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Virman OS.. yes MAYBE..(part 2 on pg4) (Page 3)

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   Woww the response was much better dan I expectd it to b... Here is the second part hope you all like this one too...             
Part2                                                                                                                                                    
So finally it was the day wen the ladkawaalas came to see Manvi, the name of the guy was Aditya, he was a fun-loving, cheerful, middle-class guy, even his family was more friendly nd frank dan one wul expect a middle-class family to b...
Manvi enjoyd Aditya's company a lot, he was able to make Manvi smile nd giggle at every nano-second... Manvi told everyone dat she likd Aditya bt she need to think abt it coz it is abt her whole life, she can't make the decision in just one meeting...everyone were happy at Manvi's wise decision...
Aftr a tiring day Manvi sat der with a sigh thinking dat life moves so fast, just yestrday it was her sistr's marriage nd now its her turn... Shee thinks of calling Virat, her No.1 stress buster...
Virat: Hello..!!!
Manvi: Hello...
Virat: Toh...???
Manvi: Toh kya.. tumhe kuch poochna nahi hai...???
Virat: Not interestd...
Manvi: Lekin mein toh phir bhi bataungi... pata hai uska naam aditya hai... kya ladka hai, mujhko toh lagta tha aise ladke manufacture hona band ho gaye hai,par woh toh...
Virat: Tumne mujhe kya Aditya-chaalisa sunane ke liye call kiya hai kya...??
Manvi: Tum itnna ajeeb kyu behave kar rahe ho, kya problem hai..??
(Only if dat poor little soul wul know dat...)
Virat: Nahi woh kuch nahi.. I was just worried, tumhari life ka faisla hai, r u sure aditya tumhare liye theek hoga, sirf kisi ko hasaane se uski qualities nahi samajh mein aati..
Manvi: Yeh mein tumse zyada achche se jaanti hu... Lekin us aditya k bachche mein kuch toh hai, he's jst so attractive...
Virat: Ok, toh I dont care, apni poori life tum us sare hue kabab ke saath guzaar lena, theek hai??? Byee..*Cuts the phone*
Manvi: Is chep ke bahut par nikal aaye hai,,,, Ab toh mein bhi use call nahi karungi, pata nahi kya problem hai uski...
Nite time... Manvi is laying on Jeevika's lap nd talking ab aditya to her..{Sorry am cutting the jeevika-manvi conversation short, u guys r more interestd in the virman part hai na??}
Jeevika: Mujhe bahutt khushi hai Mannu ki tujhe Aditya pasand aaya, toh kya shaadi ke liye tu use ha keh degi..???
Manvi: Abhi kaha di... Abhi toh mein usse 2-3 baar miloongi phir kuch sochenge...
Jeevika: Achcha hai... Pata hai in kuch din se, Viren ji mere peeche pare hue the.. unhe lagta tha ki tum aur virat ek doosre se pyar karte ho.. aur agar nahi karte ho toh bahut jald karne lag jaoge... Virenji bhi ek no. ke paagal hai... virat aur tu..
Jeevika continued talking bt Manvi's ears stoppd hearing to jeevika the momnt she said "bahut jald pyar karne lag jaoge"...
"Is this true... the thing which remaind unsaid in Manvi's heart was finally interpreted by her jiju... She knew Virat was made for Maya, nd her rlationship with virat was jst good freinds nd nothing else.. She had such thoughts sum days ago bt she dismissd all of dem... She can't fall for Virat...He's a chep.." Nd many more going in Manvi's heart...
On the other hand Virat was cursing himself for being sooo rude to Manvi, bt not his fault... He actually didn't now whose fault it was... Viren entered..
Viren: Kya hua yr bhai... Maya kuch dino ke liye london kya gayi tu toh full devdas mood mein aa gaya..
Virat(With a fake smile): Ha toh aapki paaro kunsa aapke saath hai...
Viren: Hai nahi par bahut jald hogi, Kal hume rishikesh jaana hai..
Virat: Rishikesh kyu???
Viren: Are wo tujhe toh pata hi hoga ki mavi ko ladke waale dekhne aaye the toh usi silsile mein beji ko meri kuch help chahiye thi.. U know chachu is the only mard der...mujhe jaana hoga aur tu bhi chalega..
Virat: Par mein kyu??
Viren:Tu chalega toh do kaam ho jayenge, ek toh tu manvi ko itne achchi tareeke se jaanta hai toh decision lene mein uski help ar payega aur doosra Mein rishikesh s seedha delhi jaunga kuch kaam hai to tu jeevika ko waapas le aanaa, my beevi can't just cum alone...
Virat(helplessly): Theek hai...
 
