VIRMAN FF: TTOML #31- 2nd thread link: Pg 1 - Page 8 | Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain

anime_gal

@anime_gal

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Posted: 11 years ago

awesum...thats at i lykd abt dis virman ...itz a colledge story...nd i lve colledge romances...awesum update yaar..pm me de nxt update tooo...nd yea tanz for de pm..

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Eleanor

@ElenaElenor

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Dina98210
Well done...!! This part was amazing...!! But i didnt understand why virat was tokin to manvi after the fight..? I thought he didnt like her... But apart from that i loved the intense moment between the two..!! It was a pleasure to read, hope ur presentation went well and please do pm when u update the next part as i have added u on my buddy list...!! Update soon...!! X

Thanks for liking it! 😃And as for the question... Virat doesn't know what he does or not. He had come for a night out but saw Maanvi there, which he wasn't expecting. So he wanted to talk to her. Keeping in mind Maanvi's feelings towards him is negative whereas I haven't fully elobrated on Virat's feelings yet. He doesn't like her romantically in this chapter but finds her alluring and different thus finds a way to be near her. Attracted to her so he pulls stunts like this 😊Hope that answered your confusion as future updates will soon cover it. 😉

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Alice in wonderland ;)

@wanderlust09

IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

need 2 give u sumthin b4 i comment...🤗🤗🤗

it wz just AMAAAZZZIN...superb...super awsum...fantabulouss...mindblowin!!!!

m luvin dis ntirely diff plot...n character sketch of mannu n virat...

hun...ur fantasies r alwayz a treat 2 read...whthr it b foodie os(ur materpiece) or nythin...👏⭐️

plz do try 2 update sooon...n pm me weneva u update...or pendwn ur virman fantasies😊

ps:tried sendin u a buddy req...but cudnt...😭

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Juhi Mokal

@-Juhi.

IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 11 years ago

Wow !! That was mind-blowing 👏 Loved it 😳

Can't wait for more such amazing updates !

Cont. soon n thanks for the pm 😊

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kajenvirman

@kajenvirman

Senior Member

Posted: 11 years ago

i love love love this!
this attitude of virat is greaaat!
thanks for the PM!!
please continue soon :)

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727444

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Posted: 11 years ago

its awsm superb

do continue nd pm me if possible

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lalmirch

@lalmirch

Goldie

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Posted: 11 years ago

superb i love this pleaseee update fast next part cant wait

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f.zarrin

@f.zarrin

Senior Member

Posted: 11 years ago

I am loving this SS! It's so different and refreshing! I hope you continue soon! 😊

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misaki

@misaki

IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

wow!!!!...virman in college!!...virat the cool nd hot dude!!!...maanvi...nly girl whose not affected by his popularity!!😉...can it get ant better???!😍..no way!!!!!...👏

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Aisha

@Aisha202

Goldie

Posted: 11 years ago

Hey Elena!

This is the first time I'm reading something of yours which is not one of your VirMan food OS's!!
I really love this story and Virat's character is so different and bad-ass! Absolutely love him here! 😳 I have a feeling this is going to be an angsty, intense and passionate love story between Virat and Manvi. I love the way you write their scenes, especially when they are at a close proximity to each other, I can feel the tension between them! 😉 I like how you've set this story at a more serious tone.

Awesome story so far, you've got me hooked! Please continue soon, I would love to read more!

*Hugz*
Aisha

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