So Close, Yet So Far!! - Chapter 4 - Pg 61 - 27/05 - Page 40

Originally posted by: asmaju

pari i love u.

Originally posted by: asmaju

S true but i guess pari wil kill me if we discuss D3 here as she has stoped watchin.

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Hello peeps. I'm so glad you're enjoying the story so far. I will try my best to keep it interesting for you. After reading all the lovely comments I decided to continue this FF at least and post the next update early. So here's chapter 4! Please let me know what you think. Happy reading.

 

P.s - Have replied to all your wonderful comments. Check them out on pages 59,60 and 61 .

Warning: Do check them out. It took me real long to reply to each one of you who commented.

 

P.P.s - This part is for a few people - Ridz di, Asma di, Neha di, Snigdha di, Aisha di, Shweta di, Sissy and Aditi. It's for you guys that I'm at least continuing this FF. This one had always been close to my heart. My favourite. Thanks for forcing some brains into my mind and making me realize that such people are not worth it. Thank you for forcing me to continue this one at least. Thanks a lot for your inspiring words and making me realize what my happiness really lies in. Thanks a lot. I hope that I am able to continue the rest of them one day as well. :)

 

P.s - Sissy now I wanna see your FF's continued as well. SOON!!

 

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Edited by Angelic_Aditi - 11 years ago

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Chapter 4:

"They're coming," said an excited Mukti.

"What? And you're still standing here? Run idiot!" ordered an excited and hyper Shakti.

Saying that Shakti ran up the stairs fluidly, taking two steps a time and ran to the closest room. Mukti was right at her heels and she closed the door behind as she entered the room. There friends were not surprised seeing this. They all chuckled lightly and turned their attention towards the door which now held everyone's attention. A grand entry was about to be made anytime by 'them'.

Just then, 'they' came in, holding hands. They both looked perfect together suiting each other in every correct way, complementing each other. They were lucky. As soon as they entered they spotted Mr and Mrs Mohan beside the door and went directly to them. Both of them bent down and touched the feet of the two. Many people in the crowd were shocked to see this exchange but they were not aware of the fact that however modern celebrities turn, they will never forget their rituals.

"Congratulations beta. We're so happy for you!" said Mr Mohan, pride and love clear in his eyes.

"Thanks Dad," replied Neil and the two men shook their hands while Neeti just went in the arms of her mother.

Yes, the two people were - Neeti and Neil. The newest successful couple of this world of fame. The two had been dating each other for three years and finally tied knots on the same date one year ago. They had lived a happy life since then - happy with each other.

Shakti was not able to make it to their wedding and had smoothly lied for not able to make it for the anniversary either. Neeti was hurt that she couldn't share this day of joy with one of her closest sister but kept that sadness away from her face. She was looking enchanting and beautiful like a Goddess in a white sari. She wore a simple front blouse with flipped back along with silver ornamental flower pin, looking fabulous. Her sari was embroidered along the border with silver zari, sequin and thread work which beautifully created a jaal all over the border. Neil was looking his best in a black suit which held a light blue shirt and black tie.

They went over to the stage area with a glass of champagne in their hands. Mr Mohan took the mike to make an announcement.

"I take this opportunity to thank you all for coming and giving your blessing to my daughter and son. I would like to raise a toast to their relationship. I pray everyone gets a life partner like them. Thanks for being a part of our happy time. Cheers." Saying that he raised his glass to a level and so did the others. By this time Mukti had also joined them all. Soon they started mingling with the guests and mind you Shakti was nowhere to be seen. Neither did anyone speak about her. She spent a major time of the evening with the members of Asma and a sometime with the DID and D3 gang as she was also very close to them by now. No one again mentioned Shakti's presence in front of her.

She was talking with her friends when all the lights suddenly went off and a knowingly smile appeared on the faces of Mohans.

 

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So there you have it.  Let me know what you think.  : ) 

P.s - Another long one!

Well scroll down for the note! :D

 

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Edited by Angelic_Aditi - 11 years ago

Hello Everyone.

Sorry for the discontinuation drama but a series of actions took place that forced me to take that step. But I'm continuing this FF at least. I hope that with time, I'm able to continue the rest of them as well. For now everything is on hold. I'll continue the others once I'm over with this one.

Like I told you before, this FanFic DOES NOT have a happy end. And the sad chain of events will start happening from the next update. I know some of you might not want to read it and I completely understand. So, you can very well skip the next part. Sorry guys, it will be difficult for me to figure out who wants PM's and who not. So just ignore the PM.

I know this was short but a little longer than my usual. And I told you in the beginning only that updates will be short for this one. So, please bear with me guys.

Cliff hanger? Again? I know. Well that's another speciality of this SS. So, please bear with me again! :P

P.s - I DO NOT know anything about Neeti's personal life. That all was just my imagination. :)

I'll update this one soon. Again before the next weekend. I plan to update Luv Never Dies next along with Winds of Desire. Thanks so much for reading and for your time.

Like and comments guys. I did not get full 55 likes next time? Is it so difficult for 83 people to get 55 likes? I can't believe this. Anyways, no like demands for next time as it's always left unanswered. As for pages - next update on Page 80.

P.s - Have already posted the OS. But will post the next one only when I get the LIKES!!!

PM's later! :P

Till then, take care. Adios. :)

Love, Devil

Xx

Edited by Angelic_Aditi - 11 years ago

awsomme adiit inue the others 2 w make sure u cntcongrats for cntinuing and try 2 update other 2 and cntinue it well be waiting congrats once again

nice update...loved to see you back with a bang...especially the last part concerning neeti and shakti sisterhood-that was adorable...and the note made me even happy!!!!

thanks a lot sweets for continuing it... Edited by 21Neha21 - 11 years ago

Its a grand family affair . . . . . I did'nt think of it . . 😛

the eldest daughter of mohan's is celebrating her 1st marriage anniversary . . . . & shaks is there to surprise her . . . 😊
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I don't knw wat made u discontinue ur works,, apart 4m laptop crash...

but,,, i'll surely wait & keep on pleading u to continue the rest of ur works (specially arsha ff 😉 ) . . . . . . 😳

lemme complete my exams,,,,, then I'll annoy u . . . Ok 😈

u call urself devil,,,, I'll show u a big devil 😆

1st of all, sorry Devil, i won't be able to give any long comments until June 15th.. u know, EXAMSS

n 2ndly, awesome update..