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So Close, Yet So Far!! - Chapter 4 - Pg 61 - 27/05 (Page 38)

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its nice liked it alot and tthnks for pm Big smile...
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Originally posted by lovely7010

arrgghh i hate my net connection Angry


Same here mannu.



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arrgghh i hate my net connection Angry


Same here mannu.




asma sorry i dont think i'll be able to spam nw my net connections is very slow...will join u tom
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Originally posted by Angelic_Aditi

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Hi everyone, I'm back with Chapter 3. Please let me know what you think. Thanks again for reading and for your wonderful comments. Happy reading!

 Wow wonderful intro to start.Happy Reading

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Chapter 3:

Kruti: Worry not, when we are here!

Love this dialog.

Someone: and we too.

Shakti was hell lot of surprised on hearing this voice. She could not believe it was really him. She turned slowly to face him and was even more surprised. He was not alone. All of them were together. Shakti stood like that in pin-drop silence for some time and then slowly came back to her senses. She ran up to him and engulfed him in a tight hug.


Who is ity that Shaks was so suprised to seee??????


Shakti: O.M.G. Archie, is that really you?

Wow nvr knew Archie and Shaks shared a bond.

Archie did not reply anything as he was too busy taking in her feeling again. It has been long since he last saw her. Or even heard her voice for that matter.

Wow this had a wonderful impact.

Sam: Uh! Not again.

Bharat: Woh akela nahi hai. Hum bhi hai.

So cute dialog

Shakti pulled away and looked at them apologetically, pouting slightly. Archie just laughed at her expression. His arms were still wound around her waist. Shakti finally let go of his hold and met everyone individually.

Dats really sweet of Shaks.

Shakti: It's been so long guys. It seems like forever since we last met.

Sneha: Exactly Shaks. It's been six years.

6^ yrs .were was she for 6 full yrs?????

Shakti: Long six years!

Shantanu: Well I didn't want to spoil your moment (eyeing the two who were still in between a hug), but to be precise it has been 6 years, 7 months, 3 weeks, 5 days, 13 hours, 47 minutes and some seconds.

Dats so sweet of Tannu.

Shakti let go off Sneha and ran into Shan's arms.

Shakti: You remember?

Archie (from behind): Of course, everyone does. We missed you so much Shaks. It's been hell without you.

So true even we miss u Shaks.

Priyanka: Exactly! Everything has been so boring. It's not the same without you. You know, I'm just so happy that we are not D3ing anymore, because to be true, it was no fun without you.

Tho yaha D3 to end kar diyaROFLLOL

Shakti: Aw mere pyaare pyaare bache. Common guys, cheer up. We are here for a fun event and not some rona-dhona event. Common let's enjoy.

Ab bache kaun hai.Pari koi entry tho nahi haiROFLROFLROFL

Everyone hooted at this discussion and started mingling around. Shakti was standing with Priyanka, Vrinda and Kruti - her besties. She looked around to have a sight of everyone. Alisha was there with the DID people clearly missing old days and catching up with them. Jack was trying to flirt with Sam. Shakti giggled at seeing that. It was so like Jack. Ladki dikhi nahi and he's already trying ROFL ROFLROFLROFL Further she saw, Shantanu and Sneha lost in their own world. And it took her no time to realise that finally the two fools understood their feelings.Dats nice u made them a couple.Lovely one.She decided to congratulate them later. Her gaze further moved on and settled on him - the last person she wanted to see. And it was then she noticed he was standing with 'her'. Her heart flinched and she felt bad. Involuntarily, she went to the past. It was for 'her' and him that everything was the way it is today.Is it Amar and____-______ She closed her eyes to stop the much dreaded memories from coming back to her mind. She was in her own world, when Mukti's voice broke her concentration.

"What?" she asked irritated. "They're coming!", Mukti informed her. It was all that took Shakti to enter the hyper mode. She excused herself from everyone and ran up the stairs to a room with Mukti right behind her.


Ab kaun hai???Tu tho cliff hanger aur twists ki rani ban rahi hai????


 

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So here it is. Please leave your comments and likes. I'm unsure of this part so please let me know what you thought. Enjoy your weekend! : )

Next update on page - 55 
Remember - I didn't give any demand last time. Well this is to cover up! :P

76 ( 3 more added by this Id ) PM's sent. Hope to see 65 likes. Smile

Scroll down for my *ahem* *ahem* much dreaded note! Embarrassed


Read it .Someone is back to deviul modeEmbarrassed

Adios

 

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Posted: 14 May 2012 at 12:28pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by lovely7010

Originally posted by asmaju

Originally posted by lovely7010

arrgghh i hate my net connection Angry


Same here mannu.




asma sorry i dont think i'll be able to spam nw my net connections is very slow...will join u tom


k mannu.



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Posted: 14 May 2012 at 12:30pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by 21Neha21

u updated...i m so happy...Dancing Dancing 
n thanks a lot my sweet devil for mentioning me...loads of love n hugs to u...Hug Hug 
n d update...it was mind blowing...
d bond dat u showed bw shaks n archie was so adorable...Embarrassed
n den came d shock..6 years...!!!Shocked
i eyes literally popped out of my head...i m getting really restless now to know what has happened in dese 6 long years...plz sweets reveal dese mysteries now...
n den came another mystery..'they r coming'..y shaks was so effected bcz of dere arrival...Confused
i really cant wait to read more...plz sweets try to update soon...Smile
m waiting eagerly...


wow neha di u said it all but apni sweet pari hai nah woh jald kucjh nahi batayegi. twist maharahi jo hai.


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Posted: 14 May 2012 at 12:32pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by lovely7010

Finally u updated!!...Its awesome
loved it sooo much
n r u serious woh log pure 6 years baad mil rahe hai itna time gapShocked
awww loved archie-shaks bonding...
amar hai kiske saath dat shakti is feeling bad...
n i guess "they're" her parents just a guess
eagerly waiting for the next part n itna bada page demand u r sachi mai badi devil...


Mannu woh update kare woh hi badi baat hai and S archie-shaks bond first time ever read. Nice try pari.
Yeh demand thoda kam hai U remember we had 20+ demands also.


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