Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain

India-Forums

   
Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain
Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain

VIRMAN FF: TTOML #31- 2nd thread link: Pg 1 (Page 105)

SwatiVirMan Senior Member
SwatiVirMan
SwatiVirMan

Joined: 26 February 2012
Posts: 451

Posted: 17 August 2012 at 10:24am | IP Logged

Chapter 23:

WOW, just wow!

Im sooo excited! After sooo long you posted an update.

I loved every bit of it. I like the direction in which the story is heading.

Very very glad to know that daboo got to find out rahul's reality!

I'd love to read about a 'Fighting' scene between viraat d rahul, just to get all this settled.

VirMaan Heart they are sooo cute!

Everything about them in the ff  just makes me go AWH!

 

Chapter 24:

Holy Crap?! Oh My! This is getting REAL interesting! It reminds me of something! :D

I Love how he's giving her orders and she wants to follow them because she loves him!

And Oh! I LOVE LOVE LOVE viraat's character! EVERTYTHING ABOUT HIM! Heart

YAAAY! He bought her back home! Oh He's SO stubborn yet SOO cool?! (dunno how to describe it)

The update was awesome, Like ALWAYS!

The description in your writing is always spot on! makes it easy to understand and imagine everything perfectly.

 

Chapter 25:

YAAAYYY! Some action along the way??!! Woohooo! That'd be awesome to read about VirMaan getting involved in some action, which would eventually allow them to come closer to each other.

Goa?! Haw! That's a bit extreme, without even telling her. Oh well! That's cute as ever though.

Your work is getting WAY too addictive to read.

Some trouble and fun In GOA it is then?! Yet it's never easy to predict how you might lead the story.

Looking forward to some action!

 

Chapter 26:

Eee! He took her to the church! Because he wanted to see her happy? smile?

That's so freaking cute of him to just randomly bring her to a place she loves and has memories of.

He made a wish for her?! Day Dreaming

YAAYY! i hope Rahul gets his face knocked out! Big smile

 
Thank you for all the PMs. All your updates were beautifully and perfectly written! Please do update soon Smile

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

ElenaElenor

Captain_Pari Goldie
Captain_Pari
Captain_Pari

Joined: 06 January 2009
Posts: 1844

Posted: 17 August 2012 at 3:01pm | IP Logged
What an amazing story!!.. There are no words to describe how good this is! You are truely a very talented writer! I am soo glad i read this! The way you portray Virmans relationship and the love,care and posseiveness in each meeting, is just mind blowing!
Update soon please, and if you have a pm list, do add me please!
 
-Luv Pari

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

ElenaElenor

chasinghope IF-Dazzler
chasinghope
chasinghope

Joined: 16 July 2012
Posts: 2922

Posted: 18 August 2012 at 5:31am | IP Logged
I may have not been commenting..But I read all the parts in one go! I was so interested in it! Went to your index and read everything! Elena! You are so talented and you write so well!! Big smile From Chapter 1 there was a spark in your writing which lead me to read the rest! Please continue and accept my friend request..& I would like a PM! I love your writings! Clap It is WONDERFUL!

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

ElenaElenor

littlerani Senior Member
littlerani
littlerani

Joined: 11 February 2005
Posts: 332

Posted: 18 August 2012 at 11:39am | IP Logged
Hi I read your ss in a day.  Great story.  I love how close maanvi and virat are.  Have we heard the last of maya?

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

ElenaElenor

Zairean IF-Dazzler
Zairean
Zairean

Joined: 04 June 2012
Posts: 3660

Posted: 19 August 2012 at 10:57pm | IP Logged
What more could I say? This whole story is amazinglyyy superb! Read the whole story from start, and u know what I read it twice, mainly because of some lines and conversations b/w Virman and I guess I need to read it again. Their banters in this story is  totally different from the actual show, like they don't go calling around each other partner, chep or dedfutiya but still the way you've described their banters has captured my heart.

And how could I forget Virattt, dudeee I love this Virat, having all that bad image. I guess I m mad about him LOL. And their romance, don't have words to describe it! 

And and and, Manvi's "Is this why we're here" have made me crazy! She's such a question bank.

Anddd, last but not least, the suspense lies here, how Virat would take his revenge!  

PM me when you update! 
WAITING EAGERLY Wink!



Edited by ITrustMyHeart - 07 October 2012 at 8:38am

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

ElenaElenor

ElenaElenor Senior Member
ElenaElenor
ElenaElenor

Joined: 30 January 2012
Posts: 825

Posted: 22 August 2012 at 2:57pm | IP Logged
 

It's me again!Big smile I was in the land of grass and cows (Wales). A not so clear picture to prove it <------I was going to take a picture with a cow to prove the point but they weren't too friendly. They didn't smell that pleasant- in other words'they were awful to be around. What's with cows? They are supposed to graze grass and moo but how have they become so aggressive? Yes, you can go on to the update, my cows speech has ended.  Humsafar update will be up tomorrow.

To readers still asking me about my pm list- please read the first page, it says it all.

