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OS: Don't Leave Me Alone! (Page 3)

rana5 Goldie
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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 3:29am | IP Logged
What a lovely OS.  All of your stories bring out an emotion in me. I have a smile on my faceSmile

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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 3:37am | IP Logged
Smitaaa...my FAVORITEST OS writer...EmbarrassedClapClap

as always u knw...m *SPEECHLESS* ClapStar

it was beautiful...just like their love !!! Big smile StarClap
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i hope it'll be as simple to get her back as the way u have mentioned...i dont want him to go the devdas or majnu way...so not his personality..!!! Big smile

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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 3:41am | IP Logged
Such a cute OS.. Day Dreaming 

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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 3:52am | IP Logged
That was gorgeouse! SO visual, it's played like a movie in my head! I loved it! He just cant live without her!
 
 
I hope at some point once he starts to repent his behaviour that Khushi Understands what he cant express in words! Poor guy! I know his behaviour is bad, but your heart breaks for him everytime you see him sad and remorseful!
 
 
Because... you know that in essentials he IS a good person! He is just impulsive and angry and stubborn! These things make his life difficult! But his heart is actually Gold! I think anyone ELSE playing ASR and we would NOT see all this!
 
 
Good one Sobati... and also the writing and visualization of Arnav is second to non!
 
 
Your OS bought me to tears!

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svmi Senior Member
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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 3:56am | IP Logged
I love your style of writing and expression. I have always enjoyed your OS but do not remember leaving a comment. Today i
could not help.  I loved it. I guess like most of us I just want these two toget together so that i  can et on with my own life. I do want ASR to suffer too much. I would be happy if they copy your OS to show this.

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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 3:57am | IP Logged
wow.. loved it.. so nice..

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BarunSanayaHM Goldie
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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 4:19am | IP Logged
loved it 
and it was aaj mosum hai suhana kapade dhone ka he bahana

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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 4:24am | IP Logged
simply adorable! being left speechless by buaji's teasing was hilarious... laxmi is the one who misses her LOL... the great asr can't really admit that he is smitten with his wife, can he?
 
your os is a breath of fresh air in an otherwise dismal day

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