That. Was. Beautiful.
Really. You had me hooked from the first word till the last. While Chronicles was all humour, this was...completely different. It made me sad, happy and left a longing in me that this happens someday. It had me cheering but feeling sad for Khushi at the same time.
Actually it made me sad for both Khushi and Arnav! They both love each other, but stay away. Khushi because she thinks Arnav hates her, and Arnav because he thinks that Khushi loves Shyam.
Absolutely LOVED this OS! :)
Oh and btw, edit your disclaimer! It says:
and should be reproduced elsewhere without consent.
You forgot to add the 'not' 😆
Edited by Krani - 12 years ago
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