Hats off,dear!👏 I have always admired ur style of writing! But with this update,u took it to a whole,new,higher level! M more than amazed by the way u turned the story around in one single update! I was expecting anger,fights,confrontations and passion,of course and look what I got!
The most beautiful apology ever and an even better act of forgiveness! Loved it to the core!
Cant wait for tomorrow's update..
Thanks for the pm! And heartiest congratulations for the new thread!🤗
And, sometimes, they simply trusted their bodies to speak for them.
Arnav allowed Khushi to lead. She was experiencing a tumult of emotions: anger, disappointment, sorrow--each bringing with it its own physical counterpart. He responded to her needs and gave her what she demanded in each moment.
Khushi initiated a kiss that asked, 'didn't you realize that it was always you?' Arnav deepened the kiss to convey 'I'm so very sorry.' She pushed him away to scold, 'I hate you.' He pulled her beneath him to beg, 'forgive me.'
That was beautiful! I loved reading the entire part! Thank you for the PM! This is one of my absolute favourite stories! :D
PS: Sorry for the essay comment :p I couldn't help myself but keep writing about how amazing it was :p
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