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hate that snake so much

overall its fantastic

thanks

awesum upadte dear:)
loved it:)

thnks 4 pm:)

Awesome update. yay! ASR is back in back in action. Now none of the his evil plans help to save him. And no never in his dreams he can get khushi as long as arnav is there. But one thing arnav have to tell every thing to khushi and ask her forgiveness before shyam tells her about it. Coz it will shatter khushi more. Please do cont soon. Thanks for pm.

WONDERFUL...👍🏼

Shyam is really psychotic. ..Thanks for the PM.

Yayyy Arnav !! 

Should have hit Shyam a bit more though 😉 But this will also do

It was nice ...Atleast the hero and villain are not dumb in your fanfic like they are in actual serial

Don't have Nyhing to say to the stupid moron running I everyone's life

Awesome! Really like the route the story's taking. Wish the real track goes this way