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SS: PAYING FOR HIS DEEDS very imp note @ page 48 (Page 17)

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Posted: 23 April 2012 at 3:49pm | IP Logged
wow..  nice twist... what is going to happen now? 

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Posted: 23 April 2012 at 4:01pm | IP Logged
ClapClapthanks...great job...loved it...pelase update sooon...ClapClap

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Posted: 23 April 2012 at 4:03pm | IP Logged
Just read the whole thing and wow! what a twist! im in total shock... arnavs not the only one standing dumb right now... wow cant believe she forgot him like that and that too when he confessed his love for her...wow! beautiful SS! :)

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hey sweeties...thanx fo ur lovely comments...Big smile
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Posted: 25 April 2012 at 4:48am | IP Logged
                                              Part-10



Arnav was silenly sitting in his room...recalling all his sweet encounters with his khusi...may be now that time will never return...Disapprove

Khusi was asleep due to some medication...Kartik was worryingly sitting beside khusi carrasing her hair...thinking about her future...Ermm

whereas Anjali ,Aakash and Payal were disscussing about what to be done next...Anjali had called naani ji in hariduar to inform about all the events and to ask for some help...Clever naani had given a suprb idea but anji dear was confused n tensed whether it was fair enough to do dat...so she finally decided to call Arnav n ask him...

Arnav who was not in the mood to be disturbed..unwillingly n irritatingly entered Anjali's room...

Anjali:chote aap aagaye...yaha bethiye...hamare pass...

Arnav went n sat near her...

Anjali :chote hum jante he jo kuch vi huwa usse aap bohot dukhi..lekin aagar aap hamare najar se dekhe toh jo vi huwa...aacha hi huwa...

Arnav looked at anji in disbelief...

Anjali(exactly reading her chote's expressions...) hamari puri baat toh sunlo na...hamari jindagi mein itna sab kuch hogaya ki aab kuch galat hone k liye bacha hi nahi he...ye sab jo huwa...uss shetan ka hamari jindagi se hamesha k liye chaljana...usski ghinoni saachhayi ka samne aana...aur khusi ji ka yaadas chalejana...issara he bhagwan ka hum sab k ek nayi jindagi k liye...

Arnav was listening the whole thing in full confusion...

Arnav :kya...matlab...di...

Aakash :bhai...di kehna chahti hein ki kyun na aap sab kuch suru se suru kare...

Arnav : aakash...tum mujhe aur vi jyaada confuge kar rahe ho...

Anjali : thik hai...thik hai...humari puuriii baat dhyaan se suno..tum aab khusi ji ko phirse..wese hi pataoge jese ki tumne pehle kiya tha...aur iss baar toh hum v sab kuch dekhenge...tumhe toh pata hi hoga na ki khusi ji kin kin chijo se khush hoti hein...unhe kya kya pasand hein...toh tum woh sab karna phir... khusi ji ko tum se pyaar hojayega...n then everything will be back to perfect...

Arnav(wid a ray pf hope) :ya per di...aab toh usse kuch yaad vi nahi he..toh woh... mujhse kese...i mean mujhe toh uske saath jyaada time v nahi milega...

Anjali :ooh ha... aab...iskeliye...humme kuch idea sochna hoga...

Kartik :mere paass v ek idea he...

Payal :aare bhaiya aap kab aaye...

Kartik :aabhi aabhi jab Anjali ji khusi ko patane k tips Arnav ko de rahi thi...
AnjaliEmbarrassed

Payal :bhaiya khusi...

 Kartik:woh soh rahi he...

Aakash :Bhaiya idea bataiye na...

Kartik : ohh ha...bhaiii iadea ye he ki...kyun nah hum Khusi ko ye kehde ki uski aur Arnav ka rista paaka hochuka he...wese vi doctor ne usse ye toh bata hi diya he ki accident k waje se unka selective memory loss hogaya he...aur shaadi toh unki ho hi chuki he...shaadi k baare me batake aur v jyaada stress dene se toh accha he ki hum usse sirf ye bataye ki uska rista pakka hogaya he...

Aakash :what a suberb idea...Bhaiya...
Bhai...What say...

Arnav n Anjali were sitting there wid a satisfied smile...Big smile

Kartik :aur hume hamari khusi ki Shaadi dekhne ka moka vi miljayega...

Anjali :thank you...so so much... kartik ji aap ne toh hamara bojh hi halka kardiya...

KartikSmile
toh thik he jese hi khusi uth jayengi aur humse aapne bhule huwe history k baare mein pochengi toh hum unhe sab se pehle unke riiste k baare mein hi baatange...ok

Everyone else :OKAY...

Kartik :(putting a hand in Arnav's shoulder...)ALL THE BEST...Thumbs Up




so lovely ladies...how was it...do share ur views through comments...and please put in mind dat this SS will get hotter chapter by chapter...and later will contain mature contents so follow it accordingly...Wink




Edited by Rocxy - 25 April 2012 at 5:17am

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Posted: 25 April 2012 at 5:24am | IP Logged
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yaaaeeeh m first..finally!!!!

loved the new twist..we will get to see more arhi romance...yippeee...it was awsuuum...man it is goung to be fun to see arnie boy wooing our khushi madam...love this concept dear n thnx 4da pm...cant wait for the next part...



Edited by kitzdoll - 25 April 2012 at 5:28am
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Posted: 25 April 2012 at 5:40am | IP Logged
its awesome...please do continue...
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Posted: 25 April 2012 at 5:45am | IP Logged
Superb update.ClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStar
I really enjoyed reading it.
Wow, what a fantastically brilliant idea.
Wewill get to see Arhi weddin too. Yey.
I wonder hoe Khushi will react to this new info?
Can't wait to read more.
Continue soon.
Thanks.Big smile

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