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About Last Night THREAD 3**Part 27 - 37** - Page 60

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Posted: 12 years ago
 awesome update loved it loved how he did not react like we expected him to and instead supported her decision by letting her know snake is so disgusting his behavior will make them realize he is up to something loved the moment he realized he was scared she was there to make him feel protected loved it that was another awesome update thanks for the pm

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Posted: 12 years ago
 Indeed, factoring in his temper was part of the daily negotiation of living with this man; she wouldn't know what to do without it.

That was bang on! I don't know how you manage to make such astute observations! πŸ˜ƒ Loved the chapter as usual... Do continue soon- and thanks for the PM!
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome amazin part..loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago

It immersed me and created whole aura..I lived it!

wonderful - that's the strength of your work...
 
Beautiful unfolding..πŸ‘
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Posted: 12 years ago
you know you write so realistic.
Khushi did not have to do anything to placate her hubby.
Love their relationship :) 
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Posted: 12 years ago
Have read the last 3 parts in one go! Methinks I like this new changing ASR much more, lol!  Too much to expect the leopard to change his spots but love the way he stops and thinks about how things will affect Khushi!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Why did it have the end?? :'(

I kept reading, and I was like, "I hope it doesn't finish here, I hope it doesn't finish here, I hope it doesn't finish here..." 

You surprised me with Arnav's reaction again! I was seriously expecting a full-blown ASR to tell off Khushi for disobeying him, but man, what he did, had my mouth dropping open in shock, and re-reading that bit to make sure that I hadn't imagined what I had read :p

I LOVED reading it!  When Arnav questioned about the bell, and it led to Shyam maliciously singling out Khushi, and then Arnav's anger, with Khushi silently calming him down, telling him that she wasn't hurt by placing her hand on his thigh, and then Arnav rectifying his mistake by taking out his wife for a drive, and occasionally covering her hands with his to make sure she was there, to tell her that he loved her, and silently apologise to her for everything he says and does without thinking.

The last bit was the icing on the cake. I loved how Arnav, could not find the words to tell Khushi that he was afraid of what would happen to Anjali, of what is going to happen in the future. Of how the stress was slowly creeping up on him. 

And Khushi, did not probe him further for details. She understood his hesitancy, took him to bed and massaged his head - the perfect remedy for letting the stress leave your shoulders and for a person to think clearly. 

Loved the update! Thanks for the PM! :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
To fellow fashionistas:
What Khushi wore on the bike ride:


Edited by Inked - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
 finally was able to read all the three updates which i had missed and all were awsme i m lovng the way u r handling the shayam issue.

bikeee yeee i think bike ride is one of the most romantic thing to do wen low.


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Posted: 12 years ago
Cool
He took her for a bike ride.
It was a very beautiful update.the couple getting more comfortable with each other and of course the bonding is getting stronger.
Count your days Shyam!!!!