~ArHi FF: The trodden paths~ ch4 pg69 NEW--13/7)) - Page 53

Posted: 11 years ago
Go Payal!  Loved the new chapter.  An anguished Arnav and a righteous Khushi is always a good read but the Yash/Anjali relationship is a welcome change.
Posted: 11 years ago
poor khushi. totally understand her. gosh payal divoced akash!?
xxx
Posted: 11 years ago
wow that was an awesome and emotional update dear
loved it
too good
thanks for updating
continue soon
OMG payal divorced akash??
can't wait to read further updates
thanx for the pm
Posted: 11 years ago
WOW !! ... Superb update ...
Loveed it ...
Lol , Hah , Jealous Arnav ...
and OMG , Payal divorced Akaash !!!!!!!!!!! ... 
Do continue soon n Thnxx 4 the pm :) 
Posted: 11 years ago
Nice continue soon lyraa.A big fan of urs.:)
Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update ...continue soon:)...and thanks for the pm:)
Posted: 11 years ago
I like yash! He seems like a really nice guy😊 smthn btwn yash n anjali..hmm..dat wud b nice😊
This care had been his, this love had been his.
She had been his. Once.--there's so much longing in these words..d convo he had wid khushi was imp..khushi is right..love was nt enuf..trust was needed..
bt wat abt payal??she divorced akash!?bt y??
Posted: 11 years ago
Why was Payal so instrumental in making sure Khushi was gone and that too...in such a hurry?
Posted: 11 years ago
I just caught up with this FF!
You had me hooked to it right from the prolouge!
I love the emotions you've portrayed so well!
I've already mention before as how amazingly you write! Just mind blowing! I am happy that I read four chapters in one go because it would have been impossible for me to wait.

When I read that khushi was searching a third star I was like what the? When she questioned where was HE? My heart skipped a beat. I was like I'm sure Arnav is alive but she thinks he is dead but then you proved me wrong for which I'm grateful to you.

But then who is HE that she was searching ?????

I like this Yash guy. He seems to be nice. I love the effect Anjali had on him. I wish we could get a happy ending for her as well. Will it happen? I hope it does.
Jiya sounds like a sweetheart and also ASR jr.

I am looking forward for you to update. Please do soon.

P.S- When will you update heart remembers?

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