---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
 
"I finally understood what true love meant...love meant that you care for another person's happiness more than your own, no matter how painful the choices you face might be''
 
Tumblr_m0s9cds61r1qgzekwo1_500_large
 
 
 
 

'You wouldn't dare', Rahul stated, only to realize is mistake as the words left his mouth. Daring him would be making this a challenge. 'Look', he added, trying to shift the conversation. Diverting the attention to something he valued. 'Tell me one good reason not to kill you', Virat gritted out, pushing him backwards as he staggered and clutched onto the side of the bar to balance himself, gaining the attention of the customers in the bar. Who watched curiously for a fight off.

'I'll tell you two', he answered, standing up straight; his breathing ragged from the man handling. 'First, if you want the media', he started out. 'I don't give a damn about the media', Virat stated, running out of patience as he took a step forward. 'Maanvi', Rahul said as he watched the colours drain from his face. A sight he watched in triumph. She would always be his weakness and he would always use that to his advantage. 'Don't say her name with your filthy mouth', he warned, his jaw clenched in tension as his dark eyes burned in fury.

 
 

'She wouldn't like it, if you go around killing people', he said, calmly. 'I am not a murderer', he answered, repeating the same thought which he had encoutered several times in his mind. 'If you come anywhere around 10 feet to her. I will kill you. This time, I wouldn't think of the pros and cons', he warned as Rahul walked away from the bar, earning a glance back to see if he was being followed and doing so until he reached parking. 'It wouldn't seem right if you walked out of here without a bruise', Rahul heard a voice as he turned around in surprise to see a sly smile flashing across his face. The next moment, Virat's fist came in contact with face, breaking his nose as blood trailed down his lips. He continued to hit his leg until Rahul collapsed to the hard ground.

'A small warning; you know I can do worse', he stated, walking away from the limp body who clutched his leg in agony; letting out screams of intolerance.

-------

'Where were you?' Maanvi asked, walking behind him as he walked in the house and up the stairs. 'Out', he answered, vaguely. Moving to the bedroom, leaving her to stand by the doorframe with her arms crossed. 'You can't leave me alone in Goa', she whined as his lips curled into amusement. 'You were alone for an hour', he explained, taking off his leather jacket and dropping it on the bed. His eyes fell on the tub of ice-cream in the middle of the bed and away to the television screen of some chick flick. ''You're having a bad day?' he asked, reading the signs to which she shrieked making him chuckle by her sudden outburst.

'I got this for you', he fished into the pocket as she waited in anticipation. An alarming thought invading her mind. 'You do realize it's your birthday in a few minutes. I am supposed to be leading up with the presents', she argued. Her lips turning into a pout to show her disapproval as he got up, leaning in to her and kissing her urgently which she mirrored, winding her arms around his neck. Abruptly, he moved back, leaving her in shock with her eyes still hazy.

 He leaned in to rest his forehead on hers. 'I can't imagine my life without you', he spoke, pulling her closer to him. 'I am not going anywhere', she insisted, her fingers brushing on his jaw. The assurance and uncertainty; his insecurities that surfaced from time to time. A part of her mind, registering the order and waited for the time, he would let go and believe her.

His eyes twinkled from excitement, replacing the coldness in his eyes. 'It's nothing special', he brushed off, handing her a small chained pendent with two, rustic gold small star. She looked at it and then his face, her heart wanting to leap out by the thought. 'You like stars', he reminded her as he tried to read her expressions, which were blank and stared at the pendent. 2 stars, her mother and father. 'You don't like it', he asked as she shook her head. 'It's beautiful', she answered sincerely, tracing the pendent carefully, bitting her tongue to let the tears flow through. 'I am supposed to get you something', she repeated, whining again as he sighed in frustration. 'Can't you forget that?' he asked, his tone rising.

'No', she snapped, walking away to sit on the bed. 'What do you want?' he asked, walking towards her. 'A bit of excitement', she answered rapidly. 'You want me to jump around and sing the birthday song wearing a crappy hat? Happy that I am a year older and a year wiser to see the shit in the world?' he asked as she nodded her head, absorbing his speech. 'That's the spirit', she answered, sarcastically.

'It's not over yet', he exclaimed, the boyish grin returning, making him look younger than he was. She was enjoying his playfulness; Goa had been a change for him. A good change. He was letting go and letting her in. Taking her hand and guiding her out, she looked ahead at the street. 'Where are we going?' she asked as he led her towards the beach which was a short distance away. A private beach off a small hotel.

She looked ahead. Over to the trees lay a small round table with white cushions and lanterns. Illuminating the desserted beach with hints of orange lights. 'Wow!' she exclaimed, her breathing hitched as she tried to catch up with it. 'I asked for one table and they set up three', he muttered, disappointed. 'Oh no, you paid someone to do your work and they didn't do it right?' she gasped, making him glare at her. 'The birthday spirit is going', he warned her as she raised her hands to apologize. 'No, no. I am sorry', she laughed, grabbing his hand and leading him towards the cushions as they both hesitantly sat down. 'Who knew Virat Singh Vadhera can be this cheesy?' she chuckled as he sat up straighter, his eyes growing distant. 'Who knew?' he repeated. A hint of irony running in his mind over his own actions.

