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So I hv never written an OS bt dis is something which was in my mind since many days, so I thought to type it down here... (Comparing dis one to other ones will b dumb coz the other ones r way better dan) Plz avoid spelling errors
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Beeji: Jeevika, tumhe yakeen toh hai na ki tum manvi ko iske liye mana paogi...
Jeevika: Beeji, mannu ne aaj tak toh mujhe kabhi bhi mana nahi kiya, par aaj ka mein kuch nahi bol sakti.
Chachi: Jeevika beta tum hi bas ek umeed ho hamari, mannu ko kisi baat ke liye manana hamare bas ki baat nahi.
Jeevika: Mein jaanti hu chachi, mein apni poori koshish karungi...
Chacha: Best of luck
Jeevika goes to Manvi's room where manvi is sitting in the corner of the bed texting someone on the phone.
Jeevika:Mannu...
Manvi: Jeevika di, baitho na aap, kitna kaam karti ho..???Aaj-kal toh aapke paas apni behen ke liye bhi timme nahi hai.
Jeevika: Aisssaa kuch nahi hai... achcha bata kis ko msg kar rahi hai...??
Manvi: Koi khaas nahi hai, woh aapka laadla devar hai na use, aaj kal toh mere bina use chain hi nahi aata..
Jeevika remembers what Virenji had been forseeing since so long... with a fear on her face:
Jeevika: Tum log kya din bhar phone se ek doosre ko text karte rehte ho..??
Manvi: Ha... aap uska recent msg toh padho...
Manvi shows Jeevika the msg nd laughs.. avoiding the expressions on jeevika's face...
Jeevika: Mannnhuuu..
Manvi:ha di...
Jeevika: Woh beeji keh rahi thi ki...
Manvi: Meri shikaayat kar rahi hogi pakka..
Jeevika: Nahi wo to teri taareef kar rahi thi ki tu bahut samaajhdar ho gayi hai,poora ghar sambhaal liya hai... aur wo y keh rahi hi ki ab tujhe SHAADI kar lena chahiye...
Manvi: KYA?????? Paagal ho gaye ho kya, behen ki khushi nahi dekhi jaa rahi...???
Jeevika: Dekh mannu beeji ne kisi ko zabaan di rakhi hai, tu bas ladke ko dekh le,bas ek baar, ladka ekdum tere types hai,ha ya na karna is up to u...
Manvi: par di..
Jeevika: Mannu tujhe meri kasam.. plz beeji bahut tensd hai...
Manvi: Nahi
Aftr a lot of convincing Manvi finally agreed...
Now she's alone in the room sitting sadly nd cnfusd... Virat's name appears on her phone.. She picks up the phone...
Manvi: Halllooo
Virat: Kyaa hua, aaj ye bandariya nautanki k mood mein nahi hai kya?
Manvi:Virat... waise hi mera mood bahut kharab hai.. aur mat kharaab karo..
Virat: Achcha theek hai batao, kya hua?
Manvi: Woh mujhe kal ladke waale dekhne aa rahe hai...😕...
Virat felt dat his heart thumpped against his chest, was he hearing it right, Manvi...??? She's still a kid uski shaadi nahi ho sakti...
Virat:Kya??
Manvi: *confusd hearing a depressd kya frm virat* Kya hua tumne devdas ke type kya kyun bola..???
Virat: *Came out of his world of thoughts* Nahi mein bas us ladke ke baare mein soch raha tha jisse tumhari shaadi hogi... kya haalat hogi bechare ki...
Manvi: Funny??? Achcha mein rakh rahi hu,, bye,...Virat Bye...
Virat: Huh??? ha ha bye, gud nite!
Virat didn't kno which nd wat feeling it was bt it was weird, something never felt before...
Plz tell me if u like it... I hv many more to write bt m really confusd whether to continue or nnt... Nd plz add me as ur buddy if u want to b PMed
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