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ArHi FF - Every heart desires: Ch 23 link, Page 1 (Page 16)

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Posted: 15 April 2012 at 4:52pm | IP Logged
Awesome update, update soon

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Posted: 15 April 2012 at 5:44pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by -s.a.n.a-

I am really happy that you decided to update... really very very happy :) Almost every other day i look forward to your update... but i don't mind waiting.. it sort of increases my enthusiasm to read your ff more :)

Coming to the chapter.. as usual its another mind-blowing chapter.. :) I am really starting to love your long updates :) Although I love each and every word of your chapters.. but i loved some lines a lot.. 
The line about the hearts meeting when Arnav was entering into Shantivan and Khushi leaving.. was terrific.. Cant really quote it here... This is your effort against the recent plagiarism i suppose and I am totally with you about it... I hope you understood which line I am indicating... Those words could totally explain Arnav and Khushi's relationship on a whole...

I have to admit.. though the ff is about Arhi.. but I am starting to love Karan and i wish to see more.. and I wish *with fingers crossed* that soon sparks start flying between Anjali and Karan... <3 *fingers crossed* :D But i loved their convo immensely... Feels really sad for Anjali but I knew she would recover soon

Also Arnav and Khushi's monologue with Ma.. mind blowing.. The end almost teared me up.. I do feel that Khushi's actions are justified but I feel really bad for our Arnav... Though I know he would somehow make it up to her.. hopefully that is... 

This chapter surely goes into my fav chapter list of your ff... (which includes almost all the chapters.. ha ha :D) Just realised this comment has become really long.. my random blabbering.. silly me.. anyways.. ill end it soon.. Lovely chapter as always.. and will be looking forward to the next chapter as always :D

You changed your user ID! For a moment, I got scared but then I realized you are SweetyMJHT XD

Oh my my, I'm so sorry I haven't updated in so long and you are waiting all this time! It's just that I had exams going on. But I can see you are understanding, so thank you for that :)

I am actually really really happy that you picked up on that very small scene when their heartbeats meet and hurt as they separate. I wanted to show, without words, that they are made for each other & nothing can change that.

& yeh, sorry for not being able to copy - it's the whole plagiarism issue, like you said!

Wrt Karan & Anjali, I wanted to show contrasting their relationship (friendship) is to ArHi's because of presence of communication, which evidently lacks b/w Arnav & Khushi. Glad you like Karan's character. He's one of my fav too :)

Thank you for realizing Arnav's dilemma too. He is a broken man and well, he's trying. When I wrote both of their convos with Ma, I cried too... it definitely was emotional!

Awww, you are tooo sweet with your compliments! Really honestly!

Please do NOT call yourself silly for your long comments. I ABSOLUTELY LOVE reading them! No liess. They make me happy :)

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Posted: 15 April 2012 at 5:49pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by medha16

i loved this update!so much happening here...khushis words brought tears in my eyes!i loved karans contradicting side...on one hand he cant help but scorn arnav n amnjali coz of his sisters shattered life...n then he cant help but guide anjali n be a good companion...his intrinsic goodness was very well established...n arnav really needed to hear all that from khushi...he HAS to understand that khushi n anjali r NOT an either/or choice...they have to coexist n this makes relations n life dynamic...i simply loved this update!!!

Thank youuu so much for liking the chapter!!
Yes, the long update surely has lots going on between everyone!

With regards to Karan's contradicting actions, I've made a note: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2924188&PID=55872537&#55872537

Nonetheless, glad you liked his role :)
I can tell you would agree with my note :)

Yes, Arnav really needs some things laid out for him and that's exactly what Khushi is doing!

So glad you liked the update!

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Posted: 15 April 2012 at 5:50pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Drishti-

My heart aches for both of them .. truly does! Contrary to what most people think about Arnav telling her to stay back for Di, i thought he said purposely, in the beginning. As in, earlier in the chapter, he felt his mom tell him to shower her with love.. but he knew that he had wronged her, he knew she wouldn't stay back for him, so he asks her to stay back for his Di...to make sure she actually does stay back? Does that make sense or am i reading too much into everything? :P Beautiful chapter Rachitaaa! more later :P

P.S. I've told you too many times already, but i'm saying it again.. your mom is TOO cool!! And yess thank youuu Anuuu! And thank you for the dedication :D

Drishti, this is WHY you are my best buddy <3
You understand me without me having to explain myself. Honestly, sometimes I fear you can read my mind :P

You make more sense than anything else in my life at the moment :P

LMAO! Yes, power to mothers & Anu :D
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Posted: 15 April 2012 at 5:51pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by smile1412

Wow... I was wondering how u wd take it ahead... But I'm loving it!!!!!!! At least they confronted each other ... That itself is a step towards progress n reconciliation !!! Keep it upClap

Yayyy, so glad you liked the update!!
Mhmm, confrontation was much needed so I included it :D
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Posted: 15 April 2012 at 5:54pm | IP Logged
Your Wall of Inspiration sounds awesome! You should take a picture of it and post it on this thread so we can get a looksy. How did you exams go? I hope you did amazing!!! Now that they're done you can get to updating!!! YAY UPDATES!!!! 

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Posted: 15 April 2012 at 5:54pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Richie-Rich

FINALLY! :D
You know that feeling when you feel so elated, that your heart totally inflates for a moment?!
When all you can do is smile, and smile, and smile, AND smile, and know that you will probably be smiling like a fool for the rest of the day?!
YEAH! So that was ME after reading my name up there! :D
THANK YOU for the dedication! <3 :D

Will come back and edit this soon! :)
Can't wait to read the chapter! <3

*EDIT :

So much of angst! :'(
I usually have tears welling up in my eyes at the slightest of things!
I didn't cry this time though! No, not even those misty eyes!
It was almost as if my heart had frozen!
Do you have any idea how painfully my heart constricted when I read that mangalsutra line?
It hurt, dude! :(

The start and the end was done so beautifully! 
And that line about their heartbeats matching for a mere second...Beautiful! <3

And now that I was thinking, I guess I agree with what Drish wrote in the previous comment!
It wasn't that he was still thinking about his Di, (Okay yeah, he was!) , but considering what you wrote about the Ma monologues, he was only trying to hold on to any reason that would make her stay!
It is that way, isn't it? 
I hope it is! :)

Brilliantly written! <3
Hope you get time to update this soon! :D

YAY! I love your long comments. It makes my heart jump with joy, no kidding!

Awww, you are SO sweet. But your name was up there because you deserved to be up there & if I feel something from my heart, I am not afraid to show it <3
After all, you and I are Rich & Rach :D

Oh my my, I hope I didn't make the update TOO emotional :$ I feel bad now!
Khushi's statement about mangalsutra got to me too... Just the fact that she accepted the separation hurts real bad :(

Yayy, you are the second person who picked up on the small scene about their heartbeats meeting for a slight moment. SO GLAD you liked it XD

You and Drishti - love you girls! Love how you both know me so well <3
I promise I will not shatter your hopes ;)

Thank you so so so much for liking the chapter and dropping by to leave such a wonderful comment behind <3

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Posted: 15 April 2012 at 5:57pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by LyssaPie

THAT WAS A MIND BLOWING UPDATE!

I love that Anjali talked to Karan and he told the truth

Poor Arnav thought he's giving her time but ofc she though he's ignoring her

what she said to him now made sense as it was heart breaking

Thank you sooo very much for liking the update!
Glad you liked the convo b/w Karan & Anjali :) It was much needed
Arnav & Khushi are probably right in their own wrong ways - ironic, isn't it?

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