Fan Fictions

India-Forums

   
Fan Fictions
Fan Fictions

NoSuchThingAsForever: Diary Entry Pg11 26thApril (Page 10)

janu1610 IF-Rockerz
janu1610
janu1610

Joined: 27 March 2008
Posts: 6544

Posted: 16 April 2012 at 6:32am | IP Logged
   


unknown. IF-Dazzler
unknown.
unknown.

Joined: 28 January 2010
Posts: 2850

Posted: 16 April 2012 at 10:19am | IP Logged
amazing ff
and nice part
cont soon

harneet <3
KaJen_addiction IF-Dazzler
KaJen_addiction
KaJen_addiction

Joined: 27 February 2011
Posts: 3329

Posted: 16 April 2012 at 12:23pm | IP Logged
very nice part!
so Armaan nd Riddhima r friends now! gr8!!!
i think Armaan has fallen 4 her!
cont soon
thnx 4 pm

~Sunita~

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

-Afia-

diyaa1pk Goldie
diyaa1pk
diyaa1pk

Joined: 01 January 2010
Posts: 1451

Posted: 18 April 2012 at 2:16am | IP Logged
Nice and sweet...contnu soon

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

-Afia-

MidnightMusings IF-Sizzlerz
MidnightMusings
MidnightMusings

Joined: 12 January 2010
Posts: 11741

Posted: 18 April 2012 at 3:32am | IP Logged
Continue soon!!Big smile

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

-Afia-

ARKJ_4EVER IF-Rockerz
ARKJ_4EVER
ARKJ_4EVER

Joined: 09 October 2010
Posts: 7097

Posted: 18 April 2012 at 11:50am | IP Logged
Hey Afia...hi ..sorry couldn't comment on the previous part also but both were so awesome!!! love them both...

haha so first day of Armaan n that difference in opinion about forever talk was great!!! well most of the time u don't know the meaning of Forever , a while u think u know but it's not necessarily that nah...
then Riddhima's character is amazing!!!
Aww they became friends...n the rain!!! love it...surely something has changed!!
Oh so sad for Riddhima , she really endured a lot n that requires lots of courage n strength, she's indeed brave!!
Sahar also is really a very nice friend...well considering she has given a chance for Armaan to drop Riddhima homeLOL...Aww Armaan's so cute when asking for Riddhima's number...love the parts!!!!
Thanks 4 the pm
Take care

P.S hope your first day at your new school went well :D

cont soon
Hug
Pranishta

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

-Afia-

-Afia- Senior Member
-Afia-
-Afia-

Joined: 16 March 2010
Posts: 603

Posted: 25 April 2012 at 7:04pm | IP Logged

Dear Diary

Today I met this guy Armaan Malik. At first I thought he's one of those jerks, but I was wrong. We did have our little scene in Miss D's class, but who I met after that was someone totally different. He asked me about my life & without thinking I told him everything, almost everything. What surprised me was when he promised me that he'll always be there for me. Not everyday do you meet a guy who promises you this right? I hardly know this guy & there was no reason for me to believe him but I did when I looked him in the eye. He dropped me off home & he seems like a nice guy. I want to trust him but I can't not after what happened the last time I trusted a guy. I really miss Mom & Dad  I wish they were here then I wouldn't have to go through all this'.

_______________________________________________________________


I wasn't going to update anything but i'm getting bore here sitting alone & staring at the hospital walls

Have you guys ever noticed how boring hospital walls are? I think they need some color. Anyways so as i was saying  this is a dairy entry of Riddhima. I'll be posting a lot these as the story goes. 

My School is really really hard these days & i know this is a  really small entry but my brain isn't working right now all i can think about is hot chocolate i wish i could get it. some advice never let your friends stay over night with you in hospital they are of no use they would just sleep on the extra bed,  have food, play Xbox 360 & Skip school & say we're doing this for you Ermm so yeah coming back to this read if you want to & don't if you don't want to LOL this is really lame nothing that you don't know just that she writes it in her diary Okay I'm done here

Good Morning 



P.S PM'S will be sent Later 




Edited by Wish_Al - 25 April 2012 at 7:10pm

The following 4 member(s) liked the above post:

angelic_ridzycuteshilpaRhea.KaJen--Rose--

-Afia- Senior Member
-Afia-
-Afia-

Joined: 16 March 2010
Posts: 603

Posted: 25 April 2012 at 7:10pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ..Ashi_KaJen..

Originally posted by ..Ashi_KaJen..

res


I cant believe u actually targetted me for not edittng my reserves :O

Im pathetically busy Afiaaa! Hmmphhh I iz Gussa with Juuu
Badda Waalaa..Jaa Katti!

and im not edittng but qouting the res. since my phone is acting gay with edittng the comments. dont mind..tere hi comments zyada ho rahe hai :P

Okay So like always I loved the part...
from them meeting in the Cafe to the walk..the confession ..the dropping off to home..
especially the window scene was really cute :)

just a lil suggestion...
Just slow down the pace of the story a bit or make the scenes more descriptive so the pace of the story will be balanced.
like in the first part itself Riddhima first dislked Armaan and they bickered. then the show down in class and then he asks her for a walk and she surprisingly agrees and whatever happened after that..u getting the point?

just make the scenes more descriptive of their feelings and whats going on in their minds..give more reasoning for the acttons and reactions.
the plot will look much more relatable.
sorry if that was a lil harsh. bt since ur putting so much into this ff so i thought of suggesting u this to make it even more better


take care :)

I Know i should slow down I've been telling myself that but i just really wanna finish it soon but now i'll try & go slow & be more descriptive Smile

Go to top

Related Topics

  Topics Author Replies Views Last Post
Dear Diary... [MG] Epilogue [Page 117]

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 109 110

Author: Sameeha786   Replies: 879   Views: 136752

Sameeha786 879 136752 21 February 2012 at 3:05am by queenofdarkness
FF -My wife's diary Upd PG 13 15/11

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 16 17

Author: M2NZ   Replies: 128   Views: 11363

M2NZ 128 11363 16 January 2012 at 4:54am by AngelicDesires
Diary Of Riddhima Gupta/AR - (25.05.11/Inc Upd P3)

2 3

Author: MrsSobtiGrover   Replies: 20   Views: 3223

MrsSobtiGrover 20 3223 25 May 2011 at 8:50am by MrsSobtiGrover
MY DEAR DIARY

2

Author: -wild-   Replies: 11   Views: 948

-wild- 11 948 19 October 2010 at 3:34am by jannat4ever
meri diary mein chupa hain meri kahani-mayurff

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 18 19

Author: snehajose17   Replies: 151   Views: 19416

snehajose17 151 19416 15 August 2010 at 12:46am by Anamika.5

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category / Channels
Forums

Fan Fictions Topic Index

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.

Popular Channels :
Star Plus | Zee TV | Sony TV | Colors TV | SAB TV | Life OK

Quick Links :
Top 100 TV Celebrities | Top 100 Bollywood Celebs | About Us | Contact Us | Advertise | Forum Index