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About Last Night THREAD 3**Part 27 - 37** (Page 109)

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Posted: 17 April 2012 at 1:47am | IP Logged
loved it!!!!!!!!!!1

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Posted: 17 April 2012 at 1:58am | IP Logged
Maya lady everytime i think this chapter is superb then you prove me wrong every day.. My Favorite parts are 

1. Khushi necklace not being able to do her work of tying the necklace was cute.
2. Arnav's feelings in the initial para. It was fabulously written.
3. Arnav asking her to not stay overnight.
4. Khushi supporting Arnav in her thoughts and justifying his gussa.
5. Is Yash for Anjali.. Awwie. I want to see them together already.
6. And then the subtle jealousy that Arnav felt, wah wah..
7. Their final convo.. Especially Arnav saying about babies.
8. Thanks for the PM>
Totally it was 



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Posted: 17 April 2012 at 2:07am | IP Logged
I think I am going to run out of words very soon, because I feel that I keep repeating myself in every comment. Hon, you leave me absolutely speechless after every part of yours. 

That part was...beautiful. The subtle way you hinted at jealousy without specifically stating it, was amazingly well done! I hope to write as well as you one day, but till then I can just dream! You did a fantastic job with that! In such few words you told us so much about the emotions in Khushi, the emotions in Arnav, and the dynamics of everything.

I even loved the interaction with Khushi and Arnav towards the end. A lot of people would have resulted that with Khushi fighting with Arnav, adn then a misunderstanding, etc etc. But it was very maturely handled. I loved how Arnav bit back his anger, and told Khushi that he needed her to stay with him. I think it's this possessive nature of Arnav that sets him apart from the other men out there. 

I wonder what will happen in the next part! I am very excited to know! Whatever you do in the next part will surely have me all excited! I look forward to your updates! :D

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Posted: 17 April 2012 at 2:07am | IP Logged
Obsessive and jealous Arnav..the last line by arnav was nice..
 
amazing update and thanks for the pm..
 

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Posted: 17 April 2012 at 2:12am | IP Logged
LOLhahahaha Jealous Arnav is so cute...he cnt let his wifie stay away from home...n ummm why m feeing dis Yash hs sme significant role in coming chapters
thnx for PM

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Posted: 17 April 2012 at 2:24am | IP Logged
Lovely dear!!!
Arnav has kid in mind...doesn't he??

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Posted: 17 April 2012 at 2:24am | IP Logged
ah... arnav complimented her... :)
luvd it
thnx fr the update 

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