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IPKKND OS : I Will Wait For You, Part 3 Page 21 ! (Page 24)

priyah_reddy Senior Member
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Posted: 27 April 2012 at 5:41am | IP Logged
Hayley I literally had tears after reading this :)

Absolutely splendid job :) loved it to shreds ...

Wow was heart wrenching ...

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Posted: 27 April 2012 at 6:59am | IP Logged

Hayley.Hug

 
It was something out of a fairy tale I guess, something that you have always cherished all your life, but never have a chance to express, and one day there comes when it is lost in the evils of this world, leaving you with a weeping heart having nothing but sorrow pouring out of it.
 
 
 
I wont say that I cried, because I really dont cry all that much, really takes something big for me to cry, but yes I was on the verge of letting my tears escape. Their ecastsy, the kind of feeling of guilt that is all over him, how those woods were nothing but events of treachery for him now.Embarrassed
 
 
 
You seriously, are an amazing writer, and as much as I am a sore loser at commenting, this update definetly made me commenting. Sure I had to think for a good 2 minutes, about the story until it came back to me, leaving me mystfied by the way you have played with words to portray something that is only beyond purity.Embarrassed
 
 
Thankyou for the update, and ofcourse the email too.Hug
 
 
And what ever happened of 'Where Happiness Lives', is it on hold or something?, or did I miss getting email's to its updates?Confused
 
 
 


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Posted: 27 April 2012 at 12:25pm | IP Logged
BEAUTIFUL!!!Embarrassed

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Posted: 27 April 2012 at 2:49pm | IP Logged
Hayley! This was heartrending :( 
I just finished read a tearjerking book and now i came here and read your chapter. Ahh i'm totally in the depression zone. This was so sad. Why did she die :( My eyes were wet whilst reading it. Sad yet beautiful <3 

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Posted: 27 April 2012 at 6:10pm | IP Logged
It was really good! I cant wait for the next update thanks for the email!

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Posted: 27 April 2012 at 7:04pm | IP Logged
beautifully written. it was satisfying in the way i can imagine and feel arnav's regret that he has to live with now
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Posted: 27 April 2012 at 9:14pm | IP Logged
Wow! That was breath taking.

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Posted: 28 April 2012 at 9:13pm | IP Logged
Beautiful beautiful!
Heartwrenching end, but absolutely beautifully written.
Pls give us a happy OS too, plz?

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