Link to thread 2 Dirty Revenge page 1 - Page 62

Originally posted by: $ara_$hachi

WHAT???? *rubbing eyes* *the very same eyes, are about to pop out*

Is ladki ke updates se zyada, demands darte hai. Aur yeh endless conditions. Hum ne isko kuch zyada hi freedom de rakhi hai. Update was awesome but will comment about it after a while, right now in hurry.

Waise, Anu ke pets ke sahare dhamki mat de. Even me and Nishu are no less dangerous.

🤣 acha madame will see but remember I've got a sick mind😆
you will see in my next update. I am totally ready for your dhamkis and Nishu's blank posts 😆
Hey I update a lot to maybe I have more demands but hai toh tumari pyari mel na😳
acha me waiting for you comment

Originally posted by: muraadlovesdd

i  love this maan

ho gaya kuch different

You love this Maan🤣
You are the only one😆

Originally posted by: mel420

OMG of course I will count it I love Maneet then again who doesn't

Hmmm me though of writing one song on Maan's POV too…

part 6
OMG twas another Geet...
hate Maan for this...
is Geet planning to leave?
good for her and Babies...
let Maan repent...
cont soon dear...

@Mel- Actually only my very close friends know about it….

Gr8 update
Maan knows dat geet is inocent!!!!!!!!
He deserves dat geet left him 4 wt he did!!!!!!!
Waiting 4 next

fabulous

Double  GEET...
excellent twist dear😆...
waiting to know the next...

Originally posted by: ruchs

Hmmm me though of writing one song on Maan's POV too'

Abb after all he is my dear dad'😆

From Maan's POV

You were like a shining star'

Spreading your warmth from far'.

Your smile's worth a million'

Good heart worth a trillion'

I killed your beautiful soul'

Made you a lifeless doll'.

Filled your life with sorrow'

Dreading the word 'Tomorrow''

Just give me one chance'

To your tunes I will dance'

Let me make it better'

An ideal husband & father..

Pleading your forgiveness..

Please oh my tigress'

Take away my everything'

For you I am living'

Oh please come back to me'.

From my guilt, make me free'.

Please oh please come back to me'

Please oh please come back to me!!!

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Phew' Hope it didn't sound rubbish'. Me really worked hard on this one...😳

I love you I Love you I love you It's just perfect you just gave me a brilliant idea thx love a zillion for that oh I know what do write next I mean not the next update but Oh you will see it's just amazaing love you for that ruchs