'Happy Birthday', she whispered, pecking his cheek as he smiled in return, staring ahead at the waves. For once, not having to worry about if he was spending his birthday with his mother or his father. Of not being angry with his Bua, who would hold over extravagant parties, leaving a frightened boy in the midst of the crowd. Of not being saddened by losing the love of both of his parents in his childhood, seen as something to remind them of each other and despise the sight of him. Of not being guilty of being a murder in the confines of his mind, spending his time away from everything in his holiday home. Alone and shattered. For once, being exactly where he wanted to be. Their eyes following the stars in the sky as time passed slowly, making her drowsy as sleep took over and she leaned her head on his shoulder.

His gaze averted on her, sleeping peacefully. Drawing in breaths and exhaling rhythmically. Her heart beat following the same pattern. Her head resting on his shoulder and his arms around her waist, holding her closer before he gently lowered her besides him. Now sprawled across the blanket as he grabbed the blanket on the side and placed that on top of them. Tucking her hair behind her ear and kissing her forehead, he closed his eyes. Not wanting the reality to shatter, to chase this forever with her under the blanket of the shimmering sky and soft sounds of the waves... of finally easing into a life of love.

Love. he had come to understand is more than three words mumbled before bedtime.

------

The tall, aged figure walked through the front doors of the Vadhera mansion to be greeted by his daughter. 'Where is Virat?' he asked as the butler bought him a glass of water and a newspaper and he took it. 'He said something about going out for a few days', Swamini answered in a quiet voice, her tone voicing her disapproval. 'Ask him to come back', he stated without averting his gaze from the newspaper and she nodded, walking away to the phone to call him. A small smile playing on her lips. It was time to end the nonsense that he had created.



Edited by Elena123 - 22 August 2012 at 3:28pm

The following 75 member(s) liked the above post:

laila889lemasriipsha05afgprincessnya_svirmanrokzswetharaovirman_neelMiishiineghaluvmanatMTBT_12071316SAnA.S.IPKKND_PyaarmissmysticMadhuChowdarynisha33love_zainvamps1996SwatiVirManlafizakajenvirmanNinaAriefNivFemiristvanilla.iceisha.raj_98chandana123preeethimahak221meant4uonliejayprabuscreen22unnatiaTuba_KSGAisha202DEE2803Captain_Pariaysha1989virman-fananyacrazyluvzindagiShabana0786say_cheesenrithyaoAashika_virmanshilpa09mika17chasinghopegirl_rocksmisakiAdorableTroublehooriaaneha fan1wanderlust09mystery75TIA.Tiapreethisashred12MeetPremeerBadtameezDil.Syed695preetipcKanwal_chohanlittlesmilekulsum_virman0-SD-0ohsehun.Shona1907kusharberry.Anastasia...Zainab..love_never_diesCintilaLet-It-GoNikki_Titli

lafiza Senior Member
lafiza
lafiza

Joined: 01 March 2012
Posts: 670

Posted: 22 August 2012 at 3:43pm | IP Logged
amazing. thnx fr ua pm n pm me wen u update

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

ElenaElenor

shaimah Goldie
shaimah
shaimah

Joined: 17 July 2010
Posts: 1727

Posted: 22 August 2012 at 3:44pm | IP Logged
Lovely update
Continue soon and thanks for the pm!!

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

ElenaElenor

Go to top

Related Topics

  Topics Author Replies Views Last Post
Kuch love jaisa- VirManFF part22:pg81 updt19/6/13

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 78 79

Author: -Serene.Rose-   Replies: 626   Views: 197940

-Serene.Rose- 626 197940 27 January 2014 at 8:13am by pink1
Megz's VirMan Fantasy: Soumini gets VirMan married

2 3 4 5 6 7 8

Author: IndigoBlues   Replies: 63   Views: 38391

IndigoBlues 63 38391 01 October 2013 at 12:36am by hemameenu
VIRMAN FF:YOU ARE MY LIFE[LAST PART PG 16]

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 19 20

Author: lakshm   Replies: 156   Views: 74613

lakshm 156 74613 12 March 2013 at 4:44pm by Siaa96
Kuch meethe pal (VirMan OS-Collection, pg17/18)

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 24 25

Author: Hesperus   Replies: 196   Views: 55947

Hesperus 196 55947 14 February 2013 at 1:32pm by sakshi_aditi
SS: Forever Yours (VirMan) Note Pg.11 SSCOMPLETED

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 13 14

Author: butterfly_16   Replies: 109   Views: 49522

butterfly_16 109 49522 12 January 2013 at 12:56am by Jannat94

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category / Channels
Forums

Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain Topic Index

  • Please login to check your Last 10 Topics posted

Check these Celebrity also

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.

Popular Channels :
Star Plus | Zee TV | Sony TV | Colors TV | SAB TV | Life OK

Quick Links :
Top 100 TV Celebrities | Top 100 Bollywood Celebs | About Us | Contact Us | Advertise | Forum Index