai, violin baaj rahi hai, phool baras rahe hai, aur ek ladki hai, jo tujhse dur kadhi hai. Usne saree pehni huyi hai, jo hawa mein lahera raha hai, uski baal khuli hui, jo uske chahre par aa raha hai, aur woh usse haatne ki koshish kar rahi hai. Tu usske paas jaata hai, woh palati(turns) hai, muskurate huye. Woh kisi pari (angel) ki tarah lag rahi hai, uski aankhein, jisme doob jaane ka mann karta hai, uski woh smile, jisse dekh kar kissi ko bhi usse pyaar ho jaaye, jisse dekh kar har dard bhi mitha lagta hai. Kaun hai woh ladki Viraat? Jisse tu pyaar karta hai?
Viraat was imagining what Viren was telling him to. He saw himself standing on a beautiful beach, with beautiful sunset, wind blowing, three little girls playing violin, flowers falling down, and a girl standing far away from him. She was wearing beautiful red saree, her hair was open, she was trying to keep her hair away from her face as the wind blew. He went close to her, she turned around and smiled widely. Viraat smiled back at her, she looked so beautiful just like an angel, her eyes, her smile was one in a million. She was none other then his Bhabhi ki Behna, Maanvi.
Viraat: (eyes closed/smiles) Maanvi.
Viren: (smiles hugely) Dekha maine kaha tha na, tujhe Maanvi se pyaar ho gaya hai.
Viraat: (opens his eyes/smiles) Haan Bhai, Maanvi, main sach mein Maanvi se pyaar karta hun,(hugs Viren) Bhai, I'm in love with Maanvi. Main usse pyaar kar baitha Bhai.
Viren: (hugs him back) I'm so happy for you Viraat.
Viraat: (frowns/pulled away from the hug) Par Bhai, mera roka?
Viren: Haan kuch toh karna padega.
Viraat: (smiles) Bhai, I have an idea,
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Chaudhary's finally arrived at the Vadhera house, Maanvi ran towards her sister and hugged her tightly.
Maanvi: Diii...Maine appko kitna miss kiya. (pulled away) Ab app kaisi ho?
Jeevika: Maine bhi tujhe bahut miss kiya Mannu, aur main toh bilkul thik hun, tu kaisi hai?
Maanvi: Mujhe kya ho sakhta hai Di, I'm also fit and fine.
Jeevika: Very good Mannu, main Beeji aur baki sab se mil kar aati hun.
Maanvi: Aur main bhi sabko mil ke aati hun.
Jeevika went towards the Chaudhary's and hugged them. Maanvi also hugged Vanshika Maa, Kadambari Chachi, Inder Chahu, and even Swamini Bua. She took Dadaji's blessing, pulled Shlok's cheek playfully and walked towards Maya to congratulate her.
Maanvi: (smiles) Congrats Maya, akhir mein tumne mere partner ko mujhse chin kar apna life partner banane ka first step le hi liya.
Maya: (little rudely) Thanks, aur Viraat tumahare partner hone se pehle mera partner tha maine usse kisi se nahi china, woh hamesha se sirf mera hi tha.
Maanvi: OK..chill Maya, waise hai kahan woh Chep?
Maya: Uska naam Viraat hai Maanvi, Chep nahi.
Maanvi: Arey relax, maine aise hi keh diya tha, tum toh kuch zyada possesive ho gayi, acha batao kahan hai Viraat?
Maya: Mujhe nahi pata.
Maanvi: (eyes widen) Tumhe nahi pata? Yaar tum ussi se hi shadi karne jaa rahi ho na? (to herself) Pata nahi shadi ke baad kya hoga Viraat ka, yeh usska khayal rakhe gi bhi ya nahi.
Maya: Haan nahi pata,...
Maya was cut off by Viren's voice.
Viren: (holding a mic in his hand) May I have your attention please. Aaj mere Bhai Viraat ka roka hai, Thank You so much for coming, i hope you all are having a good time. Anyways, Isse pehle ki mera Bhai kisi bandhan mein bandh jaaye, main chahta hun ki woh ek gaana gaaye, apne pyaar ke liye, apni feeling confess kare, uske liye jisse woh bahut pyaar karta hai ek gaane ke zariye. So Ladies and Gentleman, presenting Mr. Viraat Singh Vadhera, please give him a big round of applause.
Everyone clapped for Viraat, all the lights turned off. Then one spotlight turned on where Viraat was standing with his guitar.
Viraat: (smiles) Yeh gaana uss ladki ke liye, jisse main khudh se bhi zyada pyaar karta hun.
Everyone smiled at Maya, including Maanvi, who was standing beside Maya. Maya blushed a little and smiled at Viraat.
Viraat: (playing his guitar/eyes closed)Jism se rooh tak hai tumhare nishaan, ban gaye tum meri zindagi...
Maanvi smiled widely while Viraat was singing, he actually looks cute, lucky Maya, she thought.
