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~ArHi FF: The trodden paths~ ch4 pg69 NEW--13/7)) (Page 52)

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Posted: 02 June 2012 at 11:45am | IP Logged
AWWW!

Clint Eastwood snarls

The pain of Arnav's heart touched me deeply.
The broken hope and love in Khushi brought me to my knees.
But the tears dropped from me when Arnav and Khushi were lost in each others memories.
Beautiful update, I loved it.

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Posted: 02 June 2012 at 11:47am | IP Logged
lyraa i was waiting for u to update this ffSmile
omg!!!! its simply awesome
loved the way u have written it
very emotional
hope there is no love triangle
plz continue and update soon
thanks for the pm

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Posted: 02 June 2012 at 11:48am | IP Logged
i feel their pain through your words...poor souls...even though they love each other they cant be together...its beautifully written,,,...

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Posted: 02 June 2012 at 11:50am | IP Logged
nice update

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Posted: 02 June 2012 at 12:02pm | IP Logged
I've just read all three chapters now :)
I'm so emotional after reading it, honestly each update was written beautifully, each word had depth an feeling to it... each emotion, whether it being pain, regret, loneliness, longing...it was depicted so well,,..i felt every emotion with your words... 

It's a different concept...and it has so much mystery in it...so much questions...honestly my mind is going haywire with predictions lol

The pain in Arnav breaks my heart, he feels rejected and so much regret, i'm just really excited to see how this story develops... :)

Well you've got me hooked to this...i'm a sucker for angst filled updates LOL
Thanks for the PM :)

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Posted: 02 June 2012 at 12:05pm | IP Logged
wowww this is so beautiful Clap
arnav's pain seeing khushi's state and thinking about her accident was described perfectly...got to see glimpse of the past. payal was very right every relationship should have trust also not only love and that was missing from arnav and khushi's life... 

loved the father daughter interaction.. jiya is so cute... she dried his hair and was talking everything about her and already had taken a promise from her dad that he has to tour her once rain stops... 

so is it yash who saved khushi from that near accident after she left hospital in the past???  from your note i could think may be he is her guardian, friend Confused

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Posted: 02 June 2012 at 12:05pm | IP Logged
TongueClap...amazing writing...i luvd it..tanx 4 pmWink

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Posted: 02 June 2012 at 12:08pm | IP Logged
nice... :) 
we waited for this update long ...
Jiya is M. Ahuja s daughter ?Smile

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