Dat nite provd to be the most terrible night for both Virat nd Manvi... Those 8 hrs were like 8 yrs to them... two ppl who were able to understand everyone's feeling were now unknown to their own feelings... Dat confusion, the desperetness, the weird feelings,the restlessness... all that was happening to dem for the first time... They knew they can't fall in luv with each other, both of dem had their own commitments bt den why were dese feelings, hw nd where did dey cum frm...
Next morning virat nd viren reached Chandigarh, both of dem greetd everyone, Manvi greeted her jiju nd sat near badi beeji, Virat came their to take aashirwaad frm badi beeji...Both of dem had an eye contact, not those normal ones, not the natkhat ones, this eye contact was diff, it had awkwardness in it... Everyone went to their own bussinesses, chachu came their nd took badi beeji to the mandir...
Manvi smild to herself, it was hard for her to believe dat virat nd she met like 5 mins b4 nd still dey didn't even say a word to each other... Virat sensd her feeling, he smild upon the situation too...
Ruining the awkward silence he said, "Aditya ki company aisi hai kya jisne ek din mein hi ek bina break ki rajdhani express ko station par khada kar diya...???"
Manvi(with a smile): Jaisi bhi hai tumse better hai samjhe,,
Virat: ha ha ab hamari company aapko kyu achchi lagegi..
Manvi: *ya right*  chalo tum log thak gae hoge, mein chai lati hu...
Virat: I wul prefer bina zeher ki chai...
Manvi just smild nd went without answering, Virat was shockd...
Everyone in the Chaudhary family was sooper happy except for the two, Manvi sat near badi beeji who was watching tv, she was watching some show dat said dey'll test if a prson is in luv or not..
The host askd a couple of questions to the couples on tv nd with very question Manvi's answer wul b virat or somehing relatd to Virat... She was spilling out th answers to hrself in a low pitched voice..
She was surprisd on how all her answers were relatd to virat... Her yes filld with tears, realising dat she was now expecting the impossible to happn, she couldn't control.. she ran outside, to the backyard...
Manvi to herself only: Ye tujhe kya h raha hai manvi, ye achaanak se kya schne lag gayi tu... I AM NOT IN LOVE WITH VIRAT, NO, NO, NO...
She burst in to tears nd sat on the floor helplessly crying out loud...
"Aisa kaise ho sakta hai, Virat se tujhe kaise pyaar ho gaya.. itne bade chep se tu kaise pyar kar sakti hai... Aur agar pyar karna hi tha toh pehle nahi kar sakti thi.. ab kar rahi hai, jab virat already maya ka ho chuka hai... Nahi (wiping away her tears) Mein apni feelings ko contrl karungi..bahut jhela hai life mein, is ko bhi jhel loongi,,, par kaise(nd she agn burstd into tears)...
She culfind no way to tke herself out of it.. everything was messd up bt den...
Manvi: Ab sirf ek raasta hai, aur mein wohi raasta chunoongi...
Inside badi beeji told jeevika dat manvi ran outside dat too crying.. Jeevika rushd to the backyard nd saw da manvi was sitting luking at the stars nd crying..
Jeevika(huggd hr tight): Kya hua mannu..??? itna kyu ro rahi hai...
Manvi: Woh di mein emotinal ho gayi thi...
Jeevika: Emotional..???
Manvi: Ha.. ab meri shaadi ho jayegi mujhe ye sab chodna padega.. u know wohi thoughts jo aapko shaadi ke pehle aaye the..
Jeevika; Ha lekin abhi teri shaadi thodi na ho rahi hai..
Manvi: lekin bahut jald ho jayegi... (tucking her hair behind her ears) Mein Aditya se shaadi karne ke liye ready hu...
Jeevika(on cloud nine): kya...??? mannu mein bahuuut khush hu, par tune toh kaha tha...
Manvi: meine jo kaha tha woh choda, ab aap ye news sabko jaake nahi dogii kya...
Jeevika: Ha... (rushd inside to tell everyone)
Manvi taks a sigh of relief... She lied to her sistr for the second time aftr the cancr thing... nd was successful
Jeevika: breaking news..!!! sab log living room mein aa jao...
Everyone comes in with  qustion mark on their faces..
Jeevika:Dil thaam ke baith kao, jo news sunne ke liye aap sab ke liye aap sab ke kaan taras rahe the woh mein le aayi..aur woh ye hai ki... MANNU NE SHAADI KE LIYE HA KAR DI...
Everyone did a wooo... only dey knew how hard dey workd to hear only a yes frm manvi... everyone as celebrating with hugs nd hand shakes... except for one person whose fac turnd frm dull to sooper-dooper dull.. 'Virat'... He felt like the whole world turnd black nd white for him... He was lost in his own thoughts until chachu came to himm for a hug, he was angry on himself... angry , dor feeling soo weird frm the last few days... he wnt out of dat khushi waala nvironment, he just din't want to b der... cam to the backyard, sat der with a grin... Until he noticd dat on his backside was Manvi, luking at the stars with tears in her yes, lost in her own world...
 
This is it, I can't torture my fingers more... I hv a pending assignment to do tooo..I'll write the next part soon... Nd plz add me as ur buddy if u want to b PMed... Smile 
 
 
 
 

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