Viraat:(opens his eyes/looking at Maanvi/walking around, slowly) Jism se rooh tak hai tumhare nishaan, ban gaye tum meri zindagi, (walking towards Maya and Maanvi) jab se tum ho miley, jaan-o-dil hai khile, tumse waah basta hai har khushi...(walking slowly around Maanvi & Maya)...Tum ho mera pyaar, tumse hai karaar, tumko hi basaya main yaadon mein...tumse hai nasha, tumse hai khumaar, tumko hi sajaya maine khwabon mein, (standing infront of Maya & Maanvi) tum ho mera pyaar tumse hai karaar, tumko hi basaya maine yaadon mein...
Everyone, including Maya and Maanvi was smiling at Viraat. Viraat handed his guitar to Viren, who was just two steps away from him, he smiled and started playing the guitar. Viraat went towards the girls, Maya held her hand out for Viraat, but Viraat held Maanvi's hand and took her in the middle of the hall leaving behind a shocked and embarrassed Maya, one spotlight on Virmaan. Everyone was shell shocked including Maanvi, she didn't know why Viraat took her hand when Maya held her hand out for him. Viraat took Maanvi left hand and placed it on his right shoulder, her right hand in his left hand, and placed his right hand on her waist, slowly, dancing with the love of his life. Maya was burning in jealousy, she was shocked, confused, surprised, angry, etc, etc, etc...
Viraat: Jab miley nahi the tum, na thi khushiyan na gam, tum miley toh badle zindagi ke yeh mausam...Ho...Sun raha hai jo duwa, mera rab hai tujh mein, har jagah tha kuch kam mila mujhe sab tujh mein...(moving the strands of hair behind her ears that was on her face)...Raat din dekhna tujhko aadat meri, yun tujhe chahana, hai ibadat meri...(spinning her around the hall) Tum ho mera pyaar, tumse hai karaar, tumko hi basaya main yaadon mein...(pushes her away and then pulls her back) Tumse hai nasha, tumse hai khumaar, tumko hi sajaya maine khwabon mein, (spinning her again) tum ho mera pyaar tumse hai karaar, tumko hi basaya maine yaadon mein...(pulled her close to him/their chest touching/slowly moving their feet)...Jism se rooh tak hai tumhare nishan ban gaye tum meri zindagi.
Everyone was confused and shocked looking at Viraat's behavior, it was his roka with Maya, and there his dancing with Maanvi like she is his soon to be wife. Viren and Jeevika were the only two who was happy to see them together. Maya was just pissed off, while Maanvi was confused, she didn't understand what Viraat was doing, but she was surely enjoying the moment with him. Maanvi's hands were around Viraat's neck and his hands were around her waist, only inches away from each other, lost in each other's eyes and slowly moving their feets.
Viraat: Aankhein sehra meri tu hai bheega ik badal, meri khwaishon mein tu, tere liye main pagal...O Ho..tu hai behti naadi dooba dooba main sahil, main hun tujh mein fanaa, tu hi mera hai haasil...
Viraat walked behind Maanvi and placed his hands around her stomach and pulled her very close to him. Maanvi closed her eyes as she felt the warmth of his body, his head resting on her shoulder. She slowly places her hands on his hands that is on her stomach, slowly and smoothly moves her feet along with him, lost in his arms.
Viraat: Jabse tu oh sanam, meri baahon mein hai, ik ujala sa dil ki panaahon mein hai...
Viraat turns her around, places his right hand on her waist, left hand on holding her right hand and her left hand on his shoulder. They moved their feet little faster this time but smoothly, looking into each others eyes deeply.
Viraat: Tum ho mera pyaar, tumse hai karaar, tumko hi basaya main yaadon mein, tumse hai nasha, tumse hai khumaar, tumko hi sajaya main khawabon mein...Tum ho mera pyaar, tumse hai karaar, tumko hi basaya main yaadon mein, (their forehead touching) tumse hai nasha, tumse hai khumaar, tumko hi sajaya maine khwabon mein, Tum ho mera pyaar tumse hai karaar tumko hi basaya main yaadon mein, tumse hai nasha, tumse hai khumaar, tumko hi sajaya main khawabon mein...(cups her face/looking deeply into her eyes) Tum ho mera pyaar, tumse hai karaar, tumko hi basaya main yaadon mein, tumse hai nasha, tumse hai khumaar, tumko hi sajaya main khwabon mein...(kisses her forehead)...
The song finally ended, the light turned back on, Maanvi was just speechless, she was just confused and shocked. She didn't understand what was going on, she turned her face to see the look on everyones face around the hall. Maya looked pissed off; Virika looked happy; Inder Chachu, Vanshika Maa, Shlok, Dabbu, Pinky Chachi, Madhan Chachu, Kadambari Chachi looked confused; And Dadaji, Swamini Bua, Beeji looked shocked and angry.
Maanvi: (to herself/scared) Yeh Viraat ne kya kiya..?? Ab kya hoga Maanvi?
Hmm...Done...so guyz wat do u think? Sud i continue?...m sorry if its not good, i juz luv dis song dats y i wrote dis SS on 1 of my fav. couple...plz do comment and hit like if u lykd it...sorry 4 ne mistakes, dere mite b a lot of em...neways,,thnk u,,